charactor (approval please)

Name: Jesica (Jessi) Jewal
Age: 17
Gender: female
Eyes: green:
Hair: brown
Height: 5'4''
Body Type: lean
Skin Color: pale tan
Mother: Taylor Jewal
Father: Ares
Legacy of: electric spear
Country of Origin: U.S.A
Talents: singing & dancing
Weapon**: cross-bow
Flaws: failing a class
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none step-dad pushed her to study for her failing class yet she failed it all the time
Life Before CJ*:average high school "pop". shopping is her life. mom C&
RP Example*: We were just playing hide-&-seek. yet I heard leaf rustles & heard her scream yet I couldn't find her. I paniced & paniced.
Any notes about your characters: gets in trouble for texting.

Three flaws. Failing a class isn't a flaw. Please look over you form again, the rp example and life before CJ seems to be mixed in with the powers. Five sentences each for RP example and Life before CJ. Please use proper punctuation and spelling. You seemed to have a legacy form, in which the parents are either mortal or one them is a demigod. If you wanted to be demigod of Mars, please use the proper form. Additionally, Mars if the Roman form of Ares. If you wanted a Greek demigod form, then please copy that one and fill it out. Are the arrows of the crossbow celestial bronze?

Name: Annabell Guy
age:12
Gender : female
Eyes: Grayish-green
Hair: blonde
body type: lean
skin color: tan
Godly Parent: Athena
Mortal parent: Jake Guy
Country of Origin: U.S.A.
Pets: Dogs Fluffy Taco Angel Ally And 1 cat named Shadow
talents: reading
skills: arts and making pottery
weapens: knife and invisible cap
Flaws: scared of spiders and wants to make my family whole
powers: none
Life Before CHB: Annabell was a typical girl. Her step mother was really mean to her. Annabell love reading. She was diagoised with ADHD. She encountered a lot of strange stuff.

annabeth jackson chase wrote:Name: Annabell Guy
age:12
Gender : female
Eyes: Grayish-green
Hair: blonde
body type: lean
skin color: tan
Godly Parent: Athena
Mortal parent: Jake Guy
Country of Origin: U.S.A.
Pets: Dogs Fluffy Taco Angel Ally And 1 cat named Shadow
talents: reading
skills: arts and making pottery
weapens: knife and invisible cap
Flaws: scared of spiders and wants to make my family whole
powers: none
Life Before CHB: Annabell was a typical girl. Her step mother was really mean to her. Annabell love reading. She was diagoised with ADHD. She encountered a lot of strange stuff.

You need to make your own form, and stop commenting on forms that aren't yours.