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    Pittibus


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    Post by Pittibus 1/4/2013, 4:30 am

    Name: Steven Astute
    Age:14
    Gender:Male
    Eyes:They change colour between blue, green and grey but are usually grey!
    Hair:Blond
    Height: 1.78m
    Body Type: Lean
    Skin Color:Caucasian
    God Parent:Athena
    Mortal Parent: Giacomo
    Country of Origin: America
    Pets:None
    Talents: Intelligent, cunning, seems to always have a plan
    Weapon**: Celestial Bronze Sicilian Rapier (type of sword) called Aletheia (Greek for truth)
    Flaws: Excessive pride, quick to anger, bossy
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Nothing more than good fighting skills and the fact that he is smart!
    Life Before CHB*:
    Steven used to be a normal boy, this was before his home was attacked by a demon girl scout! After that his father told him the truth but left out one very important detail, whom his mother was! After that his house was completely destroyed and he barely made it out alive! Fortunately at the hospital one of the Doctors was a satyr and recognized that he was a half blood. Once he told him that there was a safe haven down in long island. The satyr had left him with a choice, either he came with him or he tried to save his father (whom was badly hurt). So Steven set out from Boston for a very long journey to CHB. He got his sword from a vendor (who was actually a son of Hermes) but he is still unaware that it becomes a sword once the lid is pressed for 3 consecutive seconds.
    RP Example*:I parried, dodged, lunged and rolled but nevertheless I didn't manage to even touch its scaly skin! Poisonous bolts flew at me and I rolled to the other side. One almost hit me but I managed to defect it with my blade. Again The manticore shot it's deadly bolts at me. One dented my metal helmet. Anger surged through my body and I charged! Fortunately, I had a plan.
    Any notes about your characters:

    He still doesn't know that that pen is a sword, he only realizes that when there are monsters around it becomes slightly heavier, like a warning!


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    Post by Jordan 1/4/2013, 5:21 pm

    He's 14 he needs to be claimed.

    5.84? What units of measurement is that in?

    Body type is like, lean, scrawny, muscular, etc. Replace "Normal" with one of those, or something like it.

    For pets you mentioned "None yet" what pet do you plan on giving him?

    Add one more flaw.

    Hekatonkheire's don't exist anymore, except for Briares. His brothers faded with time, Remove the part about him being attack by a Hekatonkheire
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    Pittibus


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    Post by Pittibus 1/4/2013, 7:16 pm

    Is this better? If there are more changes to be done please tell me!
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    Post by Arik 1/5/2013, 12:49 pm

    Approved.

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