My Character Re-Edited Again

I really need my character approved so if you could that would be amazing
Name: Peyton Mae
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Chocolate Brown
Height: 5'4"
Body Type: Moderate
Color: Tan
Greek God Parent: Demeter
Mortal Parent: Ryan Mae
Country of Origin: California
Talents: Singing, Writing, Gardening
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze sword in the form of a ring
Flaws: Quiet, clumsy, gets frustrated very easily Can be very shy around people she doesn't know. Hides the fact she is good at swordplay because she is scared of fighting a real monster.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Is able to control the growning of crops and plants to help with the strawberry crop. She can control the plantabout 4 times a day. but only for small things like growing small plants(flowers,bushes,vines) or changing the colour of flowers, but if its big things like growing a tree(any type) or changing the size of something she can only do it once a day. She also gets tired very easily.

Life Before CHB: Peyton always felt different around her friends, when they would talk about shoes and boys she would rather talk about the right way to grow tomoatoes so they are perfectly juicy or about greek history and she'd often find herself yelling in greek when she got mad. She had a father who was very....different so she spent most of her time outside reading under the willow tree. She develpoed a strange power of being able to grow plants in a matter of second whaen she was seven. Everything changed for her when one day during class her best friend Ky (yes her best friend is a guy) got attackted by strange dog like creatures she relizes he hasn't been telling her the truth. With his help she made it to camp Half-Blood where she currently trains.

RP Example*: Peyton stared at the sword laying on the ground before her. She knew how to use it but she didn't want to. "well i'm waiting are you going to pick it up or what?" her best friend Ky told her. She had found out a few weeks ago that he was indeed a Demi-god. "You know what I really.....don't feel like fighting right now." she told him her cheeks burning."I'm not letting you leave until you learn this is important life saving stuff Peyton if you don't lea-" "Oh shut the styx up Ky!" she snapped at him. "you know if you weren't such a little girl maybe if you grew up a bit more th-" she cut him of my snatching his sword out of his hand a pinning him against the wall with her sword poitned at his gut and his at his chin. "I knew I could get you to do it" he whispered. Peyton then relized how close their faces were. "You know I never relized how blue your ey-" "Oh shut the styx up Ky" she said again this time softer and with a smile on her face. She kept her sword on his gut while she put his back in his belt loop. Her hand lingering around his hip before she smirked and pulled away walking back to her cabin leaving Ky there staring into space wanting more.

Any notes about your characters: She hides her swordplay skills until she really needs to use them. She is very shy around the people at camp. MY CHARACTER IS GREEK

Demeter's Greek; her Roman form is Ceres.

Roman kids only get Imperial Gold for their weapons.... Though, I see that you've got a Life Before CHB. Is your character supposed to be Greek or Roman?

I recommend you remove the Roman part for her God Parent section.

I assume her sword's Celestial bronze, not just regular bronze?

How many times a day can she control plant/crop growth, and what happens when she controls it? Do they grow a few inches larger or such? Knowing what plants to use for wounds and illnesses is a talent, not a power.

We wouldn't allow her to talk to Demeter; you can't role-play a god unless you've been given permission from an admin or an admin plays one for you.

You also need a specific number of times per day she can use her powers.

Can you tell us what you mean by a "small" plant (as in, size) and the size of her trees?

You need to put specific sizes to her plant growing limit....