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Name: Acacia Ivy
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: robins egg (turquoise)
Hair: Bronze Brown
Height: 5'6"
Body Type: Slim
Color: Tan
Greek God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: Christopher Ivy
Country of Origin: America
Talent: Writing, Music
Weapon**: celetial bronze Owl Hair Clip that turns into a sword
Flaws: Very Stubborn. She has her own imagination so she always has a counter example of how i could go. when she starts something she can't stop no matter what. verry impulsive
RP: Acacia ran as fast as she can. No way she was going to look back, not after...... no she can't think about that. All she has to do is find a camp. Why did Eliza tell her that she 'd meet her there. "You will know it when you see it." Eliza told her that. Acacia tripped over a rock. "HAHA I found you demigod!" The monster said. Why did he keep on saing that? Acacia got back on her feet. She kept on running. "You can't run forever demigod!" It said. For some reason, Acacia took off her clip. It transformed into a sword, "Woa, ok monster, eat, what is this bronze?" She poked the monster a couple times. "What will that do?" It asked. Then Acacia got an idea,she slashed the monster. When it fell she ran ontop of him, past a pine tree . The monstergot up but did not move. "Haha who's laughing now!" Acacia screamed, then she turned around and saw why he didn't move. An army of kids was lined up but in front of them was, Eliza? But this wasn't Eliza, this was goat Eliza. "Who are you?" One camper said. "I'm, Acacia, and can someone explain this all to me?" "Welcome to Camp Halfblood, safest place for us on Earth."

Life Before CHB*: Acacia allways felt like an outsider and there was more to her than a girl who works at her father's bookstore. But she felt like there was places but she didn't know where. No matter how awesome her ideas are, no one cared for her because she was some weirdo. She had alot of friends including this hippie girl named Eliza. He dad didn't have time for her because he was always writing his stupid book.

Any notes about your character: vivid imagination (does that go there?)

Add one more flaw.

That power is not a power.

We only allow Celestial Bronze for Greeks.

I don't think we could allow people from CHB knowing people from CJ.

Also: In your form it says Roman God Parent instead of just God Parent or Greek God Parent.
Also you need to include a RP example

If you're going for a person in the Greek camp, I suggest you edit out the Roman part for God Parent, since Athena's not Roman.

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Name: Darcy Woods
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Blonde
Height: 4 ft 11
Body Type: slim
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: Connor Woods
Country of Origin: Great Brittain
Pets: a rabbit named Rain
Talents: Painting, acting
Weapon**: Bow and Arrow (CB)
Flaws: has to always be right, goes mute at the wrong times, has a diva-tude (acts like a diva)
Powers: none
Life Before CHB*: Darcy was the kind of girl who got mixed in with the popular people. She acted like the queen bee infront of people she didn't know, but when with her friends she was always the quiet one. He father was an actor so he always traveled to be on movies. She saw her dad on unwonted accasions and normally stayed with her "nanny", Marcie. She came to set with her father in New York because he said he wanted to bond, but really he dropped her off at CHB
RP Example*: I hurried along the side of a crowded street to catch up with my dad, "Why are you going so fast?" I asked. He didn't answer. What was his deal? He turned a corner so fast, I lost him, "Dad?" I started walking around the corner when a hand grabbed my mouth and pulled me, "Don't move," The muffeled voice said. I obbayed him. He pretended to be my dad as we walked towards what looked like a camp site. I saw my dad waiting at the post, "Dad?" "Go in there Darc" He said quietly. I stood still, not moving. The man pushed me in there and followed, but now he was a-a goat? "I tried to get to my dad but the goat wouldn't let me. "Your safe now," He cooed, "Safe."
Any notes about your characters: nope

The arrows are Celestial bronze, yes?

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Name: Nellie Armon
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: brown
Hair: red
Height: 5'3
Body Type: skinny
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent: Daniel Armon
Country of Origin: USA ( california)
Pets: none
Talents: plays the base, singer, plays badmition
Weapon**: CB sword
Flaws: slow thinker (prosseces stiff slower), anger issues, scared of hieghts
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can preform magic 5 times a day,it last 3 minuets, her attcks involve the elements, earth wind, fire, and water. She cant breath under water or be invulnerable to fire, but she can minipulate it so she can move a boulder (24x36) 5 feet away it can be 20-40 lbs, through a 2 ft long fire spiral (120 f), throw water (depth of a 5by8 vase), make a depression wind tunel wind tunnel is 9 feet long, 3 feet wide and 3 feet tall with wind speeds up to 50 mph (powers evolve with practice)
Life Before CHB*: Nellie was put in the special needs classes because it took her longer than any one else to answer because she had a reason, but she was scared to say it. Her dad was an architect so he pulled her out of 50 schools to travel to make buildings. ONe day they were in new york when she accedently wondered into camp. Chiron was suprised she found the camp and was claimed almost admediently. She never saw her dad again.
RP Example*: Nellie grew tired of waiting for her dad, "Ill be back!" she yelled as she left the new your office. Nellie wondered through the chaotic streets of manhattan until she got on a boat to the long island sound. "Wow," she muttered as she saw the skyline. Then she saw a camp on the sound, "Stop!" she yelled. The captin let her off of the boat to walk to what he thought was nothing. Nellie approached the camp, eyes wide. Then a horse man and a couple of children came out, blocking the entrance, "WHo are you!," the horse boomed, "Nellie," She replied, "Nellie Armon"

What kind of magic can she perform? You'll still need a limit to making things appear.

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We need to know excatly what she can do, how long it lasts, and how many times a day for each thing.
You need to elebrate more on how she attacks and what it does. You also need to elebrate more on what she can make appear

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So I assume you've listed her most powerful spells? How large is the boulder, and what is its weight? Is the fire spiral 2 ft long or wide? How large is the wind tunnel? (Are you telling us you can move a boulder through water, too?)

no, through was a typo
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How hot is her fire in degrees Fahrenheit? What's the weight of the boulder she can move (and are you measuring in inches, feet, etc)? You also still haven't told me the size of her wind tunnel.

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How fast is the wind in her wind tunnel? When you say 24x36 for her boulder, do you mean inches?

yes
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136 mph is way over our wind speed limit -- at most we'd allow around 50 mph or so.

ok
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Name: Louise Taylor
Age:14
Gender: female
Eyes: brown
Hair: Brown
Height: 5'3
Body Type: tall
Skin Color: white
Roman God Parent: Luna
Mortal Parent: Frank Taylor
Country of Origin: USA (california)
Talents: singer, combat skills
Weapon**: Imperial gold daggar
Flaws: hot headed, selfish, skeptic
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CJ*: Louise lived with her dad and twin sister Emma in sacramento, California. Sh was the queen bee at school so she expected every one to follow her. At home, she was abused by her father. She had so many bruses when she cam to school, her tachers called social sevices and took her father away. Lupa and her wolve found them when they went looking for family.
RP Example*: "We need to find Aunt Lin," I exclaimed. Emma shook her head, "No, she'll make us go to an orphanage." Em had a point, "Then what should we do?" I asked. "I-" Em started. As she tried to finnish her sentance a back of wolves came on to the road, "Emma and Louise Taylor?" it asked. "You-you can talk?" Emma stammered. "Yes," it replied. "Where are we going?" I asked, "To the Wolf house," she responded. "I thought those w-were myths," Emma said. The she wolf shook her head, "Prepare o be infor a shock."
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Name: Emma Taylor
Age:14
Gender: female
Eyes: brown
Hair: blonde
Height: 5'3
Body Type: tall
Skin Color: white
Roman God Parent: Luna
Mortal Parent: Frank Taylor
Country of Origin: USA (california)
Talents: singer, combat skills, athelete
Weapon**: Imperial gold swrod
Flaws: no respect fo authority, skeptic, claustrophobic
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CJ*: Emma lived with her dad and twin sister Louise in sacramento, California. She listened to no body other than her gut. At home, she was abused by her father. Shewas not given food for 3 days strait. her tachers called social sevices and took her father away. Lupa and her wolve found them when they went looking for family.
RP Example*: "We need to find Aunt Lin," Louise exclaimed. I shook my head, "No, she'll make us go to an orphanage." Louise stared at me for a little bit, "Then what should we do?" she asked. "I-" I started. As I tried to finnish my sentance a back of wolves came on to the road, "Emma and Louise Taylor?" it asked. "You-you can talk?" I stammered. "Yes," it replied. "Where are we going?" Louise asked nevously, "To the Wolf house," she responded. "I thought those w-were myths," I said. The she wolf shook her head, "Prepare o be infor a shock."
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