rachel jacksons life

name:Rachel jackson
age:11
gender female
eyes misty grey
hair dark brown with dark blue streaks
hieght 5'3"
body type petite
skin color light brown
god parent Athena
mortal parent nathaniel jackson
country of orgin america
talents arts and crafts karate and knowledge
weapon celestial bronze sword disguised as a pen
flaws scared of spiders, dont work well with others
powers telekaneses strategy
life befor chb:iwent to school for3 years then i went to private school for 1 got kicked out for fighting. i came to camp halfblood when i was 10 and have been there for 1 year.

If this was intended to be a character form for approval, then you put it in the wrong place; I moved it for you.

Telekinesis is not an Athena power, and strategy is not a power in general.

You need an RP Example, five sentences long; it's writing a story from your character's point of view.

Life Before CHB needs to be 5 sentences long, too.

Add another flaw.