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    Harmegei


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    Post by Harmegei 2/10/2024, 8:45 pm

    Name: Tiffany "Tiff" Svetlaina
    Physical age: 31
    Actual age/Year of birth: 1985
    Gender: Female, Non-Binary
    Eyes: Gray, almost black
    Hair: Black
    Height: 5'9
    Body Type: Strong, built, broad shoulders
    Skin Color: pale
    Mortal Parents: Captain James Yew and Anastasia Svetlaina
    Country of Origin: USA
    Pets: None
    Talents: Survival, Most combat platforms of both modern and ancient variety, strength and stability under pressure.
    Weapon**: A sword with narrow hilt and straight blade.
    Personality: Stoic, reserved. They can easily be taken as being cold or mean, but in fact is just direct. This comes from her insecurity when not in control of a situation.
    Flaws: How direct they can be, how they can never forgive a failure in themselves. She has a fear of fire ants
    Life Before Valhalla*:Born in the US to her air force father, she would be orphaned by 7 when a monster collided with their vehicle from a fight. Passed around the country in foster homes and orphanages, at 18 they enlisted in the air force as well. Serving in the war in Afghanistan until her death, it occurred in the withdrawal in 2021. An explosion having caught their hanger on fire, it was their final actions before flames swallowed them to save several of their comrades. As they burned, looking into the flames, a Valkyrie saved them and brought them to Valhalla.
    RP Example*: Tiff exhaled, feeling the tension release from her root chakra, the energy of her meditation rising ever upwards. Breathing in...
    A bang.
    Their eyes darted open, searching the immediate exits to the room-door and window, then her sword.
    Another bang.
    Latching the leather belt into place their stride took them to the door listening..
    Another bang.
    With one hand on their hilt, fingers in familiar recesses, the other gripped the door handle, likewise full of possibilities. Starting boldly into the hall they paused.
    It was nothing, just drunken sisters in the preservation of warriors, stumbling down the hallway.
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    Post by Morgan Landry 2/12/2024, 8:44 am

    Hey! Just 3 things:

    - Is Yoni short for something? (Also you might want to check some of the connotations of the name)
    - can you develop their personality and flaws sections a bit more? You need 1 more flaw
    - What happened to her mother?

    Rest looks good!
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    Post by Harmegei 2/14/2024, 2:33 pm

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    Post by Morgan Landry 2/15/2024, 9:50 am

    - Please narrow down the combat styles she's good at to one or two - since she's not a demigod, it doesn't make sense for her to know most combat styles, especially ancient ones
    - a fear is not a flaw. Is she judgemental? Possessive? Unable to take criticism? That kind of stuff.
    - Please expand more on the personality, it currently boils down to one trait.
    - if she's mortal, why did a monster kill her parents?

    Rest is good

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