Janna Uras

Name:Janna Uras
Age:16
Gender:female
Eyes:brown
Hair:blonde
Height:6,5
Body Type:curvy
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Aphrodite
Mortal Parent:Saccath Uras
Country of Origin:Greec\Sparta
Pets:giant rideable Eagle(my mom's)
Talents:attract, perswade, and bribe
Weapon**:charms and good looks ,knife
Flaws:tree hugger (flaw for it gets in way of what needs to be done), scared of fire, and can't stand iggnorent boys
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):exremely attractive(none can resist)
Life Before CHB*:ran away from home because of house fire at early age. i had no friends and was attacked by monsters(defended my self with a kinfe). Was chased all the way to camp half blood
RP Example*: I go out onto on the street thinking about how the day that has come.Stranger walks up to me in an agressive way. I run away out of fear to my father.He chases me to my father.Daddy saves me from the bad man."Thanks dad." I say kindly,He says "No ones hurting my little girl ever."
Any notes about your characters: none

No to the pet. It would need to be a dometicated/legal animal.

Charms and good looks aren't weapons. What kind of metal is her knife?

Add another flaw. A personality flaw to be exact.

That's not really a power. And all mind based powers can be resisted.

Life Before CHB needs to be 5 COMPLETE sentences. Along with your RP Example a lot of sentences are in complete. "Stranger walks up to me in an agressive way." Should be "A stranger walks up to me in an aggressive way." Technically the sentence should include more description, but what you have is an incomplete sentence. Adjust these.