Etso Cancreca Yugvi

Name: Etso Cancreca Yugvi
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: dark brown
Hair: dark brown, almost black
Height: 4"11
Body Type: skinny, yet curvy
Skin Color: extremely pale
God Parent: Amphitrite
Mortal Parent: Saniella Yugvi, David Yugvi
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: none
Talents: hunting, hand to hand combat, cooking
Weapon**: CB bow and arrows
Personality: bold, mysterious, easily annoyed. Like her brother, she doesn't talk to people much. But she's the complete opposite of shy. She's determined, shady, and not afraid to crush you into dust if you get in her way.
Flaws: independent, short tempered, would do anything for the people she loves, prideful, cursed by
Aphrodite to never be looked at as beautiful
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Etso can control up to 10 gallons of salt water. She can use this power up to three times a day, with forty-five minute waiting periods in between. The water will be under her control for up to five minutes. If she goes over this limit, she'll become extremely tired.

She can create a small hurricane, up to ten feet in diameter. The wind speeds can go up to 50 mph She can use this power once every four months, with at least a one month waiting period in between uses. Even one use will make her extremely tired, drowsy, and dizzy. The hurricane will last up to seven minutes, but the longer it lasts the more tired she will become. If she exceeds this limit she will pass out, and, depending on how much she exceeds the limit, will go into critical condition in a coma state.

Life Before CHB*:He and his sister lived together  for years with their stepmother and father(neither remembered by Lanndon), until a faithful boating trip from Florida to Cancun ended with death as a storm swept the family apart. The siblings were left stranded on a small uncharted island. At the tender age of nine, his sister learned to care for her two year old brother, who, after four years, began hunting and gathering with his sister. After being stranded for almost four and a half years, they believed they spotted a small boat upon the horizon.  They swam to the boat, and the young fishermen helped them up into the boat. They stayed with the fishermen for the remainder of the fishing trip, and then were dropped off in Alabama. They stole enough money to eventually make it to New York, where they supposed their parents would be waiting for them. However, when they didn't find them, they began to wander, searching for ways to survive. They were doing exactly this, when one night they heard sirens through the night. They ducked behind some trees and unknowingly crossed the camp border while trying to hide from the passing police car.

RP Example: My feet make no sound, even as they step on the twigs and rotten leaves littering the forest floor. The Fall air is chilly, but the wind's nip doesn't reach through my jacket.The birds sing a soft tune that blocks out any noise that could possibly reach me out here. My bow stands at the ready, the fingers twitching on the tight string, ready to release an arrow at any sign of attack. A small movement flickers in the corner of my eye, and I turn quickly, searching for the source of the sight. I don't see anything, and my ears don't notice any running or twigs snapping. On a whim, I let the arrow fly towards where I think I saw the movement.

May I ask why Etso and Abnedrio don't have RP Examples?

Also, none of the Nesoi would be allowed since they're listed as primordial deities.

Why would Aphrodite curse Etso?

For Life Before CHB, where did the birds come from that led them to camp?

I guess I accidentally forgot to include them when I copy and pasted the form. I'll fix Abnedrio's after this.
Edited the god parent.
While she was on the island, she would often times state that Aphrodite was a useless goddess and that a deity who could be of better use to her should take her place.
The birds were just a regular flock of birds, migrating North after the winter.

How long must she wait in between using her powers?
Can you edit the OOC and RP Example information in please?
Does she happen to have a bow to shoot those arrows with?

If you're saying your character can use up to 30 gallons of water each time she uses her water manipulation power, that wouldn't be allowed; at most we allow ten gallons per use. Letting her hurricane last for one hour wouldn't be allowed, either, you'll need to reduce that too.

May I ask how far Etso and her brother swam when they were going after the small boat they thought they saw?

Edited Powers.
Edited weapons.

Three or four miles, before they realized that it was birds.

How powerful are the hurricane's winds?

And how far was it from the island they were stranded on to the Alabama coast?

On the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale, they would fit in category two.

About 110 miles. it took them 27 days to reach the coast, following a different flock of birds each day.

Our wind limit is 55 mph.

And... I suppose they stopped at random places to rest on their way to the coast? Where would they have rested and gotten food?

Edited powers.

They would stop at smaller islands on their way there, sometimes populated and sometimes not. They'd gather food at that island, eat, and then leave.

... Just up and leave? Did your character use her water powers to boost them along or such?

Occasionally they would stay a night or two. She would sometimes, yes.

I'm not sure if the hurricane lasting 30 minutes would work.. I doubt even Percy could make one last that long. Can you lower it a bit please?

Edited Powers.

Great Scott, what odd creature possessed me and used their unfortunate mind power to force my fingers to type '30 minutes'?

I suggest you edit both your Etso and Abnedrio forms to put in the stuff Deadpool asked you concerning their Life Before CHB.

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Add more to the personality -- make it at least two lines.

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Approved.