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    Post by Sunrise 1/8/2013, 7:50 pm

    Name: Cedric Kores
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Eyes: hazel
    Hair: dark brown hairstyle looks like mediumhairstyleupdate.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/cool-spiky-hairstyles2.jpg
    Height: 6'2
    Body Type: Muscular, Slender
    Skin Color: Tan
    God Parent: Apollo
    Mortal Parent: Megan Kores
    Country of Origin: U.S
    Pets: A vanilla pomeranian with a golden head cut short like a wolf pup
    Talents: Guitar, Accuracy, Speed, Sword and Bow.
    Weapon**: Usually uses a sword (Celestial Bronze but looks Yellow - Orange) or a bow (Celestial Bronze but looks Gold) whichever.
    Flaws: Will to never give up, will fight about anything, scared of amphibians.
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): He can bend Light to his will like light up places or use light to blind enemies or hurl it at them he can do this any time he wants to. Person is blinded for as powerful the blow of light is. If its not powerful then its 45 sec blindness. If it is it can last as long as 5 minutes. If he makes it into a ball and hurls it the blow will make the other person fall 10 - 20feet backwards and show burn marks. If the ball is powerful it also knocks them unconscious for 1 minute. He can use this power as long as he has a light source or without it he can use it 15 times a day.
    Life Before CHB*: Cedric used to live in a beach house in Honolulu, Hawaii before going to Camp Half-Blood. As a child, Cedric flunked every school he went to and averaged about a D. His mother gave up and sent him to a boarding school in New York. In the near future, Cedric is following a satyr trying to get to Half Blood Hill. While, being chased by a giant monster the satyr kid tripped and fell getting eaten by the monster. Cedric, then goes on a full on sprint to Camp Half-Blood 50 feet away.
    RP Example*: I headed to the Beach all gorged in dirt from tripping. I pulled out my sandwich from the bag I was carrying watching all these disfigured, masculine, scary girls at Camp Half-Blood. Then, some random girl (that had the body of a 40 year old women) came up and said to me. "Will you stop staring at us butt-ugly girls and leave?" I then scared her away with my awesome powers hoping she would never come back again. (Yeah I know I'm awesome)
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    Post by Jordan 1/9/2013, 4:23 pm

    No to the pet. We only allow domesticated animals.

    Add two more flaws.

    What can he do with the light? How many times a day can he do it?.

    Life before CHB needs to be 5 complete sentences.

    RP Example needs to be 5 complete sentences.
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    Post by Sunrise 1/9/2013, 5:16 pm

    Jordan wrote:No to the pet. We only allow domesticated animals.

    Add two more flaws.

    What can he do with the light? How many times a day can he do it?.

    Life before CHB needs to be 5 complete sentences.

    RP Example needs to be 5 complete sentences.


    Btw bro do I have to have a celestial bronze/ stygian steel sword/bow?
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    Post by Jordan 1/9/2013, 5:19 pm

    Yes you do. For Apollo, it would need to be CB.

    You also never edited/addressed any of the points I made.
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    Post by Sunrise 1/9/2013, 5:40 pm

    Am I still not allowed to make the power fire?
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    Post by Jordan 1/9/2013, 6:40 pm

    If you wanted the power of fire, I'd choose Hephaestus, who is the god of fire.

    Apollo's children would not have the ability to summon/control fire.
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    Post by Sunrise 1/9/2013, 6:45 pm

    Nah, ill stick with light its ready.
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    Post by Jordan 1/9/2013, 6:51 pm

    Jordan wrote:No to the pet. We only allow domesticated animals.

    Add two more flaws.


    What can he do with the light? How many times a day can he do it?.

    Life before CHB needs to be 5 complete sentences.

    RP Example needs to be 5 complete sentences.

    What can he do when he manipulates light?
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    Post by Sunrise 1/10/2013, 5:21 pm

    Is this char approved?
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    Post by Jordan 1/10/2013, 5:52 pm

    No. You will know when you character is approved when I, another admin, or Approver states, "Approved" on you form and then moves it to the approved character forms section.

    He needs limits. How many times a day can he manipulate light?
    How long can he keep a room lit? How long would a person remain blinded? What would hurling a ball of light do to a person if it hit them?
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    Post by Sunrise 1/10/2013, 6:12 pm

    I put all of those...
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    Post by Jordan 1/10/2013, 6:28 pm

    He can bend Light to his will like light up places or use light to blind enemies or hurl it at them he can do this any time he wants to. Remove what's in red. he needs limits.

    Person is blinded for as powerful the blow of light is. If its not powerful then its 45 sec blindness. If it is it can last as long as 10 minutes. Ten minute blindness is too long. Drop it lower than 5.
    If he makes it into a ball and hurls it the blow will make the other person fall 20-40 feet backwards and show burn marks. 20-40 feet back is WAY too much. It's a ball of light, not a solid object. I'd allow around 2 feet. How bad are the burns?

    If the ball is powerful it also knocks them unconscious. -No.

    How many times a day can he use his power?

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