unnaproved Satyr

Name: Tyler
Age: 17 (Physically. 34 Chronologically)
Gender: guy
Type of Creature (satyr, naiad, nymph, or dryad): satyr
Description (looks): black messy hair. 6 feet tall, muscular, and intimidating. Blue eyes. normally wears a sleeveless shirt.
Powers: can make trees, grass and 1 inch thick vines grow to 10 feet on command by whistling but takes 2 posts and he has to wait 4 post before doing it again
Personality: Always happy and serious. can get really deep into a conversation. has a sweet tooth. Tries to be friends with new demigods he meets. Tries to ignore and avoid people he dislikes. If people attack him verbally or physically, he is quick to anger so, he will shove them and possibly hurt them physically
Flaws: usually does not understand jokes people tell him (which often makes it hard for him to make friends). Always needs a logical explanation. Never wants Adri to do tings that he thinks are to dangerous. Doesn't care how he looks (never really brushes his hair). Anger issues (gets tempted to use his powers on someone pretty easily).
Skills: very strong (people often go to him if they need to move/carry something heavy)
Weapons**: 2 little celestial bronze knifes he hides in his clothes
Talents/Skills: very good sword fighter. Sneaky.
RP Example*: Tyler was sitting in a tree by the lake clearing his head when Adri walked by. She climbed up and sat next to him. "what ya doin'?" she asked. "oh, just thinking" Tyler responded. "what about?" said Adri. "things" Tyler said with a smile. "that gives me SO much information!" Adri said sarcastically. They both laughed. Tyler look at Adri. Life was good.


(OOC: Adri is one of my characters)

Remember that satyrs age half as fast as regular mortals -- is he 17 physically and 34 chronologically?

Add a bit more detail to his appearance. What's his eye color? Height? What does he wear usually?

Powers:
- Add in limits for this. What's the largest thing he can grow? How many posts does this take? What's the cool-down between uses?

Add more to his personality -- maybe 2-3 more traits.

Flaws:
- I suppose the joke flaw hinders him from making friends often?
- Add another 2 flaws.
- (Not all kids of Athena need logical explanations for jokes?)
- Who is Adri -- a character of yours/a friend's?
- How overprotective is he?

Are his knives CB?

Your RP Example reads more like just a description/exposition than an RP -- maybe add action to it?

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You still need to answer the following questions:
- What are his weapons made of?
- For powers: How many posts does this take? What's the cool-down between uses? (I'm assuming when you mean 7 feet that he's limited to things that are up to 7 ft tall.)
- For flaws, you didn't answer my question about how overprotective he is of Adri and didn't add the other two flaws.

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Please add in that his chronological age is 34.

Powers:
- Can he make any plant grow up to 10 feet, or only the ones that naturally can reach 10 feet like trees?
- You need to put the limits in number of posts, not in minutes/hours. For example, you could say he can take up to 3 posts to make something grow, but must wait 5 before using the power again.

Add more to the personality.

Please add that his knives are Celestial Bronze, not just bronze -- there is a difference.

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Powers:
- I think I'm gonna say no to him making any plant, including flowers, grow up to 10 feet if they don't naturally grow to that height. 
- Please put his cooldown time into number of posts, rather than just saying half an hour.

You still need to add more to the personality.

updated. can you please give an example of cooldown time into number of post

Powers:
- An example of a cooldown could be something like "it takes him 3 posts to recover before being able to use his power again." Usually cooldowns for offensive powers like manipulation of anything should be equal to or greater than the duration of the power.
- How thick are the vines?

The personality traits you've added are more like talents. Consider adding things like how he deals with meeting new people, interacts with enemies/people he doesn't like, elaborate on what you mean by "strong," how he responds to hardship, etc.

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don't know if I did the powers right

Powers:
- You formatted the cooldown right, but you'll need to bump it up by maybe 1-2 posts.
- Also, how does he go about growing the plants? Does he play on pipes/a flute/whatever Grover Underwood used to perform woodland magic? 

Personality:
- Move his "strong" trait to his Skills section. It's not a personality trait unless you mean he can handle emotional/mental stress well.
- "Tries to avoid people he dislikes." --> So he's not a confrontational person?
- "If people attack him verbally or physically, he will shove them and possibly hurt them physically" --> Is he quick to anger?

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Add another post or two to the cool down.

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Approved.