Mylo Moseley

Name: Mylo Moseley
Age: 14
Gender: male
Eyes: green
Hair: he has slicked back black hair with green dyed tips
Height: 6'1''
Body Type: lean
Skin Color: brown
God Parent: aeolus
Mortal Parent: jackie moseley
Country of Origin: usa
Pets: none
Talents: anything to do with jumping or air. and also gymnastic type stuff.
Weapon**: he has 2 cb nun-chucks with expandable blades that turn into pens. and he also has 5 cb shurikens which return to his pocket.
Personality: Mylo is a competitive young man who is cocky to the point he might seem like a nike child. he is also creative because he can think outside the box and find solutions no one would think of. he is also very friendly. he has this natural charisma to him.
Flaws: Over-confidence, bad sportsmanship, and hot-headed.
Abilities: he can  sense movements in the air. also he can detect wind speeds from up to 30 ft away. he can also take control of planes/air vehicles since his dad his a wind god. he can also talk to birds.
Powers:
1) he can make gusts of winds up to 55 mph. and their size are 8ftx8ftx8ft maximum. he can use this power 7 times a day for 7 min with a 45 min cool down. the range of them is within an 8ft radius of the origin. he create the wind by focusing really hard on making the wind spirits bend to his will.
2) he can make tornadoes at the size of 8 ftx5ftx7ftgoing 55 mph . he can do this 5 times a day for 3 min with a 1 hour cool down. the range of them is within an 8ft radius of the origin. it takes him 30 second to make them.
3) he can fly for 10 min. he can fly up to 10 yrds up into the air and go 25 mph. he can do this 4 times a day with an hour cooldown.
Life Before Camp*: he was born to rhyolo's mom 9 monthes after rhy's birth(Mylo was premature). his mother couldn't take two demigod kids so she gave Mylo to her parents, he and rhy's grandparents. Mylo was raised in the same city as rhy but they never knew each other. and rhy never knew his grandparents and mylo never knew his mother. and as far as Mylo's childhood goes it involves him making tornadoes in hhis room and messing it up along with blowing around desks. when he was 14 he learned the truth about where he came from and was told the truth about him. he also learned he had a brother. knowing that he went to camp and met his brother.
RP Example*: Mylo walked in to the cabin befuddled. why was the cabin so dirty. like really people in his cabin could just blow the dust away using their powers.  he then blew the dust into one corner and blew it out the door. he flopped on his bunk and day dreamed about being a ninja.
Any notes about your characters:

Add more to the personality. Make it at least two lines long.

A/P:
- What is the range of his first ability?
- Our maximum wind speed is 55 mph, so please reduce all the speeds.
- Our maximum height for flying is about 25-30 ft, so reduce that too.
- What is the range of his gusts of wind and tornadoes?

LBC:
- He was born 8 months after Rhy? Was Rhy premature or what?
- How did Rhy and Mylo never meet if they had the same grandparents? Did he never visit them?
- Blowing down schools sounds... excessively powerful.
- What is this "shady infantry" business?

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Add more to the personality.

For his second flaw, do you mean he's just a sore loser/immature?

A/P:
- Does that range for his abilities apply to the first two?
- Knock off one usage for the first power.
- Not sure why you need a length x width x height value -- you would really just need to tell me the range and the length of the wave of wind.
- How does he create the wind?
- How long does it take to form a tornado?
- Reduce the width of the tornado a bit. (I'm assuming one of the 7 values is a width, anyway.)
- Reduce the wind speed and time for his flying ability.

LBC:
- So... his mom got pregnant with him as soon as Rhy was born? Space out the pregnancy a bit more, I'm sure the first thing to avoid after giving birth would be pregnancy.
- I'm assuming his mother told his grandparents everything about his godly parentage?

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As I stated in the chatbox: You didn't edit. (There's a little thing at the end of your form that tells me how many times you've edited and when -- it says you edited about 20 minutes ago.)

Also, I should note that the flying speed maximum would be 25 mph. (Sorry I didn't say that before.)

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You still need to do what I asked in regards to his personality and second flaw.

A/P:
- You need to answer my first bullet about his abilities.
- Reduce the length of his first power to about his height.
- Reduce the number of usages for the tornado power.
- When he makes the tornado, does the 30 second creation time count as part of his 3 minute time limit?

LBC:
- Space out Rhy and Mylo's births by at least another six months. (I'm still severely questioning why his mother would have gotten into another relationship almost as soon as her first son was born.)
- How did his grandparents react to him using his powers and destroying things -- did they see what he was doing or did the Mist cover it up?