Rules: No being mean.
Helpful criticism is welcome.
Any type of poetry is allowed.
You may post favourite poems etc, but make sure you credit the poet.
That is all.
To start it all off, I wrote this just now. I don't like it too much, but eh Imma leave it. Any thoughts, whether simple or in-depth would be welcome.
What if I told you I could help?
Or rid you of your trouble?
What if I told you that you could be yourself?
Or that you could be blissful?
What if I told you I could set you free?
Or set you up high?
What if I told you that it isn't all you think it to be?
Or that it isn't a goodbye?
What if I told you I was death?
And then this;
I remember a time,
when I didn't have to worry about crime.
When my biggest worry was which toy?
Or who's that boy?
But then as I grew,
I found problems anew.
I had to go to class,
And now make sure I don't get into uni last.
Eventually I'll have a job,
where I'll have to deal with some knob.
And everyday that'll be it,
Until I've become some old git.
But life isn't all that bad.
It doesn't have to be all sad.
I've found love of my life,
Who can cause me no strife.
And I have friends all around,
And I'm glad it was them that I found.
So yes life moves too fast,
But it can be an absolute blast.
So whilst I have this life of mine,
I'll make sure that it'll be all fine.
Cause I don't want life to bring me down,
I don't want to look at all with a frown.
I just want to be free,
I simply want life to be filled with glee.
Helpful criticism is welcome.
Any type of poetry is allowed.
You may post favourite poems etc, but make sure you credit the poet.
That is all.
To start it all off, I wrote this just now. I don't like it too much, but eh Imma leave it. Any thoughts, whether simple or in-depth would be welcome.
What if I told you I could help?
Or rid you of your trouble?
What if I told you that you could be yourself?
Or that you could be blissful?
What if I told you I could set you free?
Or set you up high?
What if I told you that it isn't all you think it to be?
Or that it isn't a goodbye?
What if I told you I was death?
And then this;
I remember a time,
when I didn't have to worry about crime.
When my biggest worry was which toy?
Or who's that boy?
But then as I grew,
I found problems anew.
I had to go to class,
And now make sure I don't get into uni last.
Eventually I'll have a job,
where I'll have to deal with some knob.
And everyday that'll be it,
Until I've become some old git.
But life isn't all that bad.
It doesn't have to be all sad.
I've found love of my life,
Who can cause me no strife.
And I have friends all around,
And I'm glad it was them that I found.
So yes life moves too fast,
But it can be an absolute blast.
So whilst I have this life of mine,
I'll make sure that it'll be all fine.
Cause I don't want life to bring me down,
I don't want to look at all with a frown.
I just want to be free,
I simply want life to be filled with glee.