Kolten Westgate

Name: Kolten Westgate
Age: Fifteen
Gender: Male
Eyes: Gray
Hair: Blonde
Height:5'9
Body Type: Slim, nice build.
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: James Westgate
Country of Origin: America
Pets: none
Talents: Talented strategist
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze sword
Flaws: Gets jealous easily, over thinks some stuff, can be too cocky.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none.
Life Before CHB*: Kolten Westgate lived in an apartment with his father, James. James was in college at the time to get a History degree, so they couldn't afford a nicer house. One day while Kolten was walking to school, he was attacked by a Chimera, luckily his friend Jace, got him away from the Chimera safely. Jace then told Kolten he was a satyr, and that Kolten was a demigod. Jace then took Kolten to camp, where he was immediately claimed by Athena, does she have something in store for him?
RP Example*:
Kolten was walking through the camp, his sword at his side, strapped into the hilt. He whistled as he walked past the Aphrodite cabin, walking towards the arena. Kolten walked into the arena, the class already started, "Sorry I'm late." he said, the girl in charge replied "Kolten, of course you'd be the one late. How about you help me demonstrate?" Kolten smirked, he hated her, he'd be happy to oblige to her request. He unstrapped his sword and grabbed its hilt, and got in fighting stance. The crowd whispered, it was going to be a tough match, the girl was skilled, but Kolten was also. The crowd counted to three, and Kolten charged. The girl, Zoe was her name, Kolten finally remembered moved, but not quick enough, a piece of hair fell out of her hair, she screamed in outrage. Kolten moved like an angel, such grace in his moves, he kicked Zoe in her stomach as she came running at him, he then put the sword up to her neck. "Make your move, Zoe." she got up, realizing her defeat.
Any notes about your characters:

I think a chimera is a little strong for an Athena character to attract.

Your RP example indicates power playing. In roleplay, we don't say we kick someone. We say we kicked at someone. It gives the other player a chance to dodge or be hit.