*Alice Xanche's Characters

Use better grammer I cant understand you

now is it "perfect grammar"

What do you mean by fades

like vanishes do you want me to put that instead

Do you mean "faints"?

If you slash a skeleton/whatever in half, does it "disappear" or "die"?

WHAT

Name:Velma nook
Age:14
Gender:female
Eyes:brown
Hair:red
Height:55''
Body Type:slim
Skin Color:light tan
God Parent:aphrodite
Mortal Parent:freddy nook
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: n/a
Talents: drawing, volleyball,texting
Skills: archery, sword fight, medical care, battle strategies
Weapon: a bow and celestial bronze arrows and a secret celestial bronze dagger
Flaws: Quiet, Eavesdropper, Agressive, Holds on to nothing
powers:make a boy a girl in love for a minute
life before chb*: Velma lived in down town Jacksonville, Florida before she came to Camp Half-Blood. She always felt lonely because her mother "left her" and her father was too obsessed with his career and never paid much attention to her. Then one day, when she was 7 years old, she couldn't take it anymore, so she ran away from home. Three months later, she was attacked by a monster and she didnt know what to do. But her mother "spoke" to her and lead her to the nearest known area.
RP Example*:as i was wandering around when i ran awayb i couldnt find my self.i said lets face it im lost and i sat dont in the middle of no were.but then as aa was looking aroung i found a forest.there was a sign but sence i have dislexia i couldnt read the sign i think it said ewelcoem ht teo ganiaiar troesf.well it was confusing but then i found camp halfblood and i could read the sign.

Like so Not powers do something like Talking to cows or Peackocks but plus I odnt think there allowing Hera kids right now So I would maybe chnage the parent and No being Imortal

Yeah, no Hera kids, and no being immortal.

And Your flaws arent exactly flaws

If a person comes along and cuts it in half does it die or Just dissappear
and Plus like she cant fade when she does that so

you are not going to be approving my character form kendal is and you dont know that just please stop i know you are trying to help put please jusst please dtop

now are they hahahaha

No Shooting love arrows is not a power and No making love poisens

I know how to get it so it will be approved so Yeah and Im not planing to stop helping with forms its like my job

sorry i went all haywire cause its stressing changing and organising things so thank you very much

now

Name:scot breaux
Age:13
Gender:male
Eyes:blue
Hair:blond
Height:5'2"
Body Type: fit
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:thalia
Mortal Parent:N/A
Country of Origin:usa
Pets:n/a
Talents:fencing
Skills:sword fighting
Weapon:a sword
Flaws:loyalty,moody a lot,much to sneaky
Powers:can make people do comedy drama and say poetry.(4 is limit)For 2 minutes
Life Before CHB:scot grew up in a hospital all his life.When he was 12 she met a girl at his school.one day he acidently made her become a comedian in front of the hole school because he wanted to give it to her as a gift but then she went to clown school for college and she lost her tallent less than two minute.a week later scot ended up in the hospital because he tried to comit suicide on himself and one day he met a docter named monster he ran out of the hospital and went all haywire then killed dr.monster.Then he felt like a monster so he ran all the way to some camp(chb).
RP Example:I walked into my cabin giggling about the zues cabin making it rain on the pretties girls on athenas cabin.but then i god i trouble. I decide to head to the arena.When i get there I made her be funny so i can like her more.but then when i did that she became so mad but she didnt know it was me so i was good but i did run back to the thalia cabin!

No raining money.

You mean for a minute?

can you approve the mary gorman charie

Are you gonna answer my questions or not?

how about raining food!

yeah that

oh whut