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    George Pumpernickel

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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/9/2013, 6:05 pm

    Name: George Pumpernickel
    Age: 18
    Gender: Boy
    Eyes: Green
    Hair: Black
    Height: 5’ 7”
    Body Type: Lean
    Skin Color: White
    God Parent: Aristaios
    Mortal Parent: Lizzy Pumpernickel
    Country of Origin: America
    Pets: Hellhound named Froyo that is the size of a full grown Rottweiler, can shadow travel 5 times a day for at most a mile with a cooldown of 2 hours
    Talents: Can tame monsters and animals easily. The monster or animal can be anything that can't talk or easily kill him. This includes but is not limited to: Hellhounds etc.. He can also draw anything very well. The best he can draw is a human in great detail.
    Weapon**: A scythe made of CB named Harvester
    Personality: George is a cruel boy who will tame wild animals, them let them wreak havoc wherever he goes. He doesn’t like anyone, not even his own mother. He fights anyone he comes across and let's his pets attack them. If anyone hurts his pets, he will allow Froyo to rip off their heads. He also is a very non-social person. If he could have his way, he would make it so nobosy could talk to him ever. That way, he could be left alone and just draw.
    Flaws: Overreacts, unreliable, and lazy
    Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
    Life Before CHB*: George was born and raised in Dallas, Texas. He never liked his mother, or anyone else he met. His only friends were whatever animals he tamed. One day, he tamed a hellhound that was the size of a small Rottweiler, at the age of five, near a small pond near his house and made it his pet. This hellhound would attack any monsters who tried to hurt George. Then he left his mother at the age of 13 and traveling around the country, running with his hellhound everywhere. He came across the camp after 4 years and stopped to rest, but decided to stay.
    RP Example*: I walk around the cabin porch, waiting for Froyo to wake up. I needed to go to the woods and feed my pets. They must be really hungry by now. The last time I fed them was two days ago, due to me running out of food. If I don't feed them, they will escape and attack everyone. Not that I wouldn't want them to, but I want to keep some of my pets.
    Any notes about your characters: He likes to draw


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    Post by Kendall 11/9/2013, 6:49 pm

    How large is the hellhound? Can it shadow travel?

    Your power is more of a talent.

    Is his scythe celestial bronze?

    Add some more to his personality.

    How did he meet his hellhound? At what age did he leave his mom and how long was he wandering before he got to camp?
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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/9/2013, 6:54 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Kendall 11/9/2013, 6:59 pm

    You didn't say how large the hellhound is. How many times a day can it shadow travel and how far at most each time?

    Add more to his personality that doesn't have something to do with his pets.

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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/9/2013, 7:02 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Kendall 11/9/2013, 7:12 pm

    At most we allow average Rottweiler-sized hellhounds (which means no riding it). How long does it need to wait in between shadow travels?

    How large was the hellhound when he first tamed it? You'll need a bit of a more definite way for him to find camp.

    Add another talent and elaborate on how good he is at his first one.
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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/9/2013, 8:25 pm

    sincewhendidwehavetohavetalents? I will edit tomorrow morning at 7:00ish EST
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    Post by Kendall 11/10/2013, 11:37 am

    For one thing, you've always had to have talents -- for another, I'm sure your character isn't just good at taming things.
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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/10/2013, 1:05 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Kendall 11/10/2013, 1:15 pm

    Kendall wrote:You'll need a bit of a more definite way for him to find camp.
    I don't think your character would be able to tame a basilisk (considering that it could kill you with a glance, and I'm not sure basilisks appear in the series at all?), and drawing a human in perfect detail would be sort of impossible.
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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/10/2013, 1:32 pm

    Yeah, I guess the Basilisk would be a little op for taming...
    Also, I will change it to some-what perfect.
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    Post by Kendall 11/13/2013, 5:44 pm

    Add another sentence to RP Example, by the way.

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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/13/2013, 5:54 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Kendall 11/15/2013, 2:44 pm

    You still need to edit his talents.

    Also, reduce the number of times per day his hellhound can shadow-travel.
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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/15/2013, 3:04 pm

    Editing now
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    Post by Kendall 11/15/2013, 3:12 pm

    I suggest you say "great detail" rather than "somewhat perfect" detail, and then I'll approve this.
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    Post by High King Fridgeir 11/15/2013, 3:15 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Kendall 11/15/2013, 3:29 pm

    Approved.

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