summer Andrews-Ares

Name:Summer Andrews
Age:14
Gender:female
Eyes: Unique blue. Sometimes the color of sky, color never seen in normal eye color.
Hair: long dark blonde  
Height:5'5
Body Type: curvy
Skin Color:  tan
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Deana Andrews
Country of Origin : USA
Pets:horse she had it when she lived with her mom, cockatiel. live at camp.
Talents: drawing, growing things, talking to crowds, riding horses.
Weapon**:sword. celestial bronze. a foot long
Personality:Quirky, Quiet, always wanting to be the best,good at manipulating, nice but also has a temper. She'l do anything for her friends. Wants to punch anyone that makes her mad. doesn't care if she ever gets in trouble.
Flaws: Will do anything for friends, have a temper, clumsy.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can summon the skeletons who are devoted to Ares. They stay for ten minuets,They do not re-pare themselves because its the rule that Ares has.can summon three (skeletons ), every three hours, can call them five times a day,  They use swords.
Life Before Camp*: Lived at home ran away when she was 10 because mother scared her. Her mom would talk crazy and was always drunk plus abusive. Life after that was just as hard but she manage to steal a couple of things, but one time when she got caught they sent her to a orphanage instead of being sent home because her mom disowns her, didn't go to a foster home because no one wanted her. So she was on the street for a year. After a while she got annoyed at the people there so she ran away again at 11, could only stand them for a year. Until she found a satyr when she was about to get attacked by the monster, without knowing he was one she befriended him and he convened her to got to camp half-blood. The satyr found her after she left the orphanage. The reason no one went after her was because no one wanted to mess with her, when they looked at her she'd sneer at them.
RP Example*:She walks out of the cafe having a feeling someone is watching her. She walks into a ally were she could corner the person and attack. A boy(the satyr) bumps into her as she is going into the ally. She shoves him into the ground and walks away. She waits for the person to come into the ally. A huge dark figure walks into the ally blocking any escape. As it charges her and she charges it that's when her satyr friend walks in and kills it.
Any notes about your characters:

What do you mean by her eye color? How is her blue "unique"?

Do all her pets live at home or camp? Normally we ask only for pets she has at camp.

How is talking a talent?

Is her sword celestial bronze? How long is it?

Add more to the personality -- it should be at least 2 lines long.

Add another flaw.

No to the gift of Ares power if you mean the blessing of Ares (like the one Clarisse got in The Last Olympian).

Life Before Camp and RP Example should both be at least 5 complete sentences long, so please add more to them.

Also, could you please delete the Legacy Form section under your character notes? You might have accidentally copied too much in the form topic.

i edit it.

How can she be both nice and mean?

I think you mean celestial bronze for the sword.

No to the power. She can be talented, but she cant win everything.

there.

Manipulation is not an Ares power; you could say in her personality/talents that she's very good at being manipulative, but it's not an Ares child power.

At what age did Summer run away from her mother, and then how old was she when she ran away from the orphanage? Why did her mother scare her?

did it.

Was her horse just one she adopted from the cabin stables, then?

Add a bit more to personality.

For her powers: How many ghosts and skeletons can she summon per day? How long do they stay with her? Do the skeletons repair themselves if destroyed? How does she summon them?

When she ran away at age 8, how long did she stay on the streets until she was sent to the orphanage? (And why was she sent to an orphanage instead of placed in, say, a foster home? Unless you mean her mom died a little after she left.) How long was she again on the streets after running away from the orphanage, until the satyr found her?

did it.

I'm gonna say no to her just finding a random horse in the wild. You can say she adopted a horse from the camp stables, though.

Powers:
- The skeletons/ghosts must leave after a certain time limit -- say, five minutes.
- What's the cooldown period between usages of her summoning power?
- How many of either/both can she summon at one time?
- How many times can the skeletons repair themselves if damaged?
- Do the skeletons come from a certain time period (ie: Civil War era)?

I don't think an 8 year old would have been able to survive on the streets for a year? She would probably have been caught much earlier. Also, how/where did the satyr find her?

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You need a specific time limit the skeletons can stay. You also need a limit as to how many she can summon at once; new ones can't pop up immediately to replace fallen ones. How many times can the skeletons repair themselves? (Would ghosts be able to fight? If they get too close to a living human wouldn't they dissipate?)

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Powers:
- How many ghosts/skeletons can she summon each time?
- Again, how many times would the skeletons repair themselves?
- Are there certain ways to prevent the skeletons from repairing themselves, such as crushing them or cutting off the head?
- ... Are you sure the ghosts wouldn't dissipate if they get too close to people?
- What kinds of weapons do her skeletons and ghosts have?

So, you're saying her timeline is:
- ran away at age 10
- was caught a year later and sent to the orphanage
- escaped at age 10 --> Wouldn't she be 11 years old by now?
- found by satyr --> How soon did the satyr find her, and where?

there

You still need to answer these:
- Again, how many times would the skeletons repair themselves?
- Are there certain ways to prevent the skeletons from repairing themselves, such as crushing them or cutting off the head?
- What kinds of weapons do her skeletons have?

I'm going to say no to her using ghosts; based on a brief skimming of Battle of the Labyrinth they wouldn't be able to really get anywhere close enough to the victims to hurt them without dissipating.

Are you sure nobody caught her for an entire year while out on the streets? Like, it'd be pretty suspicious having a ten year old running around alone a lot.

ok

Approved.