Zoe Nightshade's Characters

Name: Annabelle Riley ( it means God`s beautiful gift. )
Age: 12
Gender: girl
Eyes: icy blue
Hair: dirty blonde
Height: 5 foot
Body Type: skiny
Skin Color: really pail
Greek God Parent: Amphitrite
Mortal Parent: Paul Riley
Country of Origin: USA
Talents: Ice skating, singing, and acting
Weapon**: bow and arrows, the arrows are made of Castial Bronze
Flaws: clumsy, gullable, I am too loyal, scared to death of bees
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): breathing under water for 30 minutes without going up for air! But can only can use once per day.
Life Before CHB*: I was always made fun of. My best friend told me its time to go and she took me to camp. Before that I always felt like i was different then the other kids at my school. The only way i could be myself was in water. my school is a wilderness school in Kansas were there was a small pool so i got a lot of swimming done.
RP Example*: I always walk on the beach every sunset. I took of my green sweater and then it showed my blue one piece. When I got into the water it was as cold as ice. I got out I felt like the world was surrounding me and only me. When I saw him coming I new I was going to faint.

We don't allow children of Hades, I'd suggest Thanatos (god of death)

life before CHB :always have been an outcast no friends only my best friend who i can only see. I can never pay attention in class. my best subject is mythology and my worsted subjects are english and vocab. I never have a chance to do homework because i there are always voices in my head telling me what to do ( it is very annoying ). I like to stay indoors more than outside.
idk what HP stands for

Annie Riley daughter of Death
thanks for telling me

Please don't double post, there is an edit button on the top right corner of your post.

Name: Annie Riley
Age: 12
Gender: girl
Eyes: icy blue
Hair: dirty blonde
Height: 5 foot
Body Type: ?
Skin Color: really pail
Greek God Parent: Thantos
Mortal Parent: Ezalia Riley
Country of Origin: USA
Talents: Ice skating
Weapon**: bow and arrows
Flaws: clumsy gullable
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): talk to the dead
Life Before CHB*: I dont remember my past
RP Example*:?
Any notes about your characters: I have ADHD

Please don't remake the topic. I combined both topics so it's in this one now. Please just click on the little edit button on the top right corner of each post.
Your body type is skinny, thin, fat, portly, etc.
Please add another flaw
Your life before CHB and your RP example have to be at least 5 sentences long.
An RP example is like telling a story from your character's perspective.
Example: I walked onto the beach feeling tired, and ready to relax. I took off my shirt to reveal my bright pink bikini. I dove into the ocean waters.

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Amphitrite does not relate to talking to the dead. Either change the god parent, or change the power.

Your rp example still needs to be five complete sentences long.

And your grammar could use fixing in a lot of places. Capitalizing names and the beginnings of sentences would be a good start.

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Again, please don't double post.

For how long can she breathe underwater?

i hope this works edited I cant wait for this to be approved!!!
sorry I don't mean to double post

Please indicate in your weapon slot that your arrowtips are made of Celestial Bronze.

It's recommended to have three talents but not necessary.

In your flaws section, please insert commas between each flaw so it's easier to see.

Answer one or both of the following questions in regards to your power:
1. How many times can she use her power a day?
OR
2. How long does she have to wait inbetween uses to use here power again?

All demigods have ADHD (and dyslexia), so it's unnecessary to add them in the forms, but you don't have to remove it from the additional comments section this time.

Good luck!

edited please work!

I don't think there's such thing as a school in the middle of the ocean, please alter that.

edited agian

Approved.

Name: Alma nightbeam
Age: 12
Gender: girl
Eyes: dark blue ( almost as dark as the night sky )
Hair: brown
Height: 5 foot 4
Body Type: skinny
Skin Color: pale
Greek God Parent: Ourania ( goddess of astronomy )
Mortal Parent: Jimmy nightbeam
Country of Origin: USA
Talents: Singing, drawing, soccer
Weapon**: throughing knives made of celestial bronze
Flaws: Talks a lot, grudges , loyalty
Life Before CHB*: I star gazed with my father. We would look at the constellations, my favorite was pieces. Then I got sent to a boarding school for children with ADHD and dyslexia. Every night I would look out my window and look at the sky wishing to leave this school and be some were i belonged. Then I woke up by the screaming of kids and a huge monster was out side. I blacked out during the fight and when I woke up I was at CHB.
RP Example*: When I saw them I felt like my eyes were shining. I looked through the telescope and I saw Leo And Pisces and all of the other constellations. When My dad was with me I felt like I was at home. I took a picture out of my bag of my dad and I. I wanted to see him again. I took the Picture and put it in my dresser at my cabin and I ran off to Halfblood hill to look at the stars.

What's an "average" body type?

For skin color I believe you mean "Pale"

Does she not have powers? You left it blank.

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Approved.

Name: Mary soul
Age:13
Gender:female
Eyes: purple
Hair: white with silver highlights
Height:5`5
Body Type:skinny
Skin Color: a little tan
God Parent: Psyche
Mortal Parent: Jacob Soul
Country of Origin: U.S.A
Pets:none
Talents: swimming, ice scating, acting
Weapon**: bow and arrows, arrow tips made of celestial bronze
Flaws: clumsy, all ways following orders, I let my feelings get the best of me
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): I can see peoples auras. I can see only full human auras. I can do it for about 10 minutes as long as I am sad if I am not sad I can not see the auras. I can see them for twice a day. I can see 3 auras.
Life Before CHB*: I have never had friends. I was always the outcast. I just watched as the other kids play in the river as I saw how they felt. I just never had the courage to even say hello! I knew I didnt belong hear at my school. then some one took me to CHB and I finaly made friends.
RP Example*: I Looked at them. All diffident colors. some were sad, some were mad. It made me was to scream. I looked through my books as I sat on a cold rock. Mixtures of blues and greens and any color you can thnk of was just swirling around me. The Auras looked as if they danced. But no one can see them but me.

please note I did this on my wii so I am sorry for any miss spellings
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Even though it's something as nonthreatening as seeing people's auras, she should have a limit on how many times she can do it as well as how long she can see an aura per use.

I know that the Life Before CHB and RP Example sections only require 5 sentences, and you meet that requirement, but can you please go back and fix your misspellings and grammar mistakes?

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For limits, Ace meant, how many times a day can she see a person's aura?

How many minutes per power activation?

Can she see multiple auras at once?