Twine- daughter of Athena

Name: Twine Dover

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Eyes: grey

Hair: short, dyed white. Natural hair color, light brown

Height:5'5

Body Type: Curvy, but still in shape

Skin Color: tan

God Parent: Athena

Mortal Parent: Mark Dover

Country of Origin: USA

Pets: none

Talents: spelling, card tricks, paper crafts

Weapon: Celestial bronze sword

Personality: Twine is usually non social, and spends most of her time making crafts, or learning new things. She likes to give whether its her opinion or something she made. Her favorite past time is correcting people. She can be persuasive when she wants to be, and she's not afraid to lie.  She has a tough exterior, As she isn't always happy shes a half-blood, but if you actually become her friend, she will do anything for you. Her most noticeable traits are her dishonesty, creativeness, and determination

Flaws: Lazy, dishonest, snobbish, rude.

Abilities: none

Powers: none

Life Before Camp: Twine's life before camp was perfect to her. She had her dad Mark, and a stepmom named Erin who both loved her very much. She was a grade ahead, and was at the top of her class. She didn't have many friends as she spent most of her time reading studying, or crafting, but the two she did have were very close. She was working hard to get scholarships, and wanted to go overseas to study.

She had a 3 monster encounters one each day before her 13th birthday, She tried to rationalize them. Each attack a hellhound. the first one she saw was in her front yard, she told herself was a weird dog   that probably had rabies, and she was able to run in and call animal control. The one on the next day was a little bit bigger. Luckily she was leaving from the library and got help from a classmate. The classmate was a satyr that was actually sent to help another student, but she ran before he could say something. Since its attack was on a Friday he did not see her at school the next day.

The day before her birthday she was celebrating with her friend, when a huge hellhound attacked.  Her friend unable to see through the mist thought it was a dog, but Twine saw the giant hellhound . They were cutting through an alley to get to her favorite cafe. They could try to run, but Twine knew they couldn't out run it. It didn't move, when they didn't move, so Twine came up with an idea. She had her friend and herself go out towards the sides of the alley painfully slow. The hellhound kept its eyes on her. Twine decided she would need to distract it. She told her friend to run and get help while she distracted it with trashcans. Hiding behind them and throwing things at other groups of cans to  cause misdirection. She had to dive into a low window to finally escape

Her father took her to Camp Half Blood  the next day on her 13th birthday. He told her who her mother is. She accepted it thinking it was a joke, or some dream. After she could actually see that it was true, she had a hard time accepting it, but eventually learned to.

RP Example: I run down the hill, holding up my belt. I can see the others pairing up. If I get paired with Celeste again I will actually die. I try to pick up my pace but lose my footing in the dewy grass. I tumble down the hill, my daggers, luckily sheathed, jab into my knee. I roll to a stop a few feet away from everyone. A shadow looms over me. I look up to see the bright red hair of Celeste.
"looks like you're my partner buddy."

Any notes about your characters: Will love you if you buy her food

Is her hair dyed or is it a very pale blonde?

LBC:
- What kinds of monsters attacked her?
- How frequent were these attacks?
- I suppose Athena told her father about camp before she left him?
- How old was she when she got to camp?

Answered almost all the questions, but yes Athena told her dad.

LBC:
- Any other attacks? You state she had multiple encounters.
- You also haven't told me how frequent the attacks were.
- Elaborate more on the hellhound attack she had. Where was she, how did she escape from it, etc?

I tried to answer those questions in the second and third paragraphs of LBC

If a Satyr came to help her, why didn't he say anything about camp? The satyr would realise it was a hellhound and thus deduce that this girl is a Demigod, so surely he wouldnt just be silent there?

also, whilst her hair is dyed white, what is her natural hair colour too?

Hopefully got it covered now in paragraph two of LBC, and I added her natural hair color.

Approved