Character (Edited Again ) please approve

Name: Connor Alan
Age: 17
Gender: Boy
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black
Height: 6 foot 2
Body Type: lean
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent: Joe Alan
Country of Origin: London
Pets: hell hound named Bolt (length 2 1/2 height 1 1/4
Talents: Running, sword fighting, and creating weapons
Weapons: Dual (2) stygian iron short swords, 1 stygian sword
Flaws: hates being blamed for anything, sarcastic ,always underestimates enemies
Powers: shooting flames from his hands (for 3 minutes, 5 times a day),Creating 6 1/2 foot illusions 1minute (5 times a day) creating 5 1/3 radius explosions (4 times a day)
Life before CHB: school was hard for Connor, He always got in trouble. in elementary school he set a classroom on fire and got suspended. in 6th grade he moved to a new state because of all the monster attacks. in 7th grade he stayed in school for only the first week.
RP Example: Connor was relived to come bace to camp alive. He almost died in the underworld. He went strait to the sword fighting arena where he found Bolt (his pet hellhound). Connor Jabbed at a dummy as Bolt watched curiously. After an 30 minutes he got bored and went to his cabin.[img][/img]

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Stygian Iron is not a metal used by children of the Olympian gods. Celestial Bronze is the appropriate metal for a child of Hephaestus.

Being smart, and nice are not flaws. You need 3 flaws on your form.

What can he do with fire? How many times a day can he use it?

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Approved?

No. And don't double post.

You left eyes blank.

No to the ocelot, we don't allow wild animals as pets.
How big is the hell hound? Can it shadow travel?

Being humble is not a flaw. Replace that with a flaw.

For shooting fire from his hands. How many times a day can he do it?
No to the lifting people up with fire, that really wouldn't be possible, seeing as fire is energy, and can't really exert a force.

Your first two sentences in Life Before CHB are fragments, make them longer and more detailed.
Also, I wouldn't allow him to have come in contact with the Minotaur, it's not reformed yet.

ok, Approved now?

Stop asking if your form is Approved. I or another admin, or approver will state "Approved" and move it to the Approved Character Forms.

Shooting Flames: 45 times every twenty minutes? No. That's WAY too much. It would need to be like less than 10 times a day.

Illusions: How long do the illusions last?

Explosions: No. It would need to be less than 5 times a day.

ok, i'm done.

His shooting flames power would need a set limit per day. Not every 20 minutes. Bring it to about 5 times a day and I let him shoot fire for 3 minutes.

OK done.

What kind of damage could the explosion do? Burns? What degree? How much of a concussive force is there? Could it push someone back?

What is the units of measure on the hell hound?
Can it shadow travel?