J.D.'s characters

Name: Emmerson “Rose” Harrington
Age: 16
Gender: Girl
Eyes: Blue
Hair: blonde/brown
Height: 5’6”
Body Type: Thin, but athletic
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: Derek Harrington and Step-mom Angela
Country of Origin: UK then USA
Pets: pup named Mattie
Talents: Soccer, archery, guitar, singing, swimming
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze dagger
Flaws: loud, messy, not very smart
Life Before CHB*: When Rose was 5, he dad remarried to angela. She had two sons who were older than Rose. Rose started playing soccer and swimming, which are her two favorite sports. She also enjoys walking her mixed breed pup, Mattie. Five years ago, Angela and Mr. Harrington had another little boy. Rose came to the camp after a close call with a monster.
RP Example*: Mattie tugged on her leash, again and again. I finally gave in a started to jog. The sky was thick with clouds and small raindrops plotted the ground. I pulled on my hood, but the rain became to get heavier. I pulled Mattie under an awning while the rain passed.

I don't think not very girly is a flaw since some girls aren't girly at all. Add one more flaw then.

Add one more sentence to RP example.

The history really isn't a history. It's totally out of order. I'd start with when she was born and then go on from there.

You can't have to countries of origin. Was she born in the UK but moved to the US?

Edited. And yes she was born in the UK, but moved to the USA when she was 1.

You could put more sentences on the history. You didn't add how she got to camp.

Take US off of Country of Origin since she was born in the UK.

Revised

Approved.