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    Jacqueline Peterson

    Jacqueline Peterson
    Jacqueline Peterson


    Female
    Number of posts : 2
    Age : 18
    Registration date : 2016-10-17

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    Post by Jacqueline Peterson 10/17/2016, 9:20 pm

    Name: Jacqueline (Jackie) Peterson
    Age: 11
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: dark brown
    Hair: dark brown, black
    Height: 5'0
    Body Type: Gynaeoid
    Skin Color: Warm Chocolatet
    God Parent: Athena
    Mortal Parent: Estelle (Stella) Peterson
    Country of Origin: America
    Pets: none
    Talents: can act
    Weapon**: bronze sword
    Personality: Fierce. She's smart and you can be easily tricked by her. She has a short temper and loves to write. Don't mess with her.
    Flaws: has a short temper
    Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): can fly, and control rain, lightning, and snow
    Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): can fly, and control rain, lightning, and snow
    Life Before Camp*: Jackie has been sent from school to school getting kicked out of each. She desperately wants to know about her father who her mother had made up. Monsters usually mess things up for her. Athena blessed her mom because she was smarter than most men. Jackie has never slept a good night. She is always getting secret messages.....
    RP Example*:Jacqueline found herself at another boarding school for "troubled" children. She had recently been kicked out of her old school. She honestly hated schools. She had begged her mother to homeschool her. Jacqueline's mother would give her a sad smile and tell her why she needs to work at a "real" job.

    Jacqueline walked up the front steps. Her mother walked closely behind. The place was huge and it was the place she would spend the rest of the school year with exceptions of holiday brakes. Jacqueline sighed. She didn't want to leave her mother, who smelled of chocolate. Mrs. Stricter, the principal, greeted them outside. Then she took Jacqueline in for a tour. Looking back at her mother, Jacqueline gave her mother a please-help-me look.

    After the tour, Mrs. Stricter explained all the rules and there was a lotof rules. Jacqueline stood across Mrs. Stricter, not really listening. "If only dad were here." She thought silently in her brain.
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    Last edited by Jacqueline Peterson on 10/18/2016, 9:06 pm; edited 1 time in total
    Morgan Landry
    Morgan Landry
    High Queen of Narnia


    Female
    Number of posts : 15906
    Registration date : 2011-12-31

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    Post by Morgan Landry 10/18/2016, 10:56 am

    Hi there Jacqueline!

    - Children of the Big Three are not allowed unless you win or buy one, so please change the god parent.
    - What's her sword made of?
    - Add some personality traits to the personality section. Is she generous? Carefree? Aggressive?
    - You need 3 flaws.
    - Please edit the powers according to the new god parent.
    - You need 6 sentences for Life Before Camp.

    Rest looks good!
    Morgan Landry
    Morgan Landry
    High Queen of Narnia


    Female
    Number of posts : 15906
    Registration date : 2011-12-31

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    Post by Morgan Landry 11/3/2016, 8:37 am

    Please reply with "Edited" when you've made the changes. Otherwise, we don't know it's ready to be checked again. Also, please edit everything we ask you to.

    Morgan Landry wrote:- Add some personality traits to the personality section. Is she generous? Carefree? Aggressive?
    - You need 3 flaws.
    - Please edit the powers according to the new god parent.
    - You need 6 sentences for Life Before Camp

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