Skyler's Characters

Life Before CHB is supposed to be a biography of what the character's life was like before CHB. Where was she born, how was she raised, etc. Five sentences.

RP Example needs to be five sentences.

How much snow can she make, in inches? How many times a day?

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Life before CHB needs to be 5 sentences. You still need another sentence in RP example. How long does it take for the 2inches of snow to come down?

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Approved.

Name: kara simmon
Age:15
Gender:f
Eyes:black
Hair:blonad
Height: 5'4''
Body Type:tall athletic
Skin Color:tan
God Parent: iaso
Mortal Parent:mark simmon
Country of Origin:canada
Pets:blue phinox
Talents:medicans,archery
weopn: hair pin/silver bow and returning arrows
arent; optional):can quickly heal small ingerys,( minor sword cuts, ect) 10-12 times a day(slowly heals like gets smaller then turns to nothing)
Life Before CHB*:she always volenntered at hospitals. was great with kids school was alway tough for her. she would always get picked on and in trouble.she would sit by her self in almost anyclass and never had any friends.she always wanted to know who her mom was but her dad would give her a sad face and say"not now".

RP Example*:I ran up the hill with the saytar who had been with me all year. he told me to run up to the to of the hill and go to the big house. i had no idea what he was talking about but i still ran. i came to the creat of the hill and ran through the gate. i stoped running and the saytar walked me to the big house.
y notes about your characters:year rounder

You might want to fix the grammar/spelling errors in your form... And do you mean Iaso for your god parent? I can't approve, but I'm just trying to help make your form more appealing and easier to get approved (:

What BA said and how small of an injury? and how many itmes a day? and how fast is quickly?

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Does the wound go "poof" when she heals them?

no like what happens to percy in the first book when he steps in the water

What do "returning arrows" do? Do they come back after they've been fired?

yea like percys pen it may take i few sec but the come back

What happens if they break?

umm then their broken and the magic is broken

You know that usual is what happens, right?

yeah but i figured i should respond

*sigh*

How many returning arrows?

:/
25 thats whats in a arrow normall thing

Approved.

Name:bella black
Age:13
Gender:girl
Eyes:black/red
Hair:straight black
Height:5'6
Body Type:thin, tall
Skin Color:white
God Parent:thantos
Mortal Parent:livan black
Country of Origin:canada
Pets:eastern dimondback snake
Talents:sword fighting
Weapon**:cb sword
Flaws:short tempered, wants do do things by her self, tempted into fights easly
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*:bella left her mother after a fight.,and never saw her again. she was on the run with the money she stole from her mother for two years.well she was beiing chased by an monster she acsidently passed through the border of camp half blood. And the monster stoped not able to get through she looked at the arch "camp hald bblood" she read to her. self.
RP Example*:i walked around seeing kids battleing looking for where i was sopposed to go. Never mind i can do this by myself she said looking for her cabin.
Any notes about your characters:year round

Approved.

Name:Emma smith
Age:11
Gender:girl
Eyes:sky gray/blue
Hair:sandy blond
Height:4'4
Body Type:short, skinny
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Aeolus;god of winds
Mortal Parent:brooklyn smith
Country of Origin:england
Pets:a hawk
Talents:can ride the winds,
Weapon**:sword and dagger
Flaws:doesnt take critisesem well,make enemys eaisly,self confidence
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):riding the winds)if there is a wind she can find it and almost "jump"onto it and ride it,wind storm(3-5 mph) last about 10-15 minutes
Life Before CHB*: Emma never waas good in school with her dyslexia and adhd. She was always reckless and hatted when people told her what to do.Her mom was rich and almost never saw her. Her mom was pretty much their nanny,emily.she loved painting and charity.
RP Example*:emily ran with me up the hill well a monster chased us she pushed right past a tree before the monster attacked and killed her. i sat on the hill crying for hours untill i passed out. later someone was feeding me somthing like pudding but i couldnt make out the flavor. that night i woke up and got up i remembered emily and pulled out a picture i always had in my pocket of me and emily in florda for my 10 birthday.
Any notes about your characters:
english acent, year rounder

Riding the winds? How? And how strong are her wind storms, and how long do they last?

"Aoulos" is not a god. Please try again. Do you mean "Aeolus"?

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