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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/8/2013, 10:38 am

    Name: Syrel Moss
    Age: 15 years
    Gender: Female
    Eyes: dark blue, but they turn red when she's mad, because her magical powers boil over when she's angry, making her eyes turn color.
    Hair: Silvery-white, shoulder length, wavy
    Height: 5 feet, 1 and 3/4 inches
    Body Type: Slim and tall
    Skin Color: pale, no freckles anywhere
    God Parent: Hecate
    Mortal Parent: Oliver Moss, grandson of Hephestus
    Country of Origin: Canada
    Pets: A small gray cat with green-gold eyes named Cinder, and a short tail that got bitten off by the dragon that guards the Golden Fleece.
    Talents: Her magic, drawing, good with animals
    Weapon**: Celestial Bronze double-pointed lance
    Flaws: Very critacal of herself and others, not good with people AT ALL. She is very blunt, and doesn't care who she's talking back to, whether they're authority or not.
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She can summon things with her magic from another place, but she has to know exactully where the object is, and she can only summon objects, not living things, like animals or humans. But she can only use it about three times a day, because it takes alot of her strenght. And the object has to be reveletly small, becaus it takes more energy to summon heavy or lareg objects. The largest object can only be at least 14 Ilbs and 2 feet wide/long. The limit is 1 and 1/4 miles, so she has to be fairly close.
    Life Before CHB*: She was born in Toronto, but she got kicked out of several schools there, being ADHD, like most demi-gods. Finally, her father gave up and moved to Saint Clements, when she was 12. She didn't have many friends there, being the way she is. She was bullied, too, because of her eyes. But she never told her dad, and she probaly never will. She stayed there until one of the satyrs found her and brought her here.
    RP Example*: "Cinder?? Where are you??" Syrel poked her head under the bed. "Hello?" Cinder snuck up behind her and pounced on her shoelace. "Hey!!" yelled Syrel, sitting up and hitting her head on the bed. "Owch!!" She glared at Cinder, rubbing her forehead ruefully. Cinder purred. Syrel frowned then laughed, picking up Cinder and rubbing her head. "You little fiery dragon." Cinder purred again. "Well, I have to get training now." She set Cinder down on the bed and picked up her lance. "See ya."
    Any notes about your characters: She doesn't make friends easily. :no:


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    Post by Holly 5/8/2013, 10:50 am

    You need a longer history, at minimum five sentence.

    Also, your powers must be more descriptive, what exactly can she do with her magic?
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/8/2013, 2:03 pm

    Okay, I'll fix it.
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    Post by Alfred F. Jones 5/8/2013, 2:34 pm

    Add one more flaw.
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/8/2013, 2:37 pm

    Okay!! I just have to go right now i'll be back to edit later.


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    Post by Holly 5/8/2013, 2:43 pm

    How many times a day can she use this power? How far away can the object be before it is out of range? Do her powers tire her out? What is the Mac size and weight for the object she can summon?
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    Post by Guest 5/8/2013, 2:50 pm

    Uhm, Zach. Please do not comment on forms. Leave it to the staff. Thanks.
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    Post by GwrachSeren 5/8/2013, 2:51 pm

    Camp doesn't have computers. The internet is dangerous for Demigods, as stated in the Heroes of Olympus series.

    QB, please don't look at forms unless you're a mod.
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/8/2013, 7:13 pm

    Well, Ananbeth has a laptop.... but I can change it if you'd like.
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/8/2013, 7:28 pm

    Edited!!!
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    Post by Christian 5/8/2013, 7:32 pm

    ~Why do her eyes turn red when she's angry?
    ~What's the range of her powers? i.e, She can only do it when it's less than 10 feet away for her.
    ~Your life before CHB has to be atleast 5 sentences long.
    ~Please do not double post.
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/8/2013, 7:33 pm

    Oh yeah, sorry.
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    Post by Christian 5/8/2013, 7:45 pm

    ~I'm afraid that 5 miles is too large of a limit. Try going down a bit.
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/9/2013, 9:58 am

    Okay.
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    Post by nix 5/9/2013, 2:41 pm

    Can you write another flaw down? More of a personality flaw, instead of one that she talks back to teachers, since it only affects her academically. Perhaps you can say she's blunt or talks back to authority figures?
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/9/2013, 3:29 pm

    Will do!
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    Post by Daniel 5/13/2013, 4:04 pm

    Please reduce the range in which the summoning can be used.
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/14/2013, 8:49 am

    Okay.
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    Post by Daniel 5/14/2013, 5:25 pm

    What's the largest object that can be summoned?
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    Post by Syrel Moss 5/14/2013, 8:06 pm

    Hmm, forgot that! *fixes* Is that what you meant?
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    Post by GwrachSeren 5/17/2013, 9:56 pm

    Add one more flaw for safety, please.

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