Calli Lonktor

Name:Calli Lonter.
Age: 14
Gender: Female.
Eyes:Blue.
Hair: Red.
Height: 5 feet.
Body Type: slim.
Skin Color: tan
God Parent:Hecate goddess of magic.
Mortal Parent: John Lonter.
Country of Origin:Canada.
Pets:German shepherd.
Talents:Running, riding horses and archery.
Weapon**: celestial bronze dagger and bow and arrow (arrows magically appear) max of 35 a day the arrows have a poison in it. If I she uses to many she gets very tired the arrows can knock put or if the person is very weak kill. She can use the arrows 10 times a day. She got them form a cabin mate as a welcoming gift.
Flaws: doesn't listen well, is inpatient claustrophobic.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): n/a
Life Before CHB*: i lived in Canada with my father John and my step brothers: Ethan and Steven. My brothers were mean to me and my dad did nothing about it. all he did was call the maid for beer and watch football games, of course he had no friends. the town had nicknamed him drunk John or John the one he dare not speak of, that's why i have no friends. my nickname was the kid or back of that's what people called me i went home and cried then my brothers made more fun of me. one day this all changed we went on a road trip to the forest to go camping. one day i wandered of a fell through the magical boundaries of the camp and they Told me who is was.
RP Example*: I slashed the practice dummy with my knife. The stuffing slowly fell to the ground. i moved from dummy to dummy until they were all demolished. I walked out of the training area proud of my self.
Any notes about your characters: ADHD dyslexic

How many times can he use magic arrows a day? What can the arrows do?

Also, can you go through and correct spelling errors?

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Blaze wrote:How many times can he use magic arrows a day? What can the arrows do?

Also, can you go through and correct spelling errors?

I only noticed a few spelling changes. You didn't tell me what the arrows could do.

Edited no more spelling mistakes.

How strong is the poison?

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What do you mean "can summon magic"? Magic is an intangible thing; an ability. What can she do with her magic, exactly? How many times a day can she do it? How does it take its toll on her mentally/physically?

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I'm afriad there needs to be a limit on how many times she can do this ability. You still haven't defined what you mean by "summons magic" and if you havem I don't understand due to lack of punctuation. Could you put that in?

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I see no edits. :/

I used periods and commas and o deleted summons magic.

Capricious wrote:I'm afriad there needs to be a limit on how many times she can do this ability.

You need to put this in.

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You can't use things as many times as you want. There must be a limit. Question: where did the arrows come from? As they are not an ability, they must go under weapon.

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How strong is the poison?

It says: it can knock out someone

That's rather power play. How long would it last? Is there a quick antidote? What is the antidote? Does the poison always work?