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    Andi Michaels

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    Post by beanie 12/21/2013, 9:53 am

    Name: Anastasia Michaels
    Nickname: Andi
    Gender: Female
    Age: 15
    Godly Parent: Apollo
    Mortal Parent: Rebecca Michaels
    Main Family: Lucas Franklin(step-father) Ally Franklin (5 year old half-sister)
    Skin Tone: Tan
    Eye Color: Dark Brown, almost black
    Hair Color: Dark Brown
    Length: just goes past her shoulders
    Height: 5'4
    Body Type: Fit

    Appearance: Andi doesn't care for appearance really. Her dark hair is always messy, the curls making her hair impossible to comb. She'll usually wear some skinny jeans, a faded out t-shirt, a jean jacket, hiking boots, and the sun charmed bracelet that her mother gave her when she was 7. Andi also has a scar over her right eye after the fury attack

    Weapon: Bow and arrow(12 in her quiver), 2 celestial bronze hunting knives( both 12 inches) hidden in her boot, ready to use when needed.
    Armor: Celestial Bronze breastplate

    Pet(s) ( Female): She has a 2-year-old Husky named Riley. She found Riley on the streets as a pup and begged her mother if they could keep her. Riley happens to be a little protective of Andi sometimes. A very energetic Husky. Acts like an animal version of Andi

    Skills/Talents: Guitar, Singing, Dancing, started surfing when she was 4, arts & crafts with her sister. She can shoot a bullseye with her bow and arrow from 10ft away.

    Powers (related to her Godly parent): Andi can heal sicknesses and injuries from a fever of 100 to minor flesh wound, through medicine and bandages. She be as far as 1ft away from the person and she worst sickness is chicken pox. She can use her powers 3 times a day and has to wait at least 30 minutes in between using her powers.  

    Flaws: Andi has tendency to do things before she thinks. She will talk before her mind tells her what to do or rush into fights, leaving her with quite a few battle injuries. Andi happens to push away people who care about her.  
    Strengths: Strong, has a good sense of humor, energetic, clever, Tough
    Weaknesses: Harsh, sometimes mean, Temper,
    Likes: Surfing, Music(especially guitar and singing), Dancing, her little half-sister and mother, Summer
    Dislikes: School, Math, Prissy Girly-girls, her step-father, bullies

    Fears: Andi doesn't have many fears but one is the fear of losing her mother and little sister

    Personality: Though Andi can seem like she'll punch you the moment you talk to her, she can actually be nice once you meet her. She can be protective of her sister at times. Andi can seem distant from other people but has many friends from school( mostly guys). She's a tomboy and doesn't really like girls who squeal when they see each other. She's a tough girl and it takes awhile to become friends with her. From time to time, Andi will actually go out with her friends to the beach or movies. If you really get to know Andi, you'll might find her kind-hearted at times.

    Summer or Year-Rounder: She's mostly a year-rounder but will go to visit her family during the holidays and sometimes winter.
    Years at camp: 1 so far

    Life before CHB:

    Andi was raised in San Diego, California with her mother at first. Her father left Andi and her mother when Andi was just after a week after Andi was born. As Andi got older, her mother met a man named Lucas and married him when Andi was 8 years-old. To Andi, her new step-father was mean and abusive but to her mother, he was a loving man. When Andi was 10, her half-sister Ally was born. She didn't like Ally at first but as she got older, she became more protective of Ally, especially when Lucas was around. For Andi's 15 birthday, her mother took the family on a camping trip with her best friend Ethan. While there, 2 fury's attacked Andi and her sister, almost killing them but Ethan managed to drive them away. After that, Ethan took Andi to CHB, reveling that he was a saytr.

    Role-Playing Ex:

    "Watch me Andi. I'm going out!" Ally squealed as she swam out further into the ocean.

    "Ally! Get back here!" Andi shouted out.

    "Okay!"Ally responded, swimming closer to the shore.

    Andi was about to turn around until she heard a scream come from Ally.

    "Help! Somethings got my leg!" She screamed in fright, getting pulled under the water.

    In panic, Andi dove under water.

    "Gahh!" Andi jumped up, hitting her head on the bunk she shares with Ally.

    I was just a dream. she thought

    Sighing, she went back to a dream-less sleep.

    Notes- doesn't like to be called by her first name.


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    Post by Morgan Landry 12/21/2013, 11:20 am

    Can you please add more to her appearance? The first two sentences are kind of personality.

    Does she have only one arrow? ^^

    How many hunting knives does she possess? How long are they? What material are the blades made of?

    How come she doesn't have any armor? Every demigod has an armor, at least for the Capture The Flag games.

    How old is her husky?

    Healing 'anything' is OP so please change that. What do you mean by battle wounds? Battle wounds are basically everything from a flesh wound to a limb-loss, so could you please specify?

    No visions.

    You say she can do this three times a day and has to wait thirty minutes between use, but what do you mean by 'it'?
    Also, could you please separate the talents-part from the powers-part, otherwise it kind of gets a bit confusing.

    You have put the 'temper' both in flaws and in the weakness areas.

    What do you mean by 'imitative'?

    We allow the god parent to stay with their child maximum one week, so please edit that part.

    All satyrs are boys, so Emma couldn't have been a satyr.
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    Post by beanie 12/21/2013, 11:48 am

    Okay. Edited
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    Post by Morgan Landry 12/21/2013, 11:54 am

    Silver is used by the Hunters of Artemis, only celestial bronze is allowed for non-chthonian Greek demigods.

    Is her breastplate mortal bronze or celestial bronze?

    Shooting and singing are no powers.

    How can she heal a limb loss?

    You have forgotten to edit the last sentence, for Ethan.
    Also, how could her cousin by a satyr?
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    Post by beanie 12/21/2013, 12:15 pm

    EDITED
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    Post by Morgan Landry 12/21/2013, 12:24 pm

    The power is too strong, I wouldn't allow her to heal a limb loss. A limb loss is like, when your arm is cut off.

    Please tone it down.
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    Post by beanie 12/21/2013, 12:50 pm

    Edited
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    Post by Morgan Landry 12/21/2013, 12:51 pm

    How far at most can she be from the person she heals in order to use her power?

    What is the worst sickness she can heal?
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    Post by beanie 12/21/2013, 12:58 pm

    edited
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    Post by Morgan Landry 12/21/2013, 1:04 pm

    Approved.

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