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    Tera Phanel daughter of Athena member of the Hunt

    abc123
    abc123


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    Age : 19
    Registration date : 2015-11-15

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    Post by abc123 11/21/2016, 9:52 am

    Demigod:Greek
    Name: Tera Phanel
    Physical Age: 14
    Gender:Female
    Eyes:Grey
    Hair: Redish Brown
    Height: 5'9
    Body Type: Lean and muscular
    Skin Color: Light brown
    God Parent: Athena
    Mortal Parent: Edison Phanel
    Country of Origin: United States of America
    Pets: Timberwolf Hunter Hawk Bella
    Talents: Makes awesome battle strategies
    Weapon**: Celestial bronze bow and 24 arrows, and a celestial bronze dagger
    Personality: Strong, fierce, stern, but logical and kind
    Flaws: Always wants to do it her way. Also, she gets extremely angry and needs to be perfect.
    Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): Can weave the strongest nets out of some bad materiel
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
    Life Before Hunt*: When Tera was born she was helping her father with plans to build a new storage room. She was always the know it all. Then, when she turned 9 a Chimera attacked and killed her dad. After the Chimera killed her dad a group of Saytrs supposed to be police men attracted the Chimera and brought Tera to the orphanage. Then, she was sent to an orphanage and met Sherman, a saytr- orphan. Sherman led Tera to CHB. Then on her 3rd year the hunters visited camp half blood. When they were playing Capture the Flag, she caught the hunters eyes since she made a strategy that almost won the game. So, the hunters asked her to join and she did.
    RP Example*: The Hunt woke up and started to hike of. They been heading to camp half blood since Artimas went missing 3 days ago. Tera has been following a trail with strange prints. They think it is a trail to Artimas.  They stopped at a cave were the prints ended. They looked inside and saw a terrible site.
    Any notes about your characters: None


    Last edited by abc123 on 12/20/2016, 10:11 am; edited 1 time in total
    Kendall
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    Post by Kendall 12/17/2016, 1:06 am

    Add more to her personality -- I'd recommend turning this into 3-4 medium-length sentences.

    Abilities:
    - What do you mean by the strongest nets? Even with bad materials?

    LBH:
    - "When Tera was born she was helping her father with plans to build" --> Build what?
    - How did she survive a Chimera attack?
    - Was Sherman posing as an orphan where she was sent after her dad's death?
    - How old was she when she went to camp?
    - I'm gonna say no to her going on a quest and meeting Artemis and the Hunters. You can say she met them when they were visiting camp though.
    abc123
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    Number of posts : 12
    Age : 19
    Registration date : 2015-11-15

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    Post by abc123 12/20/2016, 10:11 am

    Edited
    Kendall
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    Mr. Moseby
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    Post by Kendall 12/26/2016, 7:17 pm

    You still need to add more to the personality.

    Abilities:
    - You should probably rephrase this as "She can make strong nets with decent materials," since having bad material will vastly affect the quality of the net.

    LBC:
    - When she was born she was helping her dad build things? Or since she was born she was trying to help? Because I can't imagine a baby can do much to help.
    - Talk more about her life before the chimera attack. Did she do well in school? Have many friends?
    - How did she survive the chimera attack?
    - Why did the satyrs not bring her to camp immediately after the attack?

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