Raven Kenric-Briareus

 
Full Name:Raven Eliza Kenric. Her last name, Kenric, means "fearless leader". Her mother had chosen her middle name since it is a shortened version of her first name while her father had chosen her first name; no one knows why. Her friends call her Rave and, to annoy her, Guppy.
 
Gender:As female as a female can get.
 
Age:17 years of age
 
Date of Birth:Born on Friday, October 13, 1997
 
Place of Birth:Wembley, a city in an area in northwest London, England
 
Hometown:Her birth place, Wembley.
 
Last Residence:Salem, Massachusetts
 
Accent:A British accent. When she talks to her friends, it isn't very noticeable. But when she becomes angry or overly excited, it becomes heavy and clearer.
 
Race/Ethnicity:British(demigod)
 
Mortal Parent:Elizabeth Kenric, a British woman. Elizabeth was born into a wealthy English family but fled to Wembley after she discovered that she was arranged to marry someone she didn't love. Her mother worked as a bartender at a local bar at the moment. She has black hair and dull green eyes. Some people say that she is a bad parent but Raven believes that her mother is amazing. Elizabeth went slightly mad though after Briareus  left though. Most people believe that Raven got her unstable attitude from Elizabeth, their wild exteriors matching.
 
Godly Parent:Briareus, god of violent sea-storms. Her father posed as Aron, a mortal man with black hair and deep gray eyes. Her father had jumped her mother after they had exchanged small talk while Elizabeth was working. Two weeks later, Elizabeth found out that she was pregnant with Raven. Aron was informed and soon moved in with Elizabeth to help with the pregnancy. He soon left though a couple of days after Raven was born. Raven blames her father for her mothers crazies.
 
Skin Color:Her skin is very pale. Her skin doesn't tan easily, no matter how hard she's tried. Lucky for her, her skin doesn't burn easily, leaving her no trace of sunburns.
 
Hair Color:Her original hair color was a deep black. But when she was 14, her mother let her dye her highlights any color she wanted. She chose different shades of purple, it being her favorite color. But she had applied to much to her hair, most of the black in her hair turned a shade of purple. Some of the dye had does down, more black showing than before. Luckily for her she likes her different colored hair.
 
Hair Length:The tip of Raven's hair ends at her mid waist. Her hair's style is long and wavy. It's usually either kept down with a hat on top or tied up in a messy ponytail.
 
Eye Color:Her eye color is unique in her eyes and she likes it. It's a mix between her fathers and her mothers. The color around the pupil is a greenish gray, making it have a kaleidoscope look.
 
Height:6 feet
 
Body Type:Raven has an hourglass figure. She exercised a lot, making her body lean and athletic.
 
Weight:160 pounds
 
Appearence:Even though Raven doesn't realizes it, many people find her look pretty, in a mysterious way. Her head is nice and round, not a freckle in sight. Her eyes are narrow, sometimes compared to a cats eye. Her lips are plump and small, her nose medium sized. There's a faint scar over her left eye after a skateboarding accident when she was 13. She has a piercing under her lip.
 
Skills/Talents:Raven is a top notch skateboarder. Her mother had let her take lessons since she was 11 as a birthday present. At first, she was a little rough around the edges(a rock had gotten in her path and she fell off her board and was cut above her eye when she was 13), but now she's skating and performing tricks with ease.
Along with skateboarding, Raven is an amazing swimmer. Before she came to CHB, she was the captain of the girls swim team. Her teammates always said that she could out swim an eel(they were joking of course). But it always puzzled some of them when they would see her disappear under the water and won't resurface until after a couple of minutes.
Ravens a huge computer whiz. When it comes to computers, she's got you covered. Whether it's fixing or programing(sometimes a little hacking), no ones better than Raven.  
 
Pet(s):Angel, her Chinese koifish. This playful little guy spends his time swimming and napping when ever Ravens busy. Raven loves him to pieces, though she wished she could take him out of the bowl once and awhile.  
 
Powers:One of Ravens powers is that she can breath underwater. She can manages to stay breathing for about 44 minutes the max before she needs to resurface. She can do this 5 times a day and has to wait 90 minutes in between.
Another power of Ravens is that she can create storms. She can make the wind speeds pick up to 55 miles per hr. Calm waters turn rough and dangerous. The maximum damage she can create is that the winds can cause old, weak trees to fall down and tear the roofs off old buildings. The storm covers 78 yds around her. She can do this 1 time a day, for it takes much of her energy.
 
Weapon:A retractable spear, the tip made of celestial bronze and the stuck part made of oak wood. It has the length of 25 inches and Ravwn can throw it to about 34 ft. She also has a retractable sword, she calls it Dipper(don't ask). It's made of celestial bronze as well and is 17 inches of length. It can retract into a clickable pen and can fit nicely in a jean pocket.
 
Armor:Raven prefers light armor so it's easier to move in. She wears a celestial bronze breastplate that she ties tight around her body and a celestial bronze helmet that covers her forehead, ears, and nose. The shoulder blades are outlined with a dark blue, the trim of the helmet outlined as well. On the back of her breastplate is the carving of a water dragon is had the forgers imprint on the armor.
 
Personality:Ravens a wild storm herself. Always on the move, always joking, never serious. Her wild personality is always confusing to some people, they can't really get to know her with out Ravens reckless behavior. She hyperactive so don't be surprised if you see her running around the camp at full speed or talking nonstop. Her reackless behavior causes her to do many stupid things but she doesn't realize their stupid. According to her, it's "I not being stupid, it's called having fun. You should try it." She's one who's easy to talk too, most of the time. There are the times where she's bored(which is a lot, she gets bored easily). She's one who will go up to a person and be a buddy buddy with them, even if the person hates her or doesn't know her. But when she's angrey, her once happy and cheerful face turns sour and there could be a forecast for a storm coming by.
 
Strengths:Ravens not left handed or right handed, she ambidextrous. It means that she can write with both hands and not one is weaker than the other. Her bubbly personality helps her makes friends a lot, despite the fact that people think she's a loner because of her appearance. She's very strong and is very good at combat, finding it easy to dodge opponents attacks due to her slim form. Her helpful nature makes her an easy pick for a team for Capture the Flag, she's always helping defend the flag or aiding people in fights to acquire the others teams'. Her hearing is better than her vision, she can hear whispers from conversations that are farther than someone sitting next to her.
 
Weaknesses:Her reckless behavior causes her much trouble. Her wild nature gets her into many accidents, leaving some injuries. Her left leg is weaker than her right leg after another skateboarding accident, this one was at camp when she was 15. She can never sit still or not talk for even 2 minutes, leaving her to squirm whenever she is told to do, irritating done people.
 
Likes:Skateboarding, video games, swimming, computers, funny jokes, having fun, Plain White Tees, and Lorde
 
Dislikes:Boring people, sitting still, libraries, books, coffee, and classical music
 
Flaws:
-Ravens over emotional . The slightest mistake in anything she does makes her extremely frustrated. If anyone just starts teasing her a little bit, she'll become very mad. The slightest happy thing that happens to her makes her scream out for joy. Some people find it very annoying.
-Ravens can get paranoid very easily. The slightest thing, a bad fortune cookie reading for example, makes her extremely caustious, which she tried to change but can't.
-Ravens eyesight isn't the best. She can't see far away objects but she refuses to get glasses, she thinks there too dorky. Even if she did have glasses, she would still be falling into places, for she doesn't watch where she is walking.
-She's absent minded and will end up forgetting things that someone just told her to do, earning her much trouble.
-People say she's too childlike. She denies it even though it's totally true.
 
Physical Flaw
-Her nose is too flat for her liking
-Her right eye is not as focused as her left eye. It'll veer of to the right at certain times, like a lazy eye.
 
Fears:She has Arsonphobia, which is the fear of fire.
 
Social Status:Raven may look like a loner but she has a lot of friends. She's not one of the popular girls but she's not an outcast or loner. She's in the middle with a moderate group of friends. But she's not always liked.
 
Summer or Year Rounder:Year Rounder, though she spends one month out of camp to get out and about, on the rare occasions she'll visit her mother.
 
Years at CHB:2 years and a half
 
Life Before CHB:When Briareus  left, he left a small note that he made Elizabeth promise to give Ravwn when her 15th birthday came up, explaining how he was a god and she was a demigod. He also made Elizabeth promise that she wouldn't read it. But, a few days after Briareus left, Elizabeth disobeyed his wishes and read the note. She went into a state of shock after she realized that she had given birth to a demigod. Elizabeth hid the note away in the attic and instead made plans on making Raven as normal as possible.
When Raven started school, she was known as the crazy, "popular" girl. She hated being popular because she felt like she wasn't herself. She remained being popular until 3rd grade, when she snuck onto the school roof and released a bunch of water balloons filled with ketchup onto her "friends", who just so happened to be wearing white that day. Ever since then, she chose who she hung out with and never, ever considered herself as popular.
During the begging of middle school, she was suspended from her school in Wembley because she had already reached a max limit for detentions in just 3 months. Her mother decided that she would move the family away and they packed their things and headed to Salem, Massachusetts. There, Raven was considered popular again but she let it slide since she liked her new friends.
On her 15th birthday, she was cleaning the attic when she found the note that her mother was supposed to give her from her father. She believed every word of it and was outraged at her mother for not telling her. Raven soon packed her things and ran off to find Camp half Blood, using the map her father had located in the letter. She arrived 2 weeks after.
 
RP Example:The sunlight peeked through the window, shining on Raven's pale face. The girl's eyes instantly shot open, revealing ther kaleidoscope look. The girl instantly shot up, throwing the covers off her bed. Her feet scampered against the cold wood of her cabin as she made a beeline to the window. Outside, every camper was going to their fay routines of training and learning, not for Ravens taste. A smile broke out on the girls face of she started jumping up and down, squealing. Today was her favorite lesson, her cabin was having a swimming lesson with the Demeter cabin.
Dashing to her wardrobe, she threw the doors open, revealing her clothes. Raven tossed aside her pajamas- an oversized t shirt and some shorts- and threw on her purple two piece bathing suit. So she wouldn't get cold later on, she threw on a black t-shirt that had one of her favorite skateboarding companies logo on it, Birdhouse. Her denim short replaced her pajama shorts and she added a yellow belt to add some color. Her high tips were laced up, her right shoe was purple and her left one was blue. Tying her hair into a messy ponytail, she dashed out the front door.

"Good Morning!" She cried to no one in particular, her English accent appearing out of no where. She earned some odd stares but she didn't seem to notice as she ran all the way to the beach.
 
Notes:Word Count-2251 words(2191 without the original 60)

Lower the length of breathing underwater

The fastest speed for wind is 55 mph for us.

"Elizabeth went slightly mad though after Deimos left though" -- isn't her father Briareus?

ADHD is a common flaw for demigods. Please add one more.

Edited

Keep lowering the length of breathing underwater.

Re edited

If you are going to use the maximum mph for the storms, make it one time a day.

Edited

"She can do this 1 time a day, for it takes much of her energy, and has to wait 4 and a half hrs in between."

This doesn't make any sense. If you can do it one time a day, then you have to wait at least 24 hours...? Don't put that in though. Just put one time a day.

Edited

Hi!

∆ For the storm, what is the maximum damage she could inflict and how much space on ground does the storm cover?

∆ Does she have natural physical flaws?

Edited

I would say no to many trees, how about old, weak trees?

The rest looks good to me.

Edited

Approved! You got awarded 1100 drachmas!