What hurts the most.

She picked up a glittering hair brush and gently brushed her brunette hair until it was smooth. She went into her bathroom and began taking a shower.

Meanwhile, Sunni Menner was standing in a small room with red carpets. She was wearing a white dress that puffed out at the bottem. In her hands, she held a bundle of bright sunflowers. Her heart pouded. She stepped forward and a pair of large white doors swung open.

She walked forward, ready to meet her future husband, Keith. Suddenly, her heart dropped. There was no Keith to be found. Her head twisted to the side, and her eyes rested on her mother, who was trembling and shaking her head.

Sunni felt her knees giving out as her vision blurred. She fell to the gound, her heart throbbing in her chest.

sounds good maddy!

Thanks. ^^



"Danni?" peeped a small voice. The room was dark and warm and the wind blew loudly outside.
"Yes, Cherri?" Responded a girl who was stroking the other girl's soft hair.
"What if they don't come back?" Danni cuddled Cherri in her arms.
"Don't talk like that, Cherri, dear. They will come back. They always do."
"But what is they don't."
"They will."
Danni Malcut stroked the soft hair of Cherri Dontay as they kept warm in Danni's bedroom, waiting.

"I miss mommy," whispered Cherri. Danni felt warm drops of water on her arm, and knew they were the tears of her beloved step sister, Cherri. The tears amde her heart sink deeper and deeper.

"I miss her too," said Danni with hollow longing, "I miss her too." Cherri sniffed with her little nose. She batted her big round eyes and curled her little body up against Danni.

"Having mommy here," Cherri said in her small, shaking voice, "Is worth all the yelling. When mommys not here, I don't feel s-s-safe." Danni hugged Cherri warmly.

"I'll keep you safe, Cherri-blossom," Danni said, "I'll keep you safe."

"I love you, Danni," Cherri said as she put her little arms around her.

"I love you too, Cherri."

Meanwhile, a boy about 16 was walking down the empty streets. As he walked past Danni's house he stopped. After looking at it for a while and walked on, whispering, "Nope. Someone's in there," to himself.

His black trench coat flowd behind him and his light brown hair rested in front of his dark red eyes. On his feet were big black boots, and in his hand, was a silver gun, loaded and ready to shoot.

Meanwhile, Sunni Menner sat on her porch and watched moths fly around her porch light, aimlessly. She felt her cheek and noticed that she had been crying again. Her blonde hair felol nicely on her shoulders and her brown eyes began to lock on her silver engagment ring. Finally, she could stand it no longer. She stood up and slipped the ring off her finger. As she walked down her concreet steps, her feet sent a chill up her spine. It was a summer night, but Sunni shivered in spite of that. She slowly walked to her garden and dropped to her knees. With her hands, she dug a small hole, dropped the ring in, and covered the hole back up.

Before going back into her house, where she would only lay awake in bed, she looked back where the ring was.

"If I can't forget Keith, maybe I can just forget that I was ever in love with him." She went inside the house.

This is good :) Your a good writer!

I like it

Whoa, thanks guys. 0.0

I totally forgot about this! xD I should pick it up. Thanks so much for reading! <3 ^^ :3

No problem! :)
You should pick this one up I want to know how it ends.

Okay, yeah! Maybe I will. Thanks! <3 :3 ^^

cool

Cant wait for more!