Carl Becandorf

Name: Carl Becandorf
Age:10
Gender:male
Eyes:blue
Hair:black
Height:5 feet seven inches
Body Type:chubby
Skin Color:black
God Parent:Athena
Mortal Parent: Darl Becandorf
Country of Origin:US
Pets:hell hound
Talents:swordplay
Weapon**:sword
Flaws:boasting
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):get out of problems with mind
Life Before CHB*: dad works at apple. Mom left us at 5 years old :( . had cancer when i was 7. I almost fell from the Empire State Building. Punched bully at school.
RP Example*:I screamed when I saw a satre. Ate a bad lemon. I was amazed at the Pegasy. I saw guy with afro. ssw a weird girl
Any notes about your characters:none

How big is the hell hound? Can it shadow travel?

What kind of sword is it? Like what metal?

Add two more flaws.

I don't understand what you have written under powers, but Athena children don't normally have powers.

Life before CHB and RP example needs to be 5 COMPLETE sentences, all of your sentences are fragments.
But the part about almost falling off the Empire State? No. You'd have to climb up the wall, and the large fence, in order to even come close to falling off.