A.M.'s Characters

Here's my application form:
Demigod Form:

Name: Kelly Davies

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Eyes: Greyish but with a little of blue

Hair: Brown

Height: 3.37 "/1,70 m

Body Type: thin with some well-defined muscles

Skin Color: tan

God Parent: Athena

Mortal Parent: Zack Fair

Country of Origin: Portugal

Pets: little eagle called Z. Caracther found her when coming to camp.

Talents: able to escape from tricky situations, very good at lieing

Skills: Sword Fighting, Brains

Weapon: long sword called snowy

Flaws: ambicious

Powers(must relate to god parent): hasn't developed yet a power

Life Before CHB: Kelly Davies was born in Portugal but because of her stepmother and father work, had to move various times, ending up in the USA. Never had a single boyfriend because she understood that trouble always came to her somehow. Went to a public school and met her best friend, Kate. Developed a crush on one of the most popular guys. Was expelled from the school after missing classes almost everyday since she always had a little trouble in understanding what the teachers wrote and completely freaked out everytime she saw a spider. When she turned 12, strange things started chasing her. Her stepmother didn't believe her. Her father only sighed. Kelly Runned Away when she understood that the "things" continued to chase her and would probably end up hurting someone else.

RP Example: Another stupid day in her life. She really hated having to go home. Sometimes it was easier to pretend she didn't need to but she knew better than to skip dinner. Her stupid stepmother would yell at her and headaches were something she didn't have the time to worry about. Specially after she had started to see "things" that weren't supposed to be real. To make things better, Kate was beginning to think she was a little crazy and used every single oportunity to mock her. So yes, another stupid day in her life.

Any notes about your characters: Is better at dealing with older persons but sucks at dealing with feelings so, normally people don't warm much to her; doesn't like to take orders, tends to get in trouble a lot of times. Says more than she should. Tends to care more about others than herself, which leads to trouble. Can be very annoying sometimes and when she gets pissed off, she gets really pissed off. Can be very cold when she wants to

add more flaws

I'm not really sure what's a flaw but i think i did it right this time. Sorry, i'm not english.
Hope it's okay now

flaw, like something that would make someone not like that character or something that would make that character less useful if someone found out about it. something like that.
but there should more flaws, maybe about four.

Ah, okay thanks! Now I get it, sorry again.
I edited

okay, i think its good, but just wait till an admin looks over it

Here's my application form:
Demigod Form:

Name: Jason Stevens

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Brown

Height: 3.37 "/1,70 m

Body Type: thin with some well-defined muscles

Skin Color: tan

God Parent: Apollo

Mortal Parent: Amanda Stevens

Country of Origin: England

Pets: Little puppy who always follows him around. Name's Puck.

Talents: can sing and has some medical skills

Skills: Good at archery and at medical stuffs.

Weapon: Bow called Fiery

Flaws: Stubborn, Not much talkative, Can be pretty boring, clumsy, hates to take orders

Powers(must relate to god parent): Heals fast but stil needs to rest

Life Before CHB: Jason Stevens lived in England before he moved to USA. Lived with his mother and little brother, Ryo. Went to School and tried to be like a normal kid and was able to get average grades. Started behaving like a rebel after his best friend went missing. Went to a milatary academy on Summers, where he developed some of his skills.
At the age of 14, started being followed by some monsters. Even though he could deal with them he believed he was getting a little crazy. He eventually told his mother and she smiled saddly and told him he was a half-blood. Dealed with it better than he thought he would.

RP Example: Another simple day on the Academy. It passed by fast since it was Friday. In the end of the day he met with some guys and they went out.
When he was left alone in the bar because all of his friends had found a date, he started sulking and re-thinking about his missing best friend. That was really getting him down.
After some drinks (FANTA) , he left the bar and head straight home.
It didn't matter how much he wanted to forget. All he could do was pretend it didn't hurt him. But it did. Once he got home, he saw Ryo sleeping on the couch and smiled.
When he went to bed, he quickly felled asleep but the dreams that filled his head next, were something he wasn't expecting.

Any notes about your characters: Can be really sweet when he wants to but, when he's pissed off, he says to much then starts feeling a little guilty.

Just healing himself fast?

I edited. Hope it's good that way.

Name: Ryo Stevens

Age: 9

Gender: Male

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Brown

Height: 1, 15 m

Body Type: thin

Skin Color: tan

God Parent: Apollo

Mortal Parent: Amanda Stevens

Country of Origin: England

Pets: None

Talents: Can play the drums and is fast at running.

Skills: Good at archery and at medical stuffs.

Weapon: None

Flaws: Stubborn, clumsy, hates to take orders, believes everything in life is good.

Powers(must relate to god parent): Doesn’t get sunburns and heals fast.

Life Before CHB: Ryo was a kid that had lived in England before moving to USA with his older brother and his mother. He always thought his brother was his hero and always wanted to be like him. In school, he wasn’t that good, since he seemed to only be a Casanova all the time. When his brother went to the military academy he was very sad and missed him a lot. In that time, he focused on learning how to treat girls, like a true Casanova.
At the age of 9, his brother left for Camp Half Blood. Soon after his mother told him, he had to go too, before the monsters started coming. He couldn’t stop jumping around for he was finally going to see his brother again.

RP Example: He missed his brother. Yes, it was for the best but he still missed him. As he walked through the street he saw a girl crying and he walked towards her. He picked a flower from the ground and as he reached the girl he asked “Why are you crying miss?” She looked at him and answered him that sometimes life didn’t go the way it had been planned. “Well, you shouldn’t cry. Girls shouldn’t cry” He gave her the flower and as she asked him why, he simply said “’Cause boys are supposed to give pretty things to pretty persons” The girl smiled and he smiled too.

Any notes about your characters: Likes to follow his older brother around and made him promise he’d always treat a girl with respect. Can only sleep with his blanket.

How fast does he heal?

Not too quickly.
Instead of taking three months, a broken arm for him takes one and half.
A scratch takes 10 minutes.
Something like that

Approved.