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Luna Loris's characters
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°26
Re: Luna Loris's characters
What kind of shark?
Maybeth- Member
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- Post n°27
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Edited :D
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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Re: Luna Loris's characters
You mean a Great White shark?
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- Post n°29
Re: Luna Loris's characters
yes
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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Re: Luna Loris's characters
Approved.
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My second character
Name: Robert Crystal
Age: 13
Gender: male
Eyes: grey
Hair: black
Height: 1,67
Body Type: average
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Athena Crystal
Country of Origin: N.York
Pets: a bleu parrot
Talents: smart, kindfull, strong fighter
Weapon**: a sword made by celestrial bronge
Flaws: hot-headed, curious, hasn't got good memory
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before CHB*: He lived with his mother in a small house at N.York city. He wasn't at all a good student and he was getting angry very easily.The other kids were laughing at him. At the age of 10 years old a monster tried to kill him and he learnt who he was. Then his mother send him to the Camp to be safe.
RP Example*:I was in my room,sleeping...suddenly a shadow coverd the window I thought it was a helicopter or something like that.I ignore it but then I heard the window crush, it was a strange creature: it had a girls head with a lion body and a birds wings. I runned to the door just the time that the monster jumped there I was...
- Do not be afraid son of Ares fight me like a man! The monster shouted at me
I was so suprised that I couldn't move...The monster attacked again! I took my rugbi stick...this wouldn't work but it could be beter from death...
- Nooooo... The monster became a black cloud that disappered! The door opened...
-Robert? mum said
Any notes about your character:none
Age: 13
Gender: male
Eyes: grey
Hair: black
Height: 1,67
Body Type: average
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Athena Crystal
Country of Origin: N.York
Pets: a bleu parrot
Talents: smart, kindfull, strong fighter
Weapon**: a sword made by celestrial bronge
Flaws: hot-headed, curious, hasn't got good memory
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before CHB*: He lived with his mother in a small house at N.York city. He wasn't at all a good student and he was getting angry very easily.The other kids were laughing at him. At the age of 10 years old a monster tried to kill him and he learnt who he was. Then his mother send him to the Camp to be safe.
RP Example*:I was in my room,sleeping...suddenly a shadow coverd the window I thought it was a helicopter or something like that.I ignore it but then I heard the window crush, it was a strange creature: it had a girls head with a lion body and a birds wings. I runned to the door just the time that the monster jumped there I was...
- Do not be afraid son of Ares fight me like a man! The monster shouted at me
I was so suprised that I couldn't move...The monster attacked again! I took my rugbi stick...this wouldn't work but it could be beter from death...
- Nooooo... The monster became a black cloud that disappered! The door opened...
-Robert? mum said
Any notes about your character:none
Last edited by Luna Loris on 4/29/2012, 8:17 am; edited 5 times in total
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°32
Re: Luna Loris's characters
So this is a work in progress, I hope?
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- Post n°33
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Edited!! :D
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°34
Re: Luna Loris's characters
We only allow Celestial bronze at CHB.
Being strong isn't really a power.
Being strong isn't really a power.
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- Post n°35
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Edited...
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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Re: Luna Loris's characters
Approved.
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My third character
Name: Lili Tomson
Age: 12
Gender: female
Eyes: bleu stochastic
Hair: Orange
Height: 1,56
Body Type: thin
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent: John Tomson
Country of Origin: Los Angeles
Pets: a dog named Jack and a cat named Sara
Talents: intelligent, agile, archery, can understood other people feelings
Weapon**: a sword[made by celestrial bronze], a bow with arrows[wooden] and a knife ( her father's gift)
Flaws: stubborn, curious, too sensitive
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):She can do spells and curses.(for 15 times per day ).She is beter in spells and charms(her best are attack spells.Example:break things and hit with them the opponent(the biggest thing:a big and heavy rock,3 kg.),and control water and fire against him(the best:producing waterballs and fireballs that can follow the enemy for 1 minuite)[as large as a little ball{5 inc},and the fireball, about 360 Fairenait hot][only two per kind and one kind per two minutes] per time.Her best spell is to transform an intem into another(a sword into a pen/a rock into a shield/ a piece of wood into an arrow).She is weak in curses[for 5 times per day, and 30 minites about per curse](such as sicknesses, illnesses,stresss the opponent or daze him or pain...)her worst curse is to make the opponent to pain in all of his body terribly-like getting stabbed not very deeply(an inch) at the feet.[ It only lasts 20 seconds]She can teleport (5 times per day,up to 10 miles distance). She can fly or make other things fly around her[heavier:about 100 points Example:a big rock or a small hut](about 10 times and for 20 miles per day)[about 5 minutes for each item]
[b]Life Before CHB*: She lived with her father . She was at the last grade of primary school when she almost killed him with her powers. She was always a very strange person. She loved her father. She became very sad when she almost hit him deathly...He told her that she is half-blood and he let her at the Camp half-blood hill.
RP Example*:
- Father, what's that place?
-It is were you belong, as I told you , you're a half-blood1 Here you will be safe...
-Safe from what... father I don't wanna let you...
- Don't worry you'll see me... sometimes...
We riched at the top...
- Goodbue sweethart
- Nooo... dad noooo...
But he had already got in his car...
Any notes about your characters:
Age: 12
Gender: female
Eyes: bleu stochastic
Hair: Orange
Height: 1,56
Body Type: thin
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent: John Tomson
Country of Origin: Los Angeles
Pets: a dog named Jack and a cat named Sara
Talents: intelligent, agile, archery, can understood other people feelings
Weapon**: a sword[made by celestrial bronze], a bow with arrows[wooden] and a knife ( her father's gift)
Flaws: stubborn, curious, too sensitive
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):She can do spells and curses.(for 15 times per day ).She is beter in spells and charms(her best are attack spells.Example:break things and hit with them the opponent(the biggest thing:a big and heavy rock,3 kg.),and control water and fire against him(the best:producing waterballs and fireballs that can follow the enemy for 1 minuite)[as large as a little ball{5 inc},and the fireball, about 360 Fairenait hot][only two per kind and one kind per two minutes] per time.Her best spell is to transform an intem into another(a sword into a pen/a rock into a shield/ a piece of wood into an arrow).She is weak in curses[for 5 times per day, and 30 minites about per curse](such as sicknesses, illnesses,stresss the opponent or daze him or pain...)her worst curse is to make the opponent to pain in all of his body terribly-like getting stabbed not very deeply(an inch) at the feet.[ It only lasts 20 seconds]She can teleport (5 times per day,up to 10 miles distance). She can fly or make other things fly around her[heavier:about 100 points Example:a big rock or a small hut](about 10 times and for 20 miles per day)[about 5 minutes for each item]
[b]Life Before CHB*: She lived with her father . She was at the last grade of primary school when she almost killed him with her powers. She was always a very strange person. She loved her father. She became very sad when she almost hit him deathly...He told her that she is half-blood and he let her at the Camp half-blood hill.
RP Example*:
- Father, what's that place?
-It is were you belong, as I told you , you're a half-blood1 Here you will be safe...
-Safe from what... father I don't wanna let you...
- Don't worry you'll see me... sometimes...
We riched at the top...
- Goodbue sweethart
- Nooo... dad noooo...
But he had already got in his car...
Any notes about your characters:
Last edited by Luna Loris on 6/13/2012, 9:48 am; edited 23 times in total
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°38
Re: Luna Loris's characters
No mind reading. Understanding feelings is more of a talent. Most powerful spell she could use? She can't use her spells for 1 hour a day total, she needs a number of times. No seeing into the future.
Are her weapons Celestial bronze?
Are her weapons Celestial bronze?
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- Post n°39
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Edited! :D
she has no any powerful spell she does everything the same!
she has no any powerful spell she does everything the same!
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°40
Re: Luna Loris's characters
I'm pretty sure her spells each have a different amount of power to them....
How far at most can she shadow travel? Remove the 1 hour from the first part of her spells and curses please; 15 times a day is enough to explain it to us. Also, largest thing she can lift up around her? Do you mean to say she can use this power for 4 hours straight?
How far at most can she shadow travel? Remove the 1 hour from the first part of her spells and curses please; 15 times a day is enough to explain it to us. Also, largest thing she can lift up around her? Do you mean to say she can use this power for 4 hours straight?
Last edited by Kendall on 5/10/2012, 3:33 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Luna Loris's characters
I changed it! hope it'll be allright...
I added and a few examples about what she is strong to do or not
I added and a few examples about what she is strong to do or not
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°42
Re: Luna Loris's characters
No turning people into animals. Elaborate on the curses. Did you mean 100 pounds for her rock?
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- Post n°43
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Now? I have nothing more to add...
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°44
Re: Luna Loris's characters
30 miles per day for her telekinesis seems like way too much.
Also, how long do her curses last and what kinds can she do? I still want to know her most powerful spell, even if you say she does everything "just the same."
Also, how long do her curses last and what kinds can she do? I still want to know her most powerful spell, even if you say she does everything "just the same."
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- Post n°45
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Beter...?
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°46
Re: Luna Loris's characters
So when you say 3 hrs for her curses, do you mean they last that long? When you change an item is it temporary or permanent?
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- Post n°47
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Permanent untill to change it( if she want)
Now............?:|
Now............?:|
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°48
Re: Luna Loris's characters
Kendall wrote:So when you say 3 hrs for her curses, do you mean they last that long?
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- Post n°49
Re: Luna Loris's characters
I actually change that...
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°50
Re: Luna Loris's characters
So each curse lasts an hour?
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