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Name: Michael Ray Lokus
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: Red
Hair: Blonde
Height:5'8"
Body Type: Lean
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Johan Lokus
Country of Origin: The Philippines
Pets: Small Hellhound(height- 25 inches)(from nose tip to tail - 24 inches) that can shadow travel 3 times a week, it can only go for around 2 miles
Talents: Playing Music with Drums
Weapon**: Blade, Spear (Both Celestial Bronze)
Flaws: Getting tricked, Afraid of Drowning, Sometimes out of control with rage because his defenses lower accurately
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):Can burst into rage when pissed off (he can go crazy fast like a champion marathon Runner( around 12 miles an hour) and as strong that he can carry a 600-lb Boulder with two hands with rage, it sets off if someone is defeating him on battle or sets of if he is being annoyed by people or monsters around him, it lasts for about 3 minutes or until the victim of his rage dies or gets defeated but it stays in him for 30 more seconds after the defeat or death of the victim. He can only do this 3 times a week)
Life Before CHB*: Michael Ray Lokus was a stubborn boy when it comes to Studying. He was a great drummer so he decided to try making a band. On his 13th birthday, he was playing with his band when suddenly, an explosion occurred and a Minotaur chased him around the streets. He was tired of running so he came to a stop and saw a gun on the Weapon Store nearby and stole it, but it was no use. Then his best friend Tyler went to him and gave him a heavy blade and slashed the Minotaur and turned into dust. Tyler accompanied Michael Ray to Camp-Halfblood where he trained there for 2 years.
RP Example*:I was just sitting by the beach when suddenly, an arrow stabbed itself on the sand next to me so I ran straight through the sand to get to my friends to tell them what happened when suddenly a sharp pain struck my thigh. It was my old enemy, Mitchel cray. I ran to get help but my thigh is slowing me down. It has an Arrow that penetrated my thigh. then another arrow hit my left hand. I cant afford to lose a battle so I grabbed a rock and flung it at him, I hit his shoulder but I was aiming at his head. It only slowed him down. As he notched an arrow, I ran straight to my friends when they saw me and another burst of pain went on my back, then I blacked out.
Any notes about your characters: He has ADHD and can break wood with his bare hands

Are your weapons CB?
Add 2 more flaws.
What can he do in this rage? What sets it off? for how long?
Make your RP example 5 sentences

Name: Michael Ray Lokus
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: Red
Hair: Blonde
Height:5'8"
Body Type: Lean
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Johan Lokus
Country of Origin: The Philippines
Pets: Small Hellhound(height- 25 inches)(from nose tip to tail - 24 inches) that can shadow travel 3 times a week, it can only go for around 2 miles
Talents: Playing Music with Drums
Weapon**: Blade, Spear (Both Celestial Bronze)
Flaws: Getting tricked, Afraid of Drowning, Sometimes out of control with rage because his defenses lower accurately
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):Can burst into rage when pissed off (he can go crazy fast like a champion marathon Runner( around 12 miles an hour) and as strong that he can carry a large boulder as heavy as around 10 tons with two hands with rage, it sets off if someone is defeating him on battle or sets of if he is being annoyed by people or monsters around him, it lasts for about 4.5 minutes or until the victim of his rage dies or gets defeated but it stays in him for 30 more seconds after the defeat or death of the victim. He can only do this 3 times a week)
Life Before CHB*: Michael Ray Lokus was a stubborn boy when it comes to Studying. He was a great drummer so he decided to try making a band. On his 13th birthday, he was playing with his band when suddenly, an explosion occurred and a Minotaur chased him around the streets. He was tired of running so he came to a stop and saw a gun on the Weapon Store nearby and stole it, but it was no use. Then his best friend Tyler went to him and gave him a heavy blade and slashed the Minotaur and turned into dust. Tyler accompanied Michael Ray to Camp-Halfblood where he trained there for 2 years.
RP Example*:I was just sitting by the beach when suddenly, an arrow stabbed itself on the sand next to me so I ran straight through the sand to get to my friends to tell them what happened when suddenly a sharp pain struck my thigh. It was my old enemy, Mitchel cray. I ran to get help but my thigh is slowing me down. It has an Arrow that penetrated my thigh. then another arrow hit my left hand. I cant afford to lose a battle so I grabbed a rock and flung it at him, I hit his shoulder but I was aiming at his head. It only slowed him down. As he notched an arrow, I ran straight to my friends when they saw me and another burst of pain went on my back, then I blacked out.
Any notes about your characters: He has ADHD and can break wood with his bare hands

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Can you define "crazy fast" and how strong he gets during this rage? 20 minutes is way too long for it to last; regularly for little power boosts like this, you get to do it for about five minutes. How many times a day would he be able to do this?

Can you define the size of his hellhound? Can it shadow-travel?

please approve my 2nd edit please

Can you define how fast said marathon runner is, and the weight and size of the boulder?

How many times a day can his hellhound shadow-travel, and how far can it go at most?

Name: Michael Ray Lokus
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: Red
Hair: Blonde
Height:5'8"
Body Type: Lean
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Johan Lokus
Country of Origin: The Philippines
Pets: Small Hellhound(height- 25 inches)(from nose tip to tail - 24 inches) that can shadow travel 3 times a week, it can only go for around 2 miles
Talents: Playing Music with Drums
Weapon**: Blade, Spear (Both Celestial Bronze)
Flaws: Getting tricked, Afraid of Drowning, Sometimes out of control with rage because his defenses lower accurately
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):Can burst into rage when pissed off (he can go crazy fast like a champion marathon Runner( around 12 miles an hour) and as strong that he can carry a large boulder as heavy as around 10 tons with two hands with rage, it sets off if someone is defeating him on battle or sets of if he is being annoyed by people or monsters around him, it lasts for about 4.5 minutes or until the victim of his rage dies or gets defeated but it stays in him for 30 more seconds after the defeat or death of the victim. He can only do this 3 times a week)
Life Before CHB*: Michael Ray Lokus was a stubborn boy when it comes to Studying. He was a great drummer so he decided to try making a band. On his 13th birthday, he was playing with his band when suddenly, an explosion occurred and a Minotaur chased him around the streets. He was tired of running so he came to a stop and saw a gun on the Weapon Store nearby and stole it, but it was no use. Then his best friend Tyler went to him and gave him a heavy blade and slashed the Minotaur and turned into dust. Tyler accompanied Michael Ray to Camp-Halfblood where he trained there for 2 years.
RP Example*:I was just sitting by the beach when suddenly, an arrow stabbed itself on the sand next to me so I ran straight through the sand to get to my friends to tell them what happened when suddenly a sharp pain struck my thigh. It was my old enemy, Mitchel cray. I ran to get help but my thigh is slowing me down. It has an Arrow that penetrated my thigh. then another arrow hit my left hand. I cant afford to lose a battle so I grabbed a rock and flung it at him, I hit his shoulder but I was aiming at his head. It only slowed him down. As he notched an arrow, I ran straight to my friends when they saw me and another burst of pain went on my back, then I blacked out.
Any notes about your characters: He has ADHD and can break wood with his bare hands

Please just edit your form.

A 10 ton boulder is far too much; at most, we'd allow around a 600-lb boulder.

He cant lift 10 tons but can limit to lift a 600-lb Boulder. please approve this character please

Done Sir ^^

Done sir, I edited for 3 minutes

Approved.