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    My first demigod

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    Post by ookamisan 1/6/2014, 10:24 pm

    Name: Cystal Waters
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: Brown
    Hair: Blonde
    Height: 5'2
    Birthday: July 10
    Body Type: Skinny
    Skin Color: tanish
    God Parent: Athena
    Mortal Parent: Dave Waters
    Country of Origin: US of A
    Pets: white husky puppy, about 4 months old
    Talents: Weaving, drawing,knitting and swordplay
    Weapon**: A CB 3-foot sword
    Personality: A very creative and fun,loyel,friendly, kinda shy but also very brave and serious in battle. She's a bit nerdy and tends to use her laptop,draw,read. She like to draw, knit, read and swim. She hates war(so she don't like Ares that much.) Getting a bad grade, clowns(it's long story) and of course like every child of Athena, spiders. She dislikes that she can't get a kitty. She's afraid she may never get a true friend.
    Flaws: Afraid of snakes, never leaves friends behind even when her life in danger, allergic to cats, fatal flaw is pride
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
    Life Before CHB*: Before Camp Half Blood, no monsters attacked her until she found out that she was a demigod. She had a good life, a nice room and was going to be a big sister. She met her satyr on the second day of school in the 5th grade. When when her stepmom told her that she was a demigod her satyr told her that it wasn't safe when monsters started coming. When he told her that he was a satyr he took his hat off and showed her his horns. he was about to take off his shoes to show his hoofs but she turned around and said "No I know what's under." Right after school she went to pack some clothes and food for her journey. She ran away from home at the age of eleven, because she thought her step mom was her real mom. When she told her that she was a demigod and found out that she wasn't she was angry and sad at  her stepmother that she ran away.

    RP Example*: I walked into the sunny courtyard, and sat down by the fountain. I pull out my sketchbook and resume drawing something I've been working on for a while. Drawing was fun for me, and I liked how the sun lights up the pages. Some people may think that drawing is a bit boring, but I think it's fabulous. I finally finish the drawing and decide to draw the fountain.
    Any notes about your characters: the stepmother became the stepmother when Crystel was nine months old and the dad told the stepmother that Crystel when they got married


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    Post by Morgan Landry 1/7/2014, 6:28 am

    Why did you put up your character form two times? I moved one to the Old/Unneeded Topics Forum.

    For the pet, I do think you mean 'husky'. How old is her dog?

    Being intelligent is more of a strength rather than a talent.

    You have to have three lines for the personality, so please work a bit on that.

    How did she find out she was a demigod?

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    Post by xXVickyXx 1/7/2014, 7:17 pm

    I shouldn't post here,have mercy on me please admins,but I wanted to say she should have gray eyes,instead of brown.Since she is a child of Athena.
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    Post by Alyssa 1/7/2014, 8:04 pm

    again sorry admins...

    vicky, just because she has the same mother as Annabeth does not mean she needs grey eyes.
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    Post by Morgan Landry 1/10/2014, 1:54 am

    Um, guys, I know you want to help, and I appreciate it but please don't post on other people's forms.

    Vicky> What Alyssa said. There are loads of Athena kids here who don't have gray eyes.
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    Post by ookamisan 2/8/2014, 9:50 pm

    edited (sorry, didn't know i had to post here)
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    Post by Steve Rogers 2/8/2014, 10:56 pm

    "When she found out that she wasn't she was anger and sad that she ran away"
    I think you mean than she was "angry".
    Did she run away because she was angry and sad? Or did she run away because she was angry, and then she felt sad about running away?
    How did she find out that she was a demigod? Did she find out when a monster attacked her? Or did her mother tell her (And that's when she found out she was "adopted"?)
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    Post by ookamisan 2/8/2014, 11:27 pm

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    Post by Morgan Landry 2/9/2014, 7:05 am

    I'd advise to add another talent.

    How did she find out she was a demigod? How did she know about Camp Half-Blood and its location? How did she fight monsters off during her journey?
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    Post by ookamisan 2/10/2014, 12:00 am

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    Post by Morgan Landry 2/10/2014, 2:04 am

    How did her stepmother know she was a demigod?
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    Post by ookamisan 2/25/2014, 11:03 pm

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    Post by Kendall 2/26/2014, 8:43 pm

    Add some more to her personality that doesn't have to do with her likes/dislikes.
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    Post by ookamisan 4/22/2014, 12:27 am

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    Post by Steve Rogers 4/23/2014, 10:49 am

    Approved.

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