magnetonrobo's characters

Name:percy
Age:12
Gender:male
Eyes:brown
Hair:black
Height:6'2"
Body Type:a
Skin Color:wite
God Parent:apollo
Mortal Parent:unkown
Country of Origin:u.s.
Pets:dog
Talents:runing
Skills:speed
Weapon:spear
Flaws:hates to get wet and hights and being alone
Powers(must relate to god parent):exlant at playing music
Life Before CHB*:a/b school student and made firends with a kid named grover. had a good year of school. me and my family to an amusment park and got attacked by a monster. grover came out of no where and took me to camp. i had a long night being chased by a tiger
RP Example*:chased by a tiger to cbh and was told i was the son of apollo.i met my cabin family .almost got swerled by joe but escaped. ate dinner and prayed to apollo. finally went to bed after haveing a long day
Any notes about your characters:loves to listen to music

No Zeus kids.

Life Before CHB is a description of the character's life before camp. Must be five sentences long.

RP Example needs to be five sentences long too. It's like this: I kicked the cat. It yowled and bit my leg.

Add more flaws.

Life Before CHB and RP Example need to be five sentences long each.

For powers, what do you mean by "music"?

Add another flaw.

Approved.

Name:justin
Age:11
Gender:male
Eyes:green
Hair:brown
Height:4"7'
Body Type:skinny
Skin Color:white
God Parent:ares
Mortal Parent:unknow
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:a wolf
Talents:strength
Skills:fighting
Weapon:sword
Flaws:anger manegment, hates to get wet, afraid of snakes
Powers(must relate to god parent):none
Life Before CHB*:im a C school student and made firends with a kid named jacob. i had a good year of school. me and my family to an park and got attacked by a monster. jacob came out of no where and took me to camp. i had a long night being chased by a bear
RP Example*:i was chased by a bear to camp half blood and was told i was the son of ares.theni met my cabin family .i almost got swerled by bill but escaped. i ate dinner and prayed to ares. i finally went to bed after having a long day.
Any notes about your characters:loves to get in fights

Didnt you already make a topic for this charctor? And yet again PUT IT UNDER UNAPPROVED CHARACTOR FORMS NOT JUST UNDER CHARACTOR FORMS.
Make your RP example better and explain your power more.

Your powers are called instincts.

Name:tommy
Age:8
Gender:male
Eyes:green
Hair:brown
Height:4'5"
Body Type:skinny
Skin Color:white
God Parent:apollo
Mortal Parent:unknow
Country of Origin:U.S.A.
Pets:none
Talents:arechy
Skills:reading
Weapon:sword
Flaws:hates hights, spidres and snakes
Powers(must relate to god parent):never gets hot
Life Before CHB*:i lived on the street until someone picked him up. i stayed at a school until i made friends with a kid named andrew. i stayed ay his house till werid thins started happening. one day at school a monster atcked. then andrew tunred in to a half goat thing we escaped the monster and got to camp
RP Example*:i was chased by a monster to camp half blood i was so tired. Then i was told i was the son of apollo. then i met my cabin family . I ate dinner and prayed to apollo.then i finaly went to bed after a long day.
otes about your characters:loves archery and is very shy

Hair color drown? And your power is not a power. your RP example isnt really a RP example

ok


tommy son of apollo

no healing charactors. and still RP example is not a RP example

what is wrong with my RP

It's not actually Role-play.

how can i fix it

Example:

I ran through the woods, tired as Hades.

Something like that.

how bout now

/facepalm

Whatever.

Your power isn't a power.

k

Meh....

Approved.

Barely.

can your look at him now

your power isnt a pwoer

do i have to have a power

No.

how is it now