Ayden Xavier Rider

Name: Ayden Xavier Rider
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Eyes: Ayden has dark blue eyes, the color of the night sky.
Hair: Ayden's hair is a very dark brown color, that is almost black.
Height: He is fairly tall standing at a height of six feet even.
Body Type: He is rather skinny, but he has a lot of visible muscle.
Skin Color: Ayden has naturally tan skin.
God Parent: Hypnos the god of sleep.
Mortal Parent: Lindy Rider- mother.
Country of Origin: The United States of America
Pets: none
Talents:

• Running. Ayden is very good at running. He was on his schools cross country team, so he got very used to running several miles a day. Now whenever he is bored, Ayden often goes out for a run.
  
• Lacrosse. In addition to being on the cross country team, Ayden also played lacrosse for his school. He was actually very good, and one of the lead scorers. He played the position of attacker. 
  
• Drums. Ayden sparked interest in playing the drums as a little kid with one of those toy drum sticks. When he was old enough to join his schools band, he did and of course he played the drums. He grew fairly good at it, and he decided to play the drum set. 
  
• Juggling. Ayden is able to juggle, he can juggle any round object the size of a grapefruit or smaller. He is currently working on bowling pins, but he's not having much luck.
  
• Skateboarding. Ayden has always loved to skateboard. He uses it as he favorite mode of transportation. He is also able to do numerous tricks on a skateboard. 
  

Weapon**: Ayden fights using a four foot long celstial bronze sword. It's of standard camp issue, and there is nothing fancy about it.
Flaws:

• Pride. Ayden has a of self-pride. He thinks he is very amazing, and talented. He thinks that he can do anyrhing if he tries hard enough
  
• Anger. Ayden has a very bad anger problem, and he tends to blow up on people if they make him mad enough.
  
• Insomnia. For a child of Hypnos, insomnia is a weird thing to have. Basically, Ayden can't sleep he is unable to find sleep. He lays awake at night because of it. He drinks a lot of coffee and soda to make up for this. 
  

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Power 1: Hypnokinesis- sleep manipulation

• Ayden is able to make people feel tired. He can not make them fall asleep, but he can make them just feel tired. He can do this about ten times a day. Basically he just concentrates on a person and when he's done, they feel like they need to take a nap or they yawn a lot.
  
• Ayden doesn't need as much sleep as other people. So basically he can function as well as other people, even when he doesn't have much sleep. This doesn't really drain him, it's just an ability of his. 
  

Life Before CHB*: Ayden was born on March 12th 1995, to Lindy Rider and the Greek god Hypnos. After his birth, Hypnos left Lindy to care for Ayden alone. For a young single mother, she did a good job. She got a job working as a bar tender, and she picked up a lot of money from tips. As he got older, Ayden began to spark and interest in sports and the drums. Lindy then increased her work hours to pay for all of this.

Ayden attended the local public school, where he earned good grades and played sports. He made a lot of friends and he was fairly popular. When he was around the age of thirteen, he was attacked by a monster. Luckily the school satyr a boy named Jim killed it. After this Jim told Ayden all about camp. Jim then took Ayden to camp where he has been coming for the past five years. A year after attending camp, Ayden was properly claimed, but by this time he knew who is father was.
RP Example*: Ayden walks through camp, his head phones pulled over his ears. Under his arms, he carries his skateboard. Pretty soon he drops the board, and hops on it. He then skates off, heading towards the mess hall. He skates up the steps, and through the line grabbing a bunch of grapes and an apple. Skating by the fire pit he tosses the grapes in offering them to his father.

As he skates out of the mess hall, he takes a large bite of his apple. Ayden then continues to skate until he reaches the practice range. Hopping off his board, he picks it up and tucks it under his arm. He then finishes his apple, tossing the core on the ground. Grinning he walks towards the dummies, for his next lesson.
Any notes about your characters: color is #006699

I don't see how loyalty is a flaw.

Twenty times a day is too much.

Changed it.

And seriously, not seeing it as a flaw? Percy's fatal flaw is loyalty.

Anyways its a flaw because he will do anything for his friends, even risk his own life.

If he risked other's lives for them, or even the world, like Percy, it would be a flaw. Since he is risking 'only' his life, it's more of a virtue.

I've honestly never had anyone have a problem with it before. But I guess I'll remove it though I did want my character to be loyal.

He can be loyal...; but the way you describe it, it looks more like a virtue than a flaw. Now should you put 'he would sacrifice others/the world for his friends', then it's a flaw.

I fixed the form.