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    Aaron

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    Post by Oli_Paxton 6/30/2013, 3:25 pm

    Name: Aaron James Young
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Eyes: Blue
    Hair: Brown
    Height: 5,11
    Body Type: Lean, muscular
    Skin Color: Caucasian, somewhat pale
    God Parent: Triton
    Mortal Parent: Alicia Young
    Country of Origin: United Sates
    Pets: None
    Talents: Sword fighting, archery, hand to hand combat
    Weapon**: A Celestial Bronze sword named Neroú
    Flaws: kinda clumsy, has small bursts of anger, A fear of darkness (only when it's pitch black)
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can control water. Can use water manipulation 8 times a day, for 10 minutes at a time. In between usages, he needs to wait 30 minutes. The most powerful thing he can do with it is make a small typhoon that encompasses everything within 20ft of Aaron,its radius is 15 ft, and can be as fast as 50mph, for 5 minutes. It can only be used once a day. There needs to be a large body of water around for him to use the typhoon. After creating a typhoon, Aaron will need to rest for about 10-15 minutes, as he can barely stand. If he pushes himself, Aaron will pass out. He can  breathe underwater for 20 minutes a day, 3 times a day, 30 minutes in between uses.
    Life Before CHB*: Aaron lived in California for most of his life. He would always surf, which was what he did best. His mother was married to a man he believed was his father, but that soon changed when a snake man tried to drown him. During his panic, the waves basically did what he wanted them to. He had control of the waves, but only for a second. That was enough to alert his "surf instructor" and have him save Aaron. With a second look, Aaron realized his instructor had goat legs...Yes, goat legs. His instructor filled him in about everything, and took him across the country to New York, to Camp Half Blood.
    RP Example*: I was tired, but it didn't matter. I had to keep running, to this place with others like me. Other god children. This was insane. Was I hallucinating due to the food at my school...Again? Was I really gonna let this goat man take me all the way across the country? I was injured, blood running down my forehead. I didn't dare to turn around, I just pushed through the pine trees. We didnt have these in California, and the needles scratched my arms and face. And there I saw it. The gates to Camp Half-Blood.
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    Post by Kendall 6/30/2013, 3:50 pm

    How many times a day can he control water and for how long each time? What's the most powerful thing he can do with it?
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    Post by Oli_Paxton 6/30/2013, 5:26 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Kendall 6/30/2013, 7:35 pm

    45 minutes per time is a bit too much... Maybe you should reduce the time limit for each time he uses his powers and up the number of times per day he can use his powers. Also, define a "small" typhoon and how powerful that would be.
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    Post by Oli_Paxton 7/1/2013, 12:16 am

    Edited again
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    Post by Kendall 7/1/2013, 8:06 pm

    So, the typhoon encompasses everything in a 20 ft radius from Aaron, or a 20 ft diameter? 10 minutes for your typhoon is probably too long.... How many times a day can he use the typhoon? Does he need to be near a large body of water to use it?

    15 minutes per time for each power usage is too long, so again, I suggest you reduce it. How long does he need to wait between power usages?
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    Post by Oli_Paxton 7/2/2013, 7:25 pm

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    Post by Kendall 7/2/2013, 9:34 pm

    Mhm. Up to how far away can he be from a water source in order to control the water?
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    Post by Oli_Paxton 7/2/2013, 10:16 pm

    15 feet away
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    Post by Kendall 7/5/2013, 3:46 pm

    Breathing underwater belongs under powers, not talents. How many times a day can he breathe underwater, and for how long?

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    Post by Oli_Paxton 7/5/2013, 11:34 pm

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    Post by Daniel 7/7/2013, 7:07 pm

    You might want to put those notes about the power in the power section. I was a bit confused for a minute. How fatigued is Aaron after creating a typhoon?
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    Post by Oli_Paxton 7/7/2013, 7:28 pm

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    Post by Daniel 7/7/2013, 7:35 pm


    Approved.

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