The Girl that could Fly fanfic

Life doesn't have a rewind button, but it it did, I surely press it. It all started during the science fair. In Heburt Jr High, you have to be

smart, no exceptions, well mabey me. My dad is a teacher there so I get free admition. Anyway I set up a really cool anemometer out

side by the parking lot. The judges came over to my table shortly after vewing the 15th volcanoe, "Ok, Keeley, show me what you

got." My science teacher, Mr Bumen said. "This is an anemometer and it measures wind speed." I said. A small gush a gentel wind

blowed, barly making it move. "All right, thank you," Mr Brumen said. As the judges left I thought of something to stall them, "Wait!" I

yelled. The judges didn't bother to turn around, "Oh stupid wind, you not even powerfull enough to make the cheap plastic move!

Make it MOVE!" I yelled. Another gust of wind passed. The sudenly, the wind got faster, the clouds became dark, as the wind knocked

over tables. My anemoeter moved like crazy as I ducked for cover. Cars were turned over, volcano goo was every where, this had to

stop, "Oh go away you stupid wind!" The wind got slower, the clouds, whiter, and the sky, brighter, until everything was nice and sunny

again. The students and judges came out from their hiding spots. Everyone stared at me, untouched, unharmed, unlike everyone else.

"Keeley, office, now." Mr Brumen said. I pouted as he marched me to his office, ssuper[i]

Cool~! :D

As we went into his office, I might of slapped his tupe off of him. "You are not helping," He said to me. I

rolled my eyes as I flicked my blonde hair of of my shoulders. "Can you explain what happened Keeley?" he

asked sturnly. "Um how do you expect me to know?" I replied. He sat down on the chair, "Some how you

were untouched," I turned the other way avoiding the quetion. "Well?" He asked. after a few silent moments

the door was busted down. A small army of men came in in blue uniforms. At the end of their almost never

ending line was a beautiful woman. She had jet black hair and peircing blue eyes, "Keeley Davis," the

woman said. I stepped forward in horror, "Yes," She grabbed my wrist, "Your being deported," Mr Bruman

did not even try to help me. And with a small smirk on the womans face, they loded me into a big old army

van and I was official out of the school zone. Now don't get me wrong, I hate school as much as the next 13

year old, but this was not how I imagined it to be. "Where are we going?" I asked the woman. "it's

classified." "Will my parents know?" I asked. "No," The woman replied. We stopped at a building that looked

like a jail. "Welcome home, freak." The woman stiffeled a laugh as she pushed me into the doors.
If you guys want a charrie in this don't be afraid to ask!
here are their pictures:
keeley

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mysterious woman

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The men shoved me into what I think was a bedroom or a holding cell. It was grey everywhen, all except,

what was that hair? It was. The girl was sitting on the top bunk, her red hair was tied back into a hair band.

"Fresh blood," She said. "Um yeah," I replied. "I'm Aspen," the girl said, jumping off of the top bunk, "And it

looks like you're my roomate." I nodded, "Why am I here?" "Cause you are a Freak, and this is where

Freaks go," She said. "Gee, thanks," I mumbled. "No, no, that's what were called here. Oh and this place is

called I.N.S.A.N.E.." Aspen exclaimed. "Well I'm not a Freak." I said. "Oh really?" she asked, "Yes," She

poured water on the floor, "Watch," she did a hand movement and it freazed, "H-how did you do that?" I

asked. "Cause I can." she said. She looked at a clip board, "And according to this, you can create weather,"

She didn't even give me time to respond, "C'me on its time for dinner" She pulled my hand and took me to

the mess hall. Unlike my bedroom the mess hall looked beautiful. It had chandeliars hanging from the celing

and silk tableclothes. Aspen and I sat next to each other. The waiters came in with ouur meals. Every one

had different meals, they gave me grilled cheese and Aspen pizza, "How do they know what to give?" I

asked. Aspen shrugged, "I don't know," we ate our meals in silence. A bell rang 20 minuets later, "Time for

rooms," Aspen said. I let her take me back to our bunk, "Wait whats your power?" I asked, "I-I dont

remember." Aspen replied.

Heres Aspen:

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OMG I READ THIS BOOK FOR MY 4th GRADE B.O.B. AND IT WAS EPIC I READ IT LIKE FIVE TIMES and this definitely lives up to the actual book. Keep writing!

I did notice a few spelling/grammar errors, and I don't really like your format, like how you fit dialogue into two paragraphs, but other than that, ding ding ding ding!

Epic!! :) :) :) Put Alia in it! :) :) MORE!!!!!!!

alia...hmmm..pm me the details!

Aspen is hot.

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sorry, that was funny
PART 3 UNDER CONSRTUCTION

No we're screaming Lol. Crow makes her crazy forever!! They dont think she goes in asylum so they take her here! :) :) Aspen is hot but Im a girl. If I was a boy I'd be all Hi! Hi Aspen! Hahahaha! Yeah, Aspen! Hi! I'm Teddi! Hi!

Frizzlepuss wrote:OMG I READ THIS BOOK FOR MY 4th GRADE B.O.B. AND IT WAS EPIC I READ IT LIKE FIVE TIMES and this definitely lives up to the actual book. Keep writing!

Whats the book called?

The Girl Who Could Fly by Victoria Forester...

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Okie, heres where Alia comes in, I changed her power, cause crazy is a mental issue. Oh and Im trying a new format<3

"What do you mean you dont know?" I asked her. "I don't know, this always happens," Aspen replied. I stared at her like she was crazy. She sighed and looked at me."Come on, I know who can fix it," She grabbed my arm and pulled me into the dorm across the hall.

We walked into the room that lookced exactly like ours. I smelt, what is this smoke?
"Alia? are you in here?" Apesn asked.

"Im metitating Aspen, what is the problem,"

"I need help,"

"You forgot you power again didn't you,"

"Yes,"

The girl, Alia had carmel blonde hair and grey eyes. She was sitting in a circle of candels with her eyes closed. She stood up and came towards Aspen. ASpen didn't move. Me? I ran and hid under a pillow. Unfourtunatly, the was a skull under the pillow. I screamed and jumped onto Aspen right before Alia could touch her.

"Keeley!"

"Excuse me, Keeley, I need to heal her."

"Heal her?"

"Yes, for that is my power, to heal, injouries and forgetting the power you have,"

"But how did she forget it?"

"The food, your new so it doesn't have an effect yet."

I jumped off of Aspen and sat on the bed. I watched as Alia touched Aspen's forehead with her finger. Aspen's eyes became brighter and her face had more color. She smiled brightly as she tugged my arm.

"This is Keeley, she thinks she has no powers,"

"I can fix that,"

Alia came towards me. I ran away from her in a cricle formotion.

"Get away from me, NOW,"

A crack of thunder cried from the sky and Lightning struck Alia's bed.

"Ah, weather powers, nice"

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Oh and here is Keeley's pic

How old is the person in that picture? She looks like she could be 8-28 years old!

the girls 14
shes on youtube on teens react

Ah...

Yay I love it :)👍

I looked at Alia like she was crazy

"No,"

"Yes,"

"NO,"

"YES"

"NO!"

A gust of wind swirled around me and attcked Alia. Aspen cried out,

"Keeley, stop!"

The wind dissapered, sending Alia plopping onto the floor. Her straight brown hair now, a frizzy mess. I heard heavy foot steps out side. Before I could see who it is, the door slammed open. The woman from ealier came in with several guards.

"Bed time, hon,"

The guards lifted me and Aspen into our bunks. I was screaming my head off, Aspen, on the other hand was quiet, too quiet. When they threw us into the room, Aspen was sleeping. I rolled my eyes laughing in my head. I sat on my bed, thinking about what Aspen said.
Weather powers?
Aspen was mumbleing something in her sleep. "Where, where" I stared at her confinsgly. I heard a knock on the door, I went to open it. I opened the door and a figure in a hoodie grabbed me. I tried to scream put her put a paper towel on my mouth and my eyes drifted shut.
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heres Alia:

Haha yah! Btw you post in mess hall or DIE! Haha jk jk I love it