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    Post by 1036582g 12/8/2012, 12:02 pm

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    Name:Angel Grece
    Age:13
    Gender:female
    Eyes:green
    Hair:brown
    Height:4ft5
    Body Type:lean
    Skin Color:white
    God Parent:Hephaestus
    Mortal Parent:Ann Grece
    Country of Origin:usa
    Pets:dog
    Talents:archery
    Weapon**:bow celestial bronze
    Flaws: orgization shy, head strong
    Life Before CHB*:I live in New York City seen I was 6 years old. Changes school 5 times in a year. When to the park for my 13 birthday party. I Have A H A D and delaela I can not read. Greek mythology is amazing to read.
    RP Example*:The mist fill over the lake in the dead of night. The lake was silent......like the wind. Thar is campers that is going back to camp when they head hallowed in the woods.They look in the direction that the sound came form. It was looking back with yollew glowing eyes.
    Any notes about your characters:funny


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    Post by Jordan 12/8/2012, 12:04 pm

    Is this form completed? There are a lot of sections missing.

    And we don't allow Children of Poseidon.
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    Post by 1036582g 12/8/2012, 12:29 pm

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    Post by Jordan 12/8/2012, 12:30 pm

    Okay. DON'T double post, edit you form using the edit button, in the top right hand corner of your post.

    What's Angel's last name?

    I think you mistook "Body type" for "Blood Type" Body type would be like, "skinny, lean, muscular, etc."

    What's her mom's last name?

    Is her weapon celestial bronze?

    Running isn't a flaw. She needs three flaws.

    Making things isn't a power. Powers aren't required.

    Life Before Camp Half-Blood needs to be five complete sentences.

    Role Play Example also needs to be five complete sentences.
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    Post by 1036582g 12/8/2012, 3:13 pm

    Grece
    lean
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    Post by Chuck 12/8/2012, 4:19 pm

    How is "origination" a flaw? Please elaborate.

    Your sentences need to be complete. Right now they don't really have subjects. Please fix that. (Eg. "Has a mole" should be "He has a mole.") Make sure to include good grammar in your form.
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    Post by 1036582g 12/8/2012, 5:22 pm

    I mist up a word
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    Post by Chuck 12/8/2012, 5:50 pm

    I still don't know what "orgization" means.

    And you still need to fix the grammar in your life before chb and rp example.

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