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    Beth Calkins - Eirene

    Liberty
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    Post by Liberty 10/20/2014, 12:56 am

    Name: Beth Calkins
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: Violet-blue. Most people mistake them for purple but she says they are violet.
    Hair: Blonde
    Height: 5'1"
    Body Type: Slim and fit
    Skin Color: Paleish
    God Parent: Eirene
    Mortal Parent: Noah Calkins
    Country of Origin: USA
    Pets: None
    Talents: Singing, dancing
    Weapon**: Celestial bronze sword she'll get at camp
    Personality: She's normal girl. Her personality really depends on her mood. If she's happy, she's loud and fun. If she's sad, she's quiet and reserved. If she's angry...well you get the point. She is very fun and likes to make people laugh, which she can do. She is funny, but people can tend to not understand her humor. She has a huge imagination and is always coming up with cool ideas. And bad ones too.
    Flaws: She's loyal to her friends and loved ones. She would absolutely anything to make sure they are safe. Which is good but also bad. This is her fatal flaw. She sometimes is irresponisble and reckless. She also cannot handle conflict.
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
    Life Before Camp*: Beth has always lived with her father. He wasn't around often so Beth was taken care of by a nanny. Beth grew up with issues in school, mostly because she barely had any friends and was picked on constantly. When she was 12, nearly 13 she ran away from home,  making herself vulnerable to monsters, such as hellhounds. And she started getting attacked. The only reason got away from them was because she hit them with whatever she could find to distract them and then bolted. So she went baack home after a month and her father, who had been searching for her in his spare time from work, took her to a camp, but she didn't know where she was going or that he had been looking for her. The only reason her dad knew about the camp was because Eirene told him about it, before she left him quickly, in case he ever wanted to take Beth there.
    RP Example*: Beth walked hand in hand with her father, who stood much taller than she did. She looked up at him and saw him staring straight ahead with a clenched jaw. She looked ahead saw an entrance to a camp of some sort. She looked back at her father, who was crouching to her eye level.

    "I love you, Beth." he said.

    "I love you too, Daddy." she replied. He stood up and pointed towards rhe entrance. She started towards it and turned back to see her father walking away.

    "Daddy?" she called. He stopped and turned around.

    "Go on Beth," was all he said before turning back around and continuing to walk away. With one last glance at her father, Beth stepped through the entrance.
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    Last edited by Liberty on 10/24/2014, 3:12 pm; edited 5 times in total
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    Post by Kendall 10/20/2014, 5:02 pm

    You put this in RP Invites so a mod (sandwich) moved it here. Next time, please make sure you enter your character form in the Character Forms section, not RP Invites.

    Please be more specific with her personality -- what are some overarching traits she has, that aren't totally affected by changes in her mood? Add some more to her personality.

    For how long was Beth away from home after running off before she returned home? How often was she attacked, and by what? Did her father try getting her back? How did her father know about camp?
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    Post by Liberty 10/22/2014, 11:03 pm

    I didn't realize I posted it there, I apologize.

    I think I fixed everything.
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    Post by moriarty 10/23/2014, 7:52 am

    Is her mother Pax or Eirene?

    How did she get away from the monsters?
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    Post by Liberty 10/24/2014, 1:03 pm

    Fixed.
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    Post by Kendall 10/24/2014, 2:50 pm

    You put Pax in the final sentence of her biography -- please change it to Eirene. Also, had Eirene told Beth's dad about camp before she left the baby with him? (Just note that we only let godly parents stay with their kids for a week after birth at most.)

    Otherwise your form looks fine.
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    Post by Liberty 10/24/2014, 3:13 pm

    Fixed
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    Post by Kendall 10/24/2014, 3:14 pm

    Approved.

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