Abby the Bunny's characters

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Name: Ever Mercado
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: Gray
Hair: Blonde
Height: 5 feet 3 inches
Body Type: Petite
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: Eric Mercado
Country of Origin: United states
Pets: None
Talents: Excels at school, Archery, Battle Strategy
Weapon**: Bow,celestial bronze sword disquised as lip gloss
Flaws: Always thinks she's right, its her way or the highway, ignores others suggestions, has to carry an inhaler, because of asthma
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: She was hated at school for being a know-it-all, only had one friend(satyr) and could be found in the library. After school, she was at her father's small house, helping him with his research, or reading, or practicing her archery skills. One day, she and her friend(the satyr) were out, and a monster showed up, which she quickly killed. Her friend explained to her what the monster was, since she was freaking out. She was soon relocated to Camp Half Blood
RP Example*: I stared hard at the book, trying to ignore the taunts and teases. I couldnt take it. I slammed the book shut and stood up, whirling around. I glared. "At least I can read! At least I have something going for me! All you have is look, which'll go away someday! You need to keep your pretty little mouthes shut!" I turned back around, grabbed my book bag and book on Greek Mythology, and fled the library. I entered an empty classroom, ansd dropped my bag to the floor. I slid down the wall, and cried. Why? Why was this happening to me? I heard someone coming, and quickly tried to wipe the tears away. I look up and see my best friend. One look, and he knew.
Any notes about your characters: She likes to be by herself, but when she makes a friend, she's loyal and will protect them.

Life before CHB needs to be 5 complete sentences, so add one more, and you should be good.

Okay, did I get it all? Am i good?

Is your sword cestrial bronze?

Yes, I fixed it

I suggest you add one more flaw.

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Name: Aysia Blue Johnson
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Blonde
Height: 5'4
Body Type: Slender
Skin Color: Tanned
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Ted Johnson
Country of Origin: The U.S
Pets: None
Talents: Archery, Singing, Guitar
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze dagger
Flaws:, blind in her left eye, horrible at math, tries to please everyone, even if it puts herself in danger
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: Aysia never let anyone mess with Angus. She lived ina a normal house, on a normal street, with her mom, and step dad, and two older brothers. She'd been trying to become a country singer, but her mom worked all the time and her step dad didnt care about her. She learned to fight when her older step brothers got rough and she had to fix it.
RP Example*: "hey!' I said. They ignored me. "Hey!" I yelled. I shoved through one of the boys. I stood by my best friend, Angus. "Leave him alone," I growled. Angus put a hand on my arm. "Aysia, lets just go. It doesnt matter," He said, always the peacemaker. "No, it does matter. You guys are no good low life pieces of-" "Ms. Johnson," I heard the voice and i cringed. "Yes, Mr. Miller?" I turn around and face the principal. "Office. Now. Both of you." I opened my mouth to speak. "Now!" He ordered
Any notes about your characters: Shes peaceful, and easy to get along with

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Name: Kate Valentine
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Height: 5 feet five inches
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: Mason Valentine
Country of Origin: United States
Pets: Cat, left at home
Talents: Makeup Application, Hair, clothes
Weapon**: sword disguised as hair clip (celestial bronze)
Flaws: She's so full of herself, thinks she runs everything, thinks everyone should listen to her, ignores big things that goes on around her, only focusing on what affects her directly.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):None
Life Before CHB*: She was one of the popular girls, thought she could get every guy, which she could. She lived with her Dad in a somewhat large house. She broke many hearts, but when she "stole" something from a store, her dad decided to send her to a boarding school. From, there, she met up with a monster, then ended up here.
RP Example*: I tossed my shiny brown hair over my shoulder, and looked at the guy. I smiled a gentle smile. "You know I love you..." He smiled. "I'll see you soon," I stroked his arm once, and left.
Any notes about your characters: Dont touch her stuff

We don't allow charmspeak, unfortunately.

Her sword is Celestial bronze, yes?

Add another flaw.

Name: Charlie Hughes
Age: 8
Gender: Female
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Brown
Height: 4 feet eight inches
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: Tanned
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Parent: Amanda Hughes
Country of Origin: United States
Pets: a goldfish
Talents: Thievery, trickery, tracking
Weapon**: None, yet
Flaws: Impatient, missing a toe, sometimes trips over her words when shes lying, then gets caught
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: She would steal things, and almost never got caught. She could vandalize something, and blame it on some other person. Always doing bad things, never getting into any trouble. She went to far when she set a house on fire, and she's been on the run since.
RP Example*: I watched the whole place go up in flames. I panicked. I didn't know what to do, so I ran. I spent days in the woods, covering my tracks, starving, hiding in trees at night. Then I stumbled upon a big tree. I stepped passed it, into Camp Half Blood...
Any notes about your characters:

Add another flaw.

fixed

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fixed

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Name: Abigail Chaos Diamond
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
Height: 5 feet five inches
Body Type: Slender
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Victoria Diamond
Country of Origin: United States
Pets: 1 horse, lost.
Talents: Horse back riding, running(she's really fast), getting out of trouble, fighting
Weapon**: None
Flaws: Put her in the water, she'll sink like a rock, she sometimes gets too cocky, fear of bugs, anger management issues, bipolar
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: Chaos lived in a nice house, with just her mother. She had a couple friends that could overlook her problems, the fights she had with the. Her mom never mentioned who her dad was, and kept all things Greek out of the house. They got along well, and lived well. Chaos didn't do well in school, for obvious reasons

RP Example*: I screamed. The bug flew thisclose to my face! I started jumping around my room, yelling for my mom. SHe came flying in."What? What happened?" She yelled, freaking out. I stop and look at her with my big brown eyes. " A bug," I say. She rolls her eyes. "You mock me! But wait til they take over the world and kill us all!" I exclaim, ever the dramatic child
Im running, faster than I ever have before. The thorns are getting jammed into my bare feet. The brambles were scraping my legs. I trip and fall, cutting my cheek. I jump up, and continue running. Faster, faster. I see a a tree, and fly by it...
Any notes about your characters: She knows nothing about the Greeks. She ended up at CHB by accident

Life before CHB is basically supposed to be a biography of you character's life before she/he entered Camp Half-Blood. Like how their parents were etc..Not basically roleplaying.
You don't need powers.

Yeah, I know. Ive made four other characters. I just was putting her basics. And I want at least one of my charries to have powers

Some kids of Ares have the power to make people want to fight, others have a strength boost power (though that's more of a Cratus kid power).

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Name: Ebony Ember Jones
Age: 6
Gender: Female
Eyes: Green
Hair: Blonde
Height: 4'2
Body Type: Small, skinny
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Eirene
Mortal Parent: Nick Jones
Country of Origin: United States
Pets: None
Talents: Hiding, dancing, climbing trees
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze dagger
Flaws: Forgetful, doesnt really think things through, oblivious
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Calm a person down, but only when they might possibly harm her. Lats long enough for her to get away from them. It only lasts until she runs away from them. Only 4 times per day, lasts five minutes(I'd only have her do this if the other person is okay with it, since it could be powerplay. If they dont want that, then she can forget about her power.)
Life Before CHB*: She was liked at school, never getting into fights with anyone, not really doing anything to stand out. She lived with her dad and stepmom and older stepbrother. Pretty typical family. She didnt have any close friends, but she was okay with that. She did okay in school. She was pretty average.
RP Example*: I sat cross legged on my bed, doodling. A squiggly here, a heart there. Switch color to purple, repeat. I wasnt really focusing. I put the cap on my marker and set my notebook to the side. I slid off my bed and left my room. I peered into Scott's room. He was asleep. I slipped out the front door, and disappeared into the woods.
Any notes about your characters:

Add another flaw.

How does she calm a person down, and for how long at most can the person remain calm under the influence of her power? How many times a day can she do this?