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    Saphira McLeah

    Percabethlover
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    Female
    Number of posts : 6
    Age : 26
    Registration date : 2013-08-15

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    Post by Percabethlover 8/15/2013, 10:24 pm

    Name: Saphira McLeah
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: Grey
    Hair: Golden
    Height: 5'4
    Body Type: Mesomorph
    Skin Color: White
    God Parent: Athena
    Mortal Parent: Jake McLeah
    Country of Origin: United States
    Pets: None
    Talents: Archery, Sword fighting
    Weapon**: Necklace that stuns opponents for three seconds when middle jewel is pressed. Emits soft light that distracts the brain. Can only be used three times a day. She found it in a package outside on her third birthday.
    Flaws: She is too loyal to friends, thinks she can do better than the gods, and easily gets jealous of people's magic items and powers.
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
    Life Before CHB*: Her dad died when she was four, and she lived in an orphanage until a chimera came and set it to fire. She tried to get people out, but no one survived except for her. She ran from place to place, using her necklace to get away. She ran until she was twelve. Then a satyr found her and brought her to camp.
    RP Example*: Saphira gripped her sword. As the manticore neared, she came up with a plan. She dived to the left before it got her and cut open it's stomach. She smiled as she wiped off her sword. "Well done me." she said and headed back to camp.
    Any notes about your characters: She is bubbly, and happy, she loves making friends, and hates bullies. Watch out if she comes after you with anything, even a stick.


    Last edited by Percabethlover on 8/16/2013, 10:35 am; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by Kendall 8/15/2013, 10:27 pm

    Add two more flaws. Is she too loyal to people?

    Intelligence is not a power. They aren't required.

    Life Before CHB and RP Example must be five sentences long each.

    ... How does her necklace stun people?
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    Number of posts : 6
    Age : 26
    Registration date : 2013-08-15

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    Post by Percabethlover 8/15/2013, 11:19 pm

    Percabethlover wrote:Name: Saphira McLeah
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: Grey
    Hair: Golden
    Height: 5'4
    Body Type: Mesomorph
    Skin Color: White
    God Parent: Athena
    Mortal Parent: Jake McLeah
    Country of Origin: United States
    Pets: None
    Talents: Wisdom
    Weapon**: Necklace that stuns opponents for three seconds when she presses the middle jewel. It emits a soft light that distracts the mind.
    Flaws: She is too loyal to her friends, she thinks she can do better than the gods, and gets jealous when she doesn't get the praise she thinks she deserves.
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
    Life Before CHB*: Her dad died when she was four, and she lived in an orphanage until a chimera came and set it to fire. She tried to fight the chimera, but she was not trained enough. Everyone except her died, and she ran. She ran until she was twelve. Then a satyr found her and brought her to camp.
    RP Example*: Saphira gripped her sword. As the manticore neared, she came up with a plan. She dived to the left before it got her and cut open it's stomach. She watched as it turned to dust, and it's essence returned to Tartarus. She smiled and wiped off her sword. "Well done, me." she muttered to herself.
    Any notes about your characters: She is bubbly, and happy, she loves making friends, and hates bullies. Watch out if she comes after you with anything, even a stick.
    Kendall
    Kendall
    Mr. Moseby
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    Female
    Number of posts : 43512
    Age : 2022
    Registration date : 2008-09-13

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    Post by Kendall 8/15/2013, 11:24 pm

    I suggest, rather than reposting the form, that you use the little Edit button on the top right corner of your post.
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    Post by Percabethlover 8/15/2013, 11:33 pm

    I thought I did.
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    Post by Kendall 8/15/2013, 11:36 pm

    You reposted it by quoting it and editing it there. Just edit your original form, please.

    Also, how did she survive until she got to camp?

    How many times a day can she use her necklace's power? Where did she get it?
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    Post by Percabethlover 8/16/2013, 9:43 am

    Okay I edited it.
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    Post by Daniel 8/16/2013, 10:27 am

    If it looks like you left out some changes in the original form (e.g. intelligence listed as a power.)

    I wouldn't consider wisdom to be a talent.
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    Post by Percabethlover 8/16/2013, 10:36 am

    Ok.
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    Post by Daniel 8/16/2013, 10:40 am


    Approved.

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