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    Post by Pjo27 8/11/2013, 9:19 pm

    Name: Summer Jones
    Age: 13
    Gender: Girl
    Eyes: Bright green
    Hair: Light brown hair that reflects light well. In a braid.
    Height: 6'2"
    Body Type: lean
    Skin Color: Pale
    God Parent: Aphrodite
    Mortal Parent: Andrew Jones
    Country of Origin: United States
    Pets: A small dog named Ellenor.
    Talents: A natural fighter. She has the skill of Athena's child if fighting. The years in the wild helped.
    Weapon**: Bow for defending. The bow is madde of wood from a pine tree. Celestial bronze arrow tip.A quiver that holds up to 20 arrows. Celestial bronze dagger.
    Flaws: To much pride and confidence. Will abandon her side to be ruler or power hungry.
    Powers(must relate to god parent;): Being able to look what each boy finds pretty. (Only really helps on the weak minded. She never likes to do it.) Can be used once a day on three boys at a time for 3 hours.
    Life Before CHB*: Her dad started drinking her mom left her when she was born. He died in a car crash. Summer ran around the country alone. She made a bow for hunting.  Soon a saytr found her and took Summer to Camp Half-Blood. It was exciting, finding a home.
    RP Example*: It was 5:00 a.m.. Everybody was asleep. Summer woke up. She got ready, dressed, brushed her teeth an hair. The Aphrodite Cabin did not welcome her. She was to sporty. They said Aphrodite was going to unclaim her or never go out in public. That did not matter to Summer. She continued living her life. When she was ready, Summer walked around Camp Half-Blood. The soft breeze blew on her face. Everything seemed perfect.
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    Edited for the 2nd time.


    Last edited by Pjo27 on 8/16/2013, 7:51 pm; edited 9 times in total
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    Post by Kendall 8/11/2013, 9:28 pm

    Charmspeak isn't allowed.

    How are pride and confidence flaws -- does she have too much of both?

    Can her hellhound shadow-travel? How small is it?

    Does your character know her friend was a Roman demigod? How old was your character when Aphrodite left her father?
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    Post by Morgan Landry 8/12/2013, 3:50 am

    Why does she own a hell hound? I think they're reserved for children of chthonian deities, Percy being an exception.

    She has the skill of Athena's best child? Are you referring to her intelligence or her combat skills? And if so, how come?

    How come Summer and her friend didn't kill each other? Normally, that's what Roman and Greek demigods do when they meet.
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    Post by Pjo27 8/12/2013, 6:53 am

    I edited her.
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    Post by Morgan Landry 8/12/2013, 9:01 am

    It doesn't matter whether they had no idea or not. Roman and Greeks kill each other regardless, it's written in the books.

    And still, I don't think a daughter of Aphrodite could be as skilled in fighting as the best child of Athena. Honestly, even Piper couldn't beat Annabeth in my opinion. Nor could Silena. I think I have to say no to this.
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    Post by Kendall 8/12/2013, 2:07 pm

    To add on a few points: I'm pretty sure Aphrodite would have had to leave her daughter as soon as she was born and with her father.

    Is her power something she can turn on and off?
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    Post by Pjo27 8/12/2013, 8:35 pm

    I edited it again.
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    Post by Kendall 8/12/2013, 8:44 pm

    So I'm assuming by the last part of her Power section that she can turn it off at will, so.... How many times a day can she use the power and how long does it last each time? Can she only use it on one person at a time or can she use it only multiple people?

    What breed of dog does she have?

    By her last flaw, can we assume she's very power-hungry too?

    You should maybe specify more about her life before going on the run and how she met this other half blood.
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    Post by Pjo27 8/12/2013, 8:52 pm

    Edited again. (For the 3rd time.)
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    Post by Kendall 8/13/2013, 2:44 am

    You haven't answered my question about how long she can use her power each time.
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    Post by Pjo27 8/13/2013, 6:10 am

    It was edited again.
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    Post by Kendall 8/15/2013, 1:10 am

    I'm going to say no to her meeting a Roman demigod, so you'll need to change that part.
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    Post by Morgan Landry 8/16/2013, 1:49 pm

    What is her bow made of? Does she have quiver, and if yes, how many arrows does it normally contain?
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    Post by Pjo27 8/16/2013, 7:06 pm

    I edited it.
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    Post by Kendall 8/16/2013, 7:10 pm

    Try reducing the time limit of her powers by half.

    Also, I assume her arrow tips are Celestial bronze now that she's at camp?
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    Post by Pjo27 8/16/2013, 7:14 pm

    I do not understand reducing the limit of power by halfway.
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    Post by Kendall 8/16/2013, 7:19 pm

    I'm talking about how long the power lasts -- from 6 hours to 3.
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    Post by Pjo27 8/16/2013, 7:52 pm

    Edited again.
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    Post by Kendall 8/16/2013, 7:54 pm

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