Darkness v.s. Light

Name: Marchella Devon
Age:12
Gender:Female
Eyes:Hazel
Hair:brown, curly
Height:4'2" very short
Body Type:lean
Skin Color:dark
God Parent:Iris
Mortal Parent:Mark Devon
Country of Origin:South Africa
Pets:Bunny
Talents:Painting
Weapon**:Cestial bronze dagger named Light
Flaws:Easily distracted, severe asthma, too trusting
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):Can summon rainbows of light
Life Before CHB*:Marchella has always known about her heritage as a demigod.  Her father was distant and cruel leaving her one choice: to run away.  Her mother guided her to Camp. She spoke in Marchella's dreams and lead her to safe houses. She also ocommpanied her on the flight to the US.
RP Example*:Her asthma was getting worse, but she had to keep running to make it to the border. The monsters ere persistent, they had followed her ever since she arrived in New York. Just as they reached her, a blast of light sent from the heavens shot down and the monsters erupted in a rainbow of colors. Marchella sent a silent prayer to her mother, Iris, and collapsed across the border uncounsious from the asthma attack.

.... 3'4" is pretty short for a 12 year old. Are you sure that's her height?

Is her dagger Celestial bronze?

Life Before CHB needs to be five sentences long, and how did her mother guide her to camp?

I would suggest you move the rainbow summoning from notes to the powers section and add in how many times a day she can use said power.