New Demigod

Name: Benjamin Fraser (Ben for short)
Age: 14
Gender: Boy
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Scruffy, Black hair
Height: 190 cm
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: Olive
God Parent: Acheron
Mortal Parent: Melissa Fraser
Country of Origin: England
Pets: Small white dog
Talents: Can speak five different languages (French, Spanish, Maori, Rarotongan and English)
Weapon**: metre long Celestial bronze sword
Personality: Doesn't talk much, can learn new things fast and doesn't usually like being centre of attention.
Flaws: Ambition (desires power even though he does not need it), holds grudges and deadly pride (thinking you can do better than others, sometimes even the gods).
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can make people feel pain by pointing their hand at that person. Has to have a twenty hour break in using his power and can use his power only once before he has the break. The pain is like your body is burning or your bones getting crushed, the pain lasts for about twenty seconds.
Life Before CHB*: Ben lived in a small apartment with his mother. He rarely got monster visits. He has been kicked out of ten schools already because of him hurting people. He has moved three times in one year. Then he was bullied at his latest school where a satyr found him and brought him to Camp
RP Example*: I saw something move in a nearby bush. I walked over cautiously with my sword ready. A girl jumped out at me with a dagger. She looked around thirteen and I could just see her face under the helmet. Her eyes were stunning. Oh, great. I found myself in love during battle.
Any notes about your characters: Has a scar on his cheek.

No ravens.

Elaborate more on his personality.

So he can only use his power once every thirty hours? How much pain is felt by the victim and how long does it last?

The pain is like ALOT of pain. Sort of like all your insides melting and burning to ashes.

Too powerful, you'll need to drastically lower it.

Do I have to explain the pain on the form?
If not then the pain has changed to like your body is burning. The pain lasts for about twenty seconds.

What languages can your character speak?

And how bad is the burning? And yes, you'll need to explain it on the form. How far away from his victim can he be at most in order to use the power? How can people resist it?

The burning on a scale from 1-10 is 7ish.
He has to be at least two metres near that person.
How do people resist it? Like protect themselves from it?

That's not really a sufficient scale unless you tell me what 1, 7, and 10 equal (ie: 1 is touching a hot stove top). And yes.

1 is only a light burn like having your finger hover over a flame
3 is like burning yourself on a flame
5 is like touching a hot element (the thingy on the oven) while on high
7 is having your hand in a fire for a while (except it's the whole body in this case)
10 is basically jumping into a fire like an idiot and not coming out until you burn to ashes
-I changed the pain thing. Because sometimes it feels like you're burning or your bones being crushed- Oh, yeah it's only a pain, it isn't actually happening to them

3 doesn't make much sense because that sounds like a general version of the entire scale, and define "a while" for 7. How bad is the pain from bone crushing (ie: being crushed by a giant boulder)? I suppose this is also full-body? You still need to add in ways to resist.

"a while" is like seven seconds.
The bone crushing is like you breaking you're leg in multiple places except it's all over your body.
You can resist it if something is in the way, like a shield or another person (which wouldn't be fair to that person).

Any other ways to resist? Does your character choose between the burning or the crushing, or are they random? How many is "multiple" places?

I guess if you had some kind of spell on you.
The pain is random.
Multiple is like three places.

... Some kind of spell? Would your charavter's power affect other kids of Acheron or Odyne (a goddess of pain)? Does your character need to concentrate to keep the power going?

I don't know. Like if they have a spell for protection or maybe if they're children of Hecate or something.
Yes, unless they have a power against pain.
No.

Approved.