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    Mia Korrin, daughter of Khione, 17 years old

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    Post by zanematthews 3/4/2014, 5:55 pm

    Name: Mia Korrin

    Gender: Female

    Mortal Parent: Real Father: Samuel (Sam) Korrin; Stepfather: Jacob (Jake) Leonard, Deceased

    God Parent: Khione, Goddess of Snow

    Date of Birth: December 14, 1997

    Place of Birth: Ocala Medical Center; Ocala, Florida

    Hometown/Last Residence: Grayson, Kentucky

    Race/ethnicity: Caucasian / She is 50% Greek, 40% American, and 10% Cherokee Indian

    Accent: Mia has a Kentucky country accent. She tends to say words like "Ya'll" and "Ain't" alot

    Skin Tone: Slightly Pale

    Eye Color: Ice Blue

    Hair Color: The Color of freshly fallen snow

    Hair Length: Down to the middle of her back

    Height: 5' 9"

    Weight: 114 lbs.

    Body Type: Slightly thin, but more of a normal size

    Appearance: Mia usually wears a pitch black pair of jeans, a dark blue, tight fitting Corset top, and a pair of white, black soled sneakers. She always wears her pair of black, square-rimmed glasses. She also almost always wears a plain,grey hoodie over her Corset. She has a burn scar on her right arm that looks similar to a spider web, with patterns reaching all the way down her to her wrist. Mia has a simple, silver nose ring pierced in her left nostril.

    Weapon: Prefers to use her ice as a weapon, but also carries around a simple one foot long Celestial Bronze dagger when her ice fails her.

    Armor: Prefers to fight in her normal clothing, but will dawn a simple, Celestial Bronze breastplate if needed

    Pet(s): A small, pure white kitten named Snow, whom Mia is able to turn into snow at will. Mia found little Snow wandering around out in a particularly nasty snowstorm that ravaged Kentucky, a couple days before her birthday.

    Talents/Skills: Quick Learner; Decent Pianist; Fast Reader; Parkour; Snowboarding; Excellent Artist in drawing and ice sculptures;

    Flaws: Extremely clumsy when she walks; Very shy; Has nerve damage in her right arm, making her unable to feel anything with it; Regular Astigmatism, causing everything to be blurry without her glasses; Quick Tempered;

    Strengths: Very Optimistic; Friendly; Kind; More powerful in temperatures below 60 Degrees F.

    Weaknesses: Her clumsiness; Any weapon other than a sword; Shyness around big crowds; Shyness around boys her age; Barely able to stand in temperatures above 90 degrees F.

    Likes: Snow; The Cold; Soda; Nice people;

    Dislikes: Big Crowds; The Sun; Heat; Bullies;

    Fears: Heights; Fire; Flying; Scorpions; Darkness

    Personality: Mia Korrin is generally a nice person, unfortunately she is incredibly shy around other people, especially boys or large crowds, which causes her to stutter and talk softly. When she is nervous, she has a habit of biting her bottom lip. Despite being incredibly clumsy when walking, she tends to maintain an optimistic attitude and will always go out of her way to make other people happy, even at the cost of her own. She hates to sit still, which makes it to where you'll always find her fidgeting or fiddling with something. Occasionally, if she is in a really bad mood, she'll act extremely cold-hearted, not caring for anyone or anything. Mia is very quick tempered. If something gets on her nerves, she'll usually keep it to herself but her face always give it away by showing a scowl on her face and she'll usually stare off in the distance, not wanting to make eye contact.

    Powers: Mia has cryokinesis, or the ability to control ice and cold temperatures. She is very resistant to cold temperatures. She is able to create various forms of ice, ranging from a detailed sword to a simple ball. The amount of fatigue she sustains depends on the size on the creation, ranging from being able to create a large amount of ice under 6 inches, to nearly passing out creating an object 5 feet in length. Her favorite ice creation is a simple sword, about 3 feet in length, and has a razor sharp edge. She is also able to control snow, either condensing it into ice, which causes less fatigue than creating ice, or manipulating it into shapes. The most she has ever created in one day is 12 small creations, 5 large creations under 3 feet, or 12 small objects of condensed snow, and 5 large objects. Her ice, made more solidly than normal ice, can resist melting for about twice as long. Depending on the temperature around her, her ice could either melt faster or slower. The colder her surroundings are, the faster her ice his made and the length of time it takes for it to melt is about 4 times as long. The hotter her surroundings are, the faster her ice melts, about half the time it takes her ice to normally melt. If the temperature is above 100 degrees F, she is unable to create ice at all.

    Social Status: She is somewhat of a loner but does like to have a few friends.

    Summer or Year Rounder: Mia is a year rounder, due to not having any family to go back to.

    Years at Camp: None, Mia korrin has just arrived at Camp Half-blood.

    Life Before CHB: Mia grew up with her step father, Jacob for most of her life. Jacob was extremely nice to her, and treated and loved her like his own. Mia did not make it easy on him though. Being a loner in school, she would always get bullied, and would usually end up fighting whoever bullied her. Other than her quick temper getting her in trouble, she had excellent grades, usually never dropping below a B+. The day of her 17th birthday, her stepfather died by a Basilisk attack. As the snake advanced on her, her father, whom she has never met, comes in and whisks her away before the Basilisk can get them. After talking for a few hours, Mia discovers the fact that he is her father, and that she is what's known as a Demigod. He told her that Khione, her mother, had told her father to keep an eye on her. He unfortunately did not want a child, so he did the next best thing. He gave her to his best friend and told him to keep her safe. Her best and only friend since middle school, William (who she just found out is a satyr), tells her that she must go to a Camp for half-bloods, otherwise she'll be attacked almost every day. On the bus ride to Long Island, they get attacked once again by a monster known as a Pit scorpion. William bravely holds off the scorpion by continually drawing its attention away from Mia. As they get closer to the barrier, William is caught off guard by the scorpion and sustains a deadly wound in the chest, via the scorpions stinger. As Mia pulls William through the barrier and holds him in her arms, his last breath leaves him after he tells her that she must go to the Big House and speak to Chiron. Her eyes full of sadness and tears, she makes her to the building, completely oblivious to the world around her. As her tears drip off her face, they turn into light snowflakes, indicating to anyone who is watching that she is a daughter of Khione. Of course, the glowing symbol above her head let people know also.

    Role-playing Example: Gods, this place is big! Mia thought to herself as she stared out over Camp Half-blood from atop Half-blood Hill. Despite the sadness in her heart over the loss of her best friend, Mia couldn't help but gaze out in awe at the site of this wondrous place. "I've never seen anything like it.." She whispered out to the wind. Mia adjusted her glasses before holding her hand out, palm up, and concentrates as she activates her newly discovered powers and begins forming a small, perfectly shaped diamond out of ice. She gazes down at it with intrigue as she slowly turns the diamond over in her hand, examining every facet of her creation.
    This is so cool... I can't believe i can do this, it's awesome! she encloses it in her palm and squeezes, creating snow out of the ice diamond. She giggles to herself as she focuses her mind, causing the snow to swirl into a small tornado on her palm. "Wow..." she whispered to herself in amazement. Mia lifts her palm up in front of her face and gently blows onto the tornado, causing it  float off into the wind, as it continues to spiral.

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    Post by Morgan Landry 3/9/2014, 3:33 am

    Even though this is WIP, I'm commenting on the powers since you asked me to.

    I wouldn't allow her to be immune to all cold temperature. Mainly because of the absolute 0. Just say she's resistent to cold.

    No to the unlimited amount of ice, despite the small size. Just say how many times she can create ice per day, but leave the maximum. Same for snow.

    Also, do the creations stay like that forever, and could she be able to create them in a very hot area like, let's say, Saharah or so?

    The rest is good.
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    Post by zanematthews 3/9/2014, 3:42 am

    Edited :) and please feel free to comment if you see anything else in the app that needs to change
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    Post by Morgan Landry 3/9/2014, 5:42 am

    The limits are too much. Please tone them down to twelve small creations, five larger creations; twelve small objects of condensed snow and five larger objects.

    You say she creates weapons: what weapons? How big could they be, maximum?

    I wouldn't allow the white specks in her eyes, I'm sorry about that.

    How long is her dagger?

    Every demigod has an armor, at least for Capture-the-Flag.

    Excellent artist> drawing, painting, sculpting....?

    Poor eyesight> myopic, astigmatic, long-sighted?

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    Post by zanematthews 3/9/2014, 12:15 pm

    awww... but the specks would've looked soooo good :(
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    Post by Morgan Landry 3/10/2014, 4:03 am

    I know, I'm sorry, but it was not natural.
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    Post by zanematthews 3/10/2014, 10:48 am

    Is it good now? or does it need editing again?
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    Post by Morgan Landry 3/10/2014, 12:18 pm

    I doubt a leather tunic would suffice as an armor.

    It would be nice if you could add two more talents.

    How did her father know she was there? Why did he wait so long to come and see her?

    Also, a pit scorpion is something super tiny that can jump very high. How did William hold it off?

    I'd rather have her claimed through a hologram to be honest.

    The rest looks good.
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    Post by zanematthews 3/10/2014, 12:25 pm

    The tunic might not be much armor, but she prefers not to use any. It weighs her down, and is really bulky so she hates it. lol and i wanted more talents but i couldn't think of any XD
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    Post by Morgan Landry 3/10/2014, 12:37 pm

    Every demigod has an armor, at least for Capture the Flag.

    Talents> Running? Swimming? Fighting? Skiing? Snowboarding? Climbing? You said she's an artist: painting, drawing sculpting?
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    Post by zanematthews 3/10/2014, 1:09 pm

    lol yea ^^ that's the only reason i included the tunic at all lol and i already put down the art styles.
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    Post by Morgan Landry 3/10/2014, 2:10 pm

    By 'armor' I meant stuff like breast plate, helmet with horse hair crest, leg pieces and so on ;) All celestial bronze of course.

    Morgan Landry wrote:How did her father know she was there? Why did he wait so long to come and see her?

    Also, a pit scorpion is something super tiny that can jump very high. How did William hold it off?

    I'd rather have her claimed through a hologram to be honest.
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    Post by zanematthews 3/10/2014, 2:13 pm

    ohhh lol well leather tunics are consider armor XD how about if i just change it to a simple Celestial Bronze breastplate?
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    Post by Kendall 3/10/2014, 2:59 pm

    For her race/ethnicity, specify -- is she of French descent? German? English?

    How did Mia get her kitten?

    Add a bit more to her LBCHB concerning her childhood -- how did her stepfather treat her? Did she do well in school, and did she see any "strange' (normal for a demigod, I'd suppose) things happen? (And so on.)

    When she uses her power, does the ice melt at normal rates (as in, as it normally would for the temperature), or does it melt 1/2, 1/4, etc as fast as it normally would?

    The most she has ever created in one day is 12 small creations, 5 large creations under 3 feet, or 12 small objects of condensed snow, and 5 large objects.

    For this quote, are the "5 large creations under 3 feet" smaller than the "large creations" you listed at the end?
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    Post by zanematthews 3/10/2014, 3:13 pm

    Edited. And to your question about the quote, They're the same exact size. Condensing snow into ice is just faster and less taxing for Mia than creating it herself.
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