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    Norse Sabrina Smith-Eir(Goddess of Healing)

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    Post by John Samarintos 5/9/2014, 6:02 pm

    Name:Sabrina Smith

    Age:17

    Gender:Female

    Eyes:Sparkling green

    Hair:Brunette.

    Height:5,7

    Body Type:Hourglass type body.

    Skin Color:Tan

    God Parent:Eir(Goddess of Healing)

    Mortal Parent:Lauren Smith

    Country of Origin:America

    Pets:Sabrina owns no pets.

    Talents:She is talented at healing even without her powers so things such as treating a patient like a doctor would do. She is talented at fighting with her weapon. She is talented at volleyball.
    Weapon**: Her Weapon:She owns a disc-like weapon. But as a weapon it's like a boomerang that when she throws it at something it hits it then flies back. If she takes away the healing energies(Powers) from the disc-like weapon then it turns into 2 separate fist-weapons. They fit around her fists and they have blades on the end which are Celestial Bronze. The disc-like weapon is Celestial Bronze as-well.

    Eirflower: Her mom gave her 2 Eirflowers(Explained in history) but she didn't know why at that time. Later, she figured out that the Eirflowers are used for healing rituals that can cure even broken bones.(Not ones with no chance of recovery.)

    Personality:Sabrina loves the colors green and red. Green being because that is Eir's color though she doesn't know that. And red because it is the color of flesh in which she heals. Sabrina loves volleyball and the summer and spring. She doesn't like winter or fall that much but she will go out then. Sabrina is also very nice, and beautiful though smart.
    Sabrina is also very flirty.

    Flaws:Sabrina is very prideful. (Physical Flaw) When Sabrina gets hurt she gets hurt even more then someone else would because of her relation to healing. Sabrina is also somewhat depressed about her mom leaving her. She understands that her mom is a goddess yet doesn't care. Sabrina is very trustful. She trusts someone even if they seem like their lying.

    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Sabrina has the ability to heal wounds of all sizes and broken bones. She can heal sword wounds 3 times a day no matter how deep. And broken bones 1 time a day. She can heal broken bones.
    She can put healing energies on her disc-like weapon so that when she holds it above a wound it heals completely. She can do this 2 times a day. She can take the healing energy away the same way as putting it on. She lets the disc conduct her power, but she can make it so it doesn't. Or in another way of saying it she puts her healing power into the disc so that it can do this.

    Life Before CHB*:Sabrina was on the volleyball team at her school. One day, when they were at a match one of the enemy team's members turned out to be a monster. The monster disrupted the game and Sabrina ran outside of the building at the site. She got on her bike that she luckily brought to school that day and rode home quickly. Luckily for her a satyr was in the crowd because he suspected Sabrina was a demi-god. Saying so, the satyr raced after Sabrina and the reason the monster didn't catch her is because the Satyr bought her some time. After doing so the Satyr ran to her house and asked to see Sabrina. Sabrina and the Satyr had a talk that she was a demi-god at they had to get her to Camp Half-Blood. Sabrina agreed and let her mom drive her to Camp Half-Blood. Before they went off though her mom put 2 flowers in a box called Eirflowers and put them in the trunk. When they got to Camp Half-Blood her mom gave her the 2 Eirflowers and explained that her other mom wanted her to have them. She took them and the Satyr and her went into Camp Half-Blood.

    RP Example*:Sabrina was sitting on top of Half-Blood Hill. She was thinking about the fun she would have at this new camp and possibly how it was so different from any other camp. Besides the lava wall and the all the kids of the gods possibly it was like anything else. But, Sabrina had yet to see all the other fascinations. She still sat there looking out over the forest that she knew if she went past the barrier she would probably die.

    Any notes about your characters: Characters yes. John died so this character is 5th.

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    Post by Blaze 5/9/2014, 9:36 pm

    Add two more sentences to your RP example.

    If Eir is the goddess of healing, then is her mortal parent a guy with the name Lauren?

    Lower the power of the eirflowers. A lot.

    The weapons are not allowed to have any special powers. Put those in the powers section.
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    Post by John Samarintos 5/10/2014, 11:01 am

    Edited. Eir like many other gods and goddesses was bisexual so she went with Lauren for the mortal parent.
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    Post by Blaze 5/10/2014, 2:08 pm

    It says "her dad" gave her the Eirflowers. I'm also pretty sure you need a sperm donor if that's going to happen.

    Lower the power of the Eirflowers even more. They have to have a limit at broken bones.

    How would the disc know that the opponent was an enemy? Does it have a conscience? That's not allowed.

    How does she take away the healing powers on her disc? Explain it, and we might allow it.

    Is her last flaw just depression? If not, that really isn't a flaw.
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    Post by John Samarintos 5/10/2014, 2:19 pm

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    Post by Blaze 5/10/2014, 2:30 pm

    "Her dad gave her 2 Eirflowers(Explained in history)"

    According to you, she doesn't have a dad.

    How deep would the broken bone be? You can't have the Eirflowers be that powerful. There's a bunch of sentences that mention this and other things that should've been fixed. Go change those, please.

    How does she let the disc conduct her power? You aren't really explaining this to me.
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    Post by John Samarintos 5/10/2014, 2:36 pm

    Edited and how can a broken bone be deep?
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