My second character

Name: Edmund Moore

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Eyes: Dark brown

Hair: Reddish brown

Height: 5'9

Body Type: Thick and muscular

Skin Color: White

God Parent: Ares

Mortal Parent: Linda Moore

Country of Origin: USA

Pets: None

Talents: Sports, hand to hand fighting.

Weapon**: Two celestial bronze swords that he duel wields.

Flaws: He's cocky, and will rush into a fight. Sometimes picks fights. He has scars across his chest and left arm. Afraid of water/drowning.

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none

Life Before CHB*: Edmund was born in Portland Oregon, and when he was 7 years old his mother died. He had no other family so he went into a foster home. He kept moving from home to home for years, and he would constantly get in fights at school. When he was 12 he ran off, but as soon as he left the city he was attacked by a hellhound. He managed to kill it but he was seriously injured and had to get to a hospital, and he was sent back to a foster home. When he turned 15 he ran off again. He made it all the way to Denver before he ended up injured again, only this time a satyr found him. The satyr healed him and then brought him to Camp Half Blood.

RP Example*: I give my best evil smile to the camper in front of me, making him shrink back. "You should have backed down while you could" I tell him. I unsheathe the two swords strapped to my back and he grabs a sword and shield. "You ready to spar?" I ask. Before he can answer I attack rapidly, barely missing his arm before he blocks. He steadies himself, but I'm not waiting for him to attack. I stab with my right sword and then spin slashing with both. He tries to counter attack, but I quickly turn my right hand and cut his arm and he drops his sword. I kick his shield and he falls to the ground and I put a sword to his throat. "I win."

Any notes about your characters: none

Can you add another flaw? You said about the scars and a personality one. I'd like to suggest something like "he can't cook" or "he is afraid of *fear here*"

Edited. I gave him aquaphobia!

A griffin is too much for a first encounter. Please change it.

Edited. I really use hellhounds too often. :/

The things in notes sound like two flaws.

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