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    Keeley Stariah - Aphrodite

    Keeley_Star
    Keeley_Star
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    Registration date : 2018-04-02

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    Post by Keeley_Star 4/2/2018, 6:38 pm

    Name: Keeley Stariah
    Age: 11
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: Green
    Hair: Dark Brown
    Height: 5'6"
    Body Type: Lean
    Skin Color: Mocha
    God Parent: Aphrodite
    Mortal Parent: Ashton Stariah
    Country of Origin: United States of America
    Pets: None
    Talents: Convincing people to give her what she wants.
    Skills: Novice Sword Fighting.
    Weapon: Small dagger called Mercy.
    Personality: Quirky in her own way. Her friends would describe her as a bit too happy and loud. A bit too confident, she's mainly described as energetic and forgiving.
    Flaws: Gullibility, impulsiveness, and weak-willingness.
    Abilities: None
    Powers: Charmspeak.
    Life Before CHB: Fairly normal for a demigod, until she turned eight. Her mother was always acting strange, and her family neglected her. As her family traveled a lot, she was left behind. She found shelter in an orphanage until a satyr found her.
    RP Example: I sprinted through the meadow, enjoying the smell of the flowers. I could do anything here. It was the first time I'd felt free in months, maybe even years.
    Any notes about your characters: None
    Morgan Landry
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    Post by Morgan Landry 4/6/2018, 4:42 am

    Hey there!

    Your form is really good!

    - Is her dagger made out of celestial bronze?
    - We don't allow charmspeak.... I'm sorry. You could try a degree of beauty manipulation, or infatuation powers?
    - You're talking about her mother in her life before CHB. Is that Aphrodite, or a stepmother? (Bear in mind gods are not allowed to stay with their children more than 2 weeks after the birth)
    - You need 2 more sentences for the life before camp :)

    Rest looks great!
    Keeley_Star
    Keeley_Star
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    Number of posts : 67
    Age : 17
    Registration date : 2018-04-02

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    Post by Keeley_Star 4/7/2018, 4:09 pm

    Keeley_Star wrote:Name: Keeley Stariah
    Age: 11
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: Green
    Hair: Dark Brown
    Height: 5'6"
    Body Type: Lean
    Skin Color: Mocha
    God Parent: Aphrodite
    Mortal Parent: Ashton Stariah
    Country of Origin: United States of America
    Pets: None
    Talents: Convincing people to give her what she wants.
    Skills: Novice Sword Fighting.
    Weapon: Small Celestial Bronze dagger called Mercy.
    Personality: Quirky in her own way. Her friends would describe her as a bit too happy and loud. A bit too confident, she's mainly described as energetic and forgiving.
    Flaws: Gullibility, impulsiveness, and weak-willingness.
    Abilities: None
    Powers: None
    Life Before CHB: We could say perfect. We could say horrible. But it was fairly normal for a demigod, until she turned eight. Her father was always acting strange, and her family neglected her. As her family traveled a lot, she was left behind. She found shelter in an orphanage until a satyr found her.
    RP Example: I sprinted through the meadow, enjoying the smell of the flowers. I could do anything here. It was the first time I'd felt free in months, maybe even years.
    Any notes about your characters: None


    Last edited by Keeley_Star on 4/8/2018, 6:02 pm; edited 1 time in total
    Keeley_Star
    Keeley_Star
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    Number of posts : 67
    Age : 17
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    Post by Keeley_Star 4/7/2018, 4:11 pm

    Sorry, Ashton's a male. Apology if that wasn't clear enough.
    Morgan Landry
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    Post by Morgan Landry 4/8/2018, 4:35 pm

    Hey :)

    You are making it sound like Keeley was raised by Aphrodite, which is not allowed by the rules. When you say "her mother was always acting strange", don't you mean her father?
    Keeley_Star
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    Post by Keeley_Star 4/8/2018, 6:01 pm

    I'm sorry! Let me fix that!
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    Post by Morgan Landry 4/11/2018, 4:45 am

    Awesome :)

    Just for next time, whenever we ask you to change something in a form, just click on the "Edit" button in the top right corner of your post. Then just reply "edited" to the topic once you're done so we know it's ready to check again :)

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