Violette Krystall

I also edited the talents so it's not everything

Double-posting helps you none.

1 mile is still way too long.

Her talents are quite ridiculous and unrealistic. 10 Nobel peace prizes? Winning the Olympics at the age of 2? Come on.

Edited that and some other things.

Her eyes cannot be "gamma ray colored" since Gamma rays are not visible to the naked eye, therefore, not having "color," so to speak.

Her hair cannot be infinitely long, nor laced with gemstones.

She can't be 40ft tall.... seriously.

Edited once more.

Her hair just can't glow... sorry.

No one is 4 inches tall.

Dang...it's one of her flaws though. Also edited the hair thing

Again, no human/demigod is 4 inches tall. Try and be a little more realistic...

Edited again

Supermodels may be super skinny, but they aren't normally "fit and healthy" as you described.

Life before CHB needs to be at least 5 sentences long.
Also, the rp example has nothing to do with your character...

So you read it? I feel happy!

-_- Okay. Well. I have to go now. Someone else can help you later. Try and look through your form. Make sure everything is as realistic as possible.

Okay. Edited again.
Now that I made my character less unacceptable, you could use the original thing as how not to make a character.

No dragons.