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Name: Kevin Smith
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black
Height: 5’8”
Body Type: Slim
Skin Color: Tanned
God Parent: Okeanides
Mortal Parent: Sarah Smith
Country of Origin: Canada
Pets: Small white Mouse named Moose
Talents: Basic sword training, has good endurance, and plays piano
Weapon**: Whatever he can find
Flaws: Cries easily (I don’t know if this counts xD), not confident with himself (Not sure if this counts either…), doesn’t like hurting people nor things (… you know the deal), awkward (…), too nice for his own good, and easily taken advantage of because he believes no one would do anything bad
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Take water from a source and can have control of a 3 inch diameter ball for 10 minutes a day
Life Before CHB*:Kevin lived with his Mom in a terrible apartment. The Mom had a part time job, and didn't make that much money. Kevin lived in the bad side of town. His Mother than gave up on him, and kicked him out of the house when he turned 13. Kevin decided to live with his friend, and his parents. Gladly, the parents let Kevin stay with them, until they can put him into a foster home. A few weeks later, a satyr told Kevin to come with him. He first refused too, but then finally decided to follow the satyr. The satyr told him about his relationships and about the Greek Gods. Kevin first was shocked, and refused to listen to him, until the Satyr told him that he would have a new home to go to. That home would be Camp Half Blood. After a few minutes of convincing, they went to Camp Half Blood, with very few troubles
RP Example*:I sat on the couch, waiting for my Mom to get home. The apartment smelled like smoke from my Mothers cigarette. "Probably at the bar with another bum again.." I mutter, turning the channel on our cheap TV. My mother finally came home and slammed the door behind her. "Get out." She ordered to me. I looked at her like she was crazy. "What?" I exclaim. "Just get out of here!" She cries, her voice turning hoarse. I stood up and said. "No." She grabbed me by the neck,and opened the apartment door. "And don't come back Kevin!" She says, tears falling from her eyes. She slams the apartment door and locks me out. I stood there in the hallway, bewildered.
Any notes about your characters:

cries easily=overly sensitive
there's a and at the end of your flaws
what will he do with the water ball?

Throw it at people? xD I don't know

"And stuff like that" is not a flaw.

What do you mean by "his immortality" in the life before camp?

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Take water from a source and can have control of a 3 inch diameter ball for 10 minutes a day

When you say "take water from a source" what do you mean? What effect does this power have on him physically/mentally?

I meant that his satyr told him that gods are immortal and stuff

By and stuff like that I mean I'm going to add more as I see it fitting

I mean that he can't generate water, he has to take it from a water bottle or a lake or something. He faints after 10 minutes, and gets tired as he uses it.

Why does it say "his" immortality then? He isn't immortal. No one's character's here are.

I know, I tried to say he was telling him about immortality of gods ;_;

Uh... Just take that out.

I replaced it with relationships, and by that I mean his relationship to the greek gods and stuff

You could just replace that entire end of the sentence with "about his heritage".

Take stuff like that out of the flaws.

K done :)

You didn't exactly put how he got to camp.

Are we supposed to? ;_;

Yes.

Better? :)

What type of mouse? How old is it? How big is it?

It's a small white one year old mouse

Does it have a name?

Not yet.

Could you put one in the form though, please?

Sure, there it is!